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Published: 2013-02-14 08:47:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 1911; Favourites: 62; Downloads: 9
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Introducing Lolita de Calémia:-:Lolita de Calémia(or Lolita Caramel) is a Miémorrinian Ojou-sama that has been raised with dignity, there's not much information I can tell about her since I made a manga for her in the future, and I don't want to spoil it on any of you, so I will just share the following information about her now:-
Age:-12.
Favorite colors:- Purple, Violet.
Favorite book:- Les Trois Musketaire
Languages she speaks:- Arabic, French and very little English.
Her ideal:- Her mother, madame Lillia Gomgomjey.
Favorite Animal:- Parrots.
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Ah. Hello it's me again!
First of all, She is very cute. But still needs some improvement.
Her feet needs alignment. So maybe you should keep her feet aligned despite her trying to reach books. The pose is very fine. Nothing to improve about it.
For the face, her nose should be a little bit low. What I meant is not too close to the eyes. The "rear" view should have been better if it was a "side" view. Her eyes are perfect! I like it! Or maybe instead of moving his nose a little bit, try giving it shape to make it more obvious.
The dress fits her very well. "Pink" maybe symbolizes her of being girly, maybe? The frills also suits her! Her shoes are pretty, also the socks..
Her impression is okay. But try to give her a bit of "trying hard" face to make it look like she is having a hard time reaching it.
The colors are fine. But try blending up some colors in order to give it a stunning look..
As always, Keep up the good work! Try to improve!
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Hello again Andie, nice to see a critique from you again, and sorry for the late reply :/
I agree with you about the feet, as I said, I had a problem with them a while ago, I still do at times, but not to the degree I used to.
Again, I agree with you about the nose position, and I am still not sure if I should give it a shape, but adding a shade to it can make it looks much better I think.... I side view would indeed look more natural for most people, but I choose that one because it shows the details of her hair & dress better, she is supposed to be picking the books while thinking of something.
I am glad you think so, the dress is purple by the way, which is her favorite color.
I disagree with you about the "Hard Face" look, the book she is picking isn't that that far for her to reach, but I think that look would look cute one her :3
What do you mean by "try blending up some color"?
Will do! Thank you for the critique, I think I learned a few things from it^^
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Oh, actually what I meant to say was to blend them.. Maybe something like, adding different shades.. I don't expect much but your art will do. ^_^ Thanks for accepting the critique
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You are welcome! And I agree with you about adding different shades part, that will happen in the future, don't worry ;D
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First of all, I would like to apologize for the late reply, I haven't been around lately so many comments left unreplied to.
You compliment on my designing techniques touched me more than anything you said in the positive sections, I am very glad you liked my the hair, I think I could do it better, because I actually did and my computer crashed and I lost the artwork file, so I had to start working on the piece once again, yeah a sad story.
I agree, not just because they are long, but because I spend more time than necessary in drawing them, but that's slowly changing, if my information are correct, I think the fingers should be of the same length as the rest of the hand, ne?
I am not really sure about the mouth and the nose shading, but it won't hurt me to try. I completely agree with you about the dress shading being a bit too much, I sensed that when I was working on it but I let that go.
I hope so too, and again, I highly appreciate the critique, and I assure you, it is one of the things that will push me forward and help me make an even better artworks^^
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I see,actually the fingers are at the same length
I can't reply a long message because my computer doesn't allow me
Anyway I'm looking forward to it
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One of the hands is done right, but the other are not that good, I think.
What's wrong with your computer?
I will work harder to finish it sooner then~
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This is so adorable! ;u; It deserves more favorites and views ^0^/ I can't wait for the manga~ >u<
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Awwww, merci ponpon, and I am glad you liked this one^^
I don't know when I am going to release the manga, but I am looking forward for the day I make it :3
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mhmm, she is lovely, isn't she? ^^
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Merci Tsuki, glad you like it^^
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oh, she's really pretty waa~ can't wait for the manga
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Awwww, I am very glad you liked it pastel, I don't know when I am going to release a manga for her, but I will surely do something about that^^
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oh hopefully it comes out soon, I'm sure it'll be great
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Me too, how exactly do you expect it to be like?
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it would be great if all the pages are colored 
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I agree with you about the colored pages, but this will take all the time I have for me to make, so I won't go with it for now, black & white isn't that bad after all^^
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haha, yeah, I guess black and white would do
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Ahaha~ that's what I wanted to hear, I am already planning for the next one, which will hopefully be better than this one :3
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Indeed she is!!!
Merci for the appreciation
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Wow i've been waiting for this day...
You have such a beautiful art..
I wish you make this a lot more often...
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Merci Nya-nya, I am very glad you liked this one :3
I wish I could do more too, but I have many other things in my life. I try to spend more time drawing from time to time so I could finish artworks faster, and it works at times :S
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