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SweetMonia — ef - A Fairy Tale Of Lolita

Published: 2013-05-31 03:51:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1473; Favourites: 87; Downloads: 6
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Description Many of you may probably know how much I like ef and the uniform in it, I drew Kurumi in it before, and now it is Lolita's turn to wear it, I like the feeling in happiness she has in here, that's the least I could do to her after making her extremely bored in my last artwork, loool^^
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nomnom210 [2013-05-31 19:48:14 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


This

is so

pretty. a.deviantart.net/avatars/f/a/f… " alt=" " title="fangasmingplz" />

Although the hands are a little awkward, that does not effect the picture in a bad way. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

I have absolutely no idea where to start!

I love what you did with her hair! The curly hair matches the beautifully colored water. And the hair is beautifully colored as well.

How you do skies is a wonder to everyone. a.deviantart.net/avatars/o/o/o… " alt=" " title="ooohplz" /> Seriously, how do you color skies? It's very realistic and amazing.

Lolita's uniform goes with her stockings (or whatever they're called) quite well! The outfit is very pretty.

I like the simplicity of the surface Lolita is walking on, compared to the more complex background.

I am too awe-stricken to say anything else, except for you to keep drawing! a.deviantart.net/avatars/k/o/k… " alt=" " title="konataplz" />

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SweetMonia In reply to nomnom210 [2013-06-01 14:53:10 +0000 UTC]

Yaaay, nomnom liked my new artwork^^

I used a reference to draw one of the hands, and I drew the other after posing my hand, what exactly makes them look awkward?

Glad you like the hair, I have had a bad time making it look like that, but it was a very great experience^^

I used a lot of strokes to make the sky like that, this is not really the first time I draw it to be honest, I wish I could tell you in a better way how I made it^^

I didn't design the uniform by the way, it is from the VN "ef - A Fairy Tale Of The Two", which has an Anime under the name "ef- A Tale Of Memories". I made her stockings mismatch the uniform a little bit to make it look like she wore the uniform instead of her normal clothes, since she is not an ef character after all, but black goes with everything so.... ^^

I drew that from an ef picture as well, probably rooftops aren't supposed to be complicated :>

I will surely draw much better drawings than this one, I already announced my next artwork on my profile. You forgot to tell me one important thing, did I improve this time? And by how much?^^

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nomnom210 In reply to SweetMonia [2013-06-01 16:23:55 +0000 UTC]

Yaaaaaaaay!

It's quite hard to draw hands, even if you use a reference. Don't worry!

Cool!

It's okay, I understand what you mean.

Ehehe. ^ w ^ The anime sounds nice, I might try watching it later.

Ya, I see.

O u O I can't wait to see it!♥

You're always improving, so there's no need for me to tell you. ♪

Have you used the soft ware that I have told you about? Do you like it? ☺

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SweetMonia In reply to nomnom210 [2013-06-03 11:18:03 +0000 UTC]

mhmm^^

Okay then, I will just keep on trying on drawing them.

Great!

Please do! It is my favorite romance Anime of all time.

Yup.

And I can't wait to release it, I plan to beat my "Lilly & Lolita" artwork with that one^^

But reminding me of it is a good thing, but you don't have to do that

I am sorry, I still didn't, I downloaded it but I didn't try it yet, I have been really lazy lately

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nomnom210 In reply to SweetMonia [2013-06-03 19:23:34 +0000 UTC]

Yep!

Yaay!

Mmhmmmmmmmm.

Okay, but I'm really really lazy so I might watch later.

Yus.

Yay!!!!!!!!

Okie,

Okie, I understand.

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SweetMonia In reply to nomnom210 [2013-06-07 21:59:37 +0000 UTC]

It is okay, watch it whenever you feel like it.

And phew~

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nomnom210 In reply to SweetMonia [2013-06-07 23:20:53 +0000 UTC]

Okie.

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danno151 [2013-07-11 06:47:31 +0000 UTC]

Nice!

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KingdomOfSkyThrone [2013-07-11 01:25:04 +0000 UTC]

this is kawaii

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YaraZ [2013-07-10 19:22:54 +0000 UTC]

It is very cute!

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Kichiara-Rosane [2013-07-10 18:01:41 +0000 UTC]

I saw this picture advertised on deviant art! It's so cute!

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Pentaro22 [2013-07-10 17:59:45 +0000 UTC]

This is soooo sweet! I almost died of cuteness!!!

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Skullclaw [2013-07-10 14:19:44 +0000 UTC]

She is SO Cute

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TheBleedingSoul123 [2013-07-10 13:35:09 +0000 UTC]

I wanna draw anime like yours

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mikingjay [2013-07-10 11:18:14 +0000 UTC]

I<3 MANGA

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Tsuki222 [2013-07-10 07:18:37 +0000 UTC]

Cuteness overload! X3

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KisaSohma10 [2013-07-03 05:01:27 +0000 UTC]

oh my god!!!!!! I love this so cute

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SweetMonia In reply to KisaSohma10 [2013-07-07 12:18:47 +0000 UTC]

I am glad you like it Kisa~

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KisaSohma10 In reply to SweetMonia [2013-07-07 22:03:01 +0000 UTC]

aw shucks!

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SoulKorra146 [2013-07-03 00:49:17 +0000 UTC]

Cute!:3

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SweetMonia In reply to SoulKorra146 [2013-07-07 12:18:55 +0000 UTC]

Merci Korra!!!

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WinxClubForever45 [2013-07-02 20:30:15 +0000 UTC]

Very Beautiful.

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SweetMonia In reply to WinxClubForever45 [2013-07-07 12:19:11 +0000 UTC]

Merci WinxClubForever!

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mariogamer3425 [2013-07-02 17:17:20 +0000 UTC]

that's cute!

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SweetMonia In reply to mariogamer3425 [2013-07-07 12:19:29 +0000 UTC]

Merci Mario!

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mariogamer3425 In reply to SweetMonia [2013-07-07 15:49:42 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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arulie [2013-07-02 07:48:32 +0000 UTC]

ah monia!! you've improved so much on a lot in this one!! ;7; I'd like to point out the wonderful folds and the better anatomy(not saying that your previous works had bad anatomy, just saying that this one has a better anatomy) keep on improving dear ^^

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SweetMonia In reply to arulie [2013-07-07 12:21:29 +0000 UTC]

Merci for point that out Arulie, I have been focusing more on anatomy lately, so that's what I wanted to hear from people here on Deviant Art. I will do my best to improve more, and merci again~

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arulie In reply to SweetMonia [2013-07-21 10:57:22 +0000 UTC]

ah that's great I'm sure you will become a great artist in the future if you keep on practicing now

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dotdi [2013-06-26 12:36:03 +0000 UTC]

cool

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SweetMonia In reply to dotdi [2013-07-07 12:21:35 +0000 UTC]

mhmm :3

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RedFox114 [2013-06-04 19:51:05 +0000 UTC]

COOL! HOW DO YOU MAKE SKIES AND HANDS?!?!?

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SweetMonia In reply to RedFox114 [2013-06-07 22:03:57 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it was done using Photoshop~

And merci for the watch!!!

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Pascal93 [2013-05-31 17:40:48 +0000 UTC]

datz a rili nys pees ov art, shii luks rili hppi, gud job dood!!

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SweetMonia In reply to Pascal93 [2013-06-01 14:36:15 +0000 UTC]

I like the "looks really happy" part, and merci love <3

And as you know, "dood" means worms in Arabic : P

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Pascal93 In reply to SweetMonia [2013-06-01 15:27:39 +0000 UTC]

no dats "duud" stooopid =w=

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Neoconvoy [2013-05-31 17:06:30 +0000 UTC]

Awww so cute!

Nice work!

I suggest to check the length of the left arm, and the shadows of her uniform, these seem very sharp.

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SweetMonia In reply to Neoconvoy [2013-06-01 14:45:00 +0000 UTC]

And forgot to say, I made the left hand a bit short because it is going a bit toward the viewer, an thought it would be bad to make the length normal.

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Neoconvoy In reply to SweetMonia [2013-06-01 14:56:04 +0000 UTC]

BUt the figure is almost facing front. That works better when the angle is more pronounced.

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SweetMonia In reply to Neoconvoy [2013-06-01 15:03:55 +0000 UTC]

I think you got a point there, I stand corrected.

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SweetMonia In reply to Neoconvoy [2013-06-01 14:35:10 +0000 UTC]

Merci Neo, I am very glad you liked it :3

I wasn't really sure what's the best approach to shade the uniform, making the shade more detailed or smoothing it even more, but I think I want to keep it sharp, soft shades are great but I did many of those, so the priority goes to the new things, even if they proved to be wrong later

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THE-FURY23ci [2013-05-31 14:37:15 +0000 UTC]

vraiment je kiff beaucoup ce type de dessin super réaliste est cool

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SweetMonia In reply to THE-FURY23ci [2013-06-01 14:39:55 +0000 UTC]

Merci à toi Fury, c'est l'un des deux types de dessins que j'aime faire^^

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zuln [2013-05-31 10:12:01 +0000 UTC]

I love what you did to the hair I'm totally in love with your work

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SweetMonia In reply to zuln [2013-06-01 14:33:17 +0000 UTC]

It was partly your idea, and I can't imagine standing by the seaside and not getting much wind so...^^

And that's great! Because I started working on another artwork you will definitely like. There's an announcement in the status section of my profile if you would like to check it out^^

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zuln In reply to SweetMonia [2013-06-01 14:39:27 +0000 UTC]

glad you liked it I have a lot in my mid
can I draw your OC please I'll credit you in the description

oh ok I'll check it out

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SweetMonia In reply to zuln [2013-06-01 14:58:30 +0000 UTC]

Me too, I have a lot of ideas for year, but I was never good enough in drawing to show them to people^^

Of course! And make sure you show it to me, ne?

Great!

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zuln In reply to SweetMonia [2013-06-01 15:10:19 +0000 UTC]

its ok I understand that

of course I'll show it to you I like your comments

I didn't find it on your page

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SweetMonia In reply to zuln [2013-06-01 15:45:56 +0000 UTC]

mhmm

That' great! What do you like about my comments if I may ask :3

It is below my profile picture at the right section, there's a small text that starts with Status, and that's where the announcement is : )

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zuln In reply to SweetMonia [2013-06-01 15:59:54 +0000 UTC]



hmmm ok well first of all you are one of the few people that reply my comment and second I feel like talking to one of my friend

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