HOME | DD
syairazi86 ā Memories in the Playground
Published: 2009-12-08 14:48:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 1394; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 54
Redirect to original
Description
Are you an active person when you're a kid? Do you make friends in the playground? Are you the bully in the playground? Are you the one who've been bullied?You will have the memories of the Playground.
Other Buildings and Architecture Photos
Other Landscape and Scenery Photos
My Gallery
Related content
Comments: 18
Indeed is this is a splendid piece. You've captured the clouds perfectly. The colours sit in very well with each other, in the sense that it's not fighting. Very basic colours you've chose here.
The shades come in at the right time which really makes things smooth.
You got the lines right as well, so much so that it's all pointing upwards. However, I think if you can tilt it a little to the left, to bring in a little of the perspective of the left most pole, it will be better.
There are 3 main 'e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/wā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
Overall, a good take. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
š: 0 ā©: 0
Well, what an interesting piece. You've captured something people see every day of their lives in such a way that makes it appear new and exciting. The sky is amazing and makes it look like a beam of light is shining down on the playgroud. It looks so beautiful, but in a weird way it looks slightly ghostly due to the appearance of being deserted. I adore the angle you've used which seems to give it a small child's view, it really takes the viewer back to their childhood and reminds you how things used to look. I think the picture would have benefit more if you'd have angled it to use the sky and the window at the top to their full potential. But other than that it's a fantastic picture. Great work.
š: 0 ā©: 1
What a wonderful picture! It made me look twice.
The angle of the picture is really what sets it apart from other pictures. Most people would try to capture the picture straight on, but you didn't make that mistake, you were creative, and because of that, you got 5 stars for technique! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
I really like the colors of the picture, not just the playground, but also the sky, and the clouds! You picked a very good day to go and take some pictures. The only thing that I would have changed a bit is that I would have changed the lighting a bit, just making the picture a bit brighter, but everyone has their own opinion. But it's still a magnificent picture! Good job!
Critic done by *ChibiMoonX from #Xpose-it
š: 0 ā©: 0
You must have sat on the ground or you are an eight year old!!
I love this shot it looks as though you have done this from a childs' eye view.
I feel as though I'm looking up at a great height, just as a child would, this is done to good effect.
The way you can look through the climbing frame at the water beyond has given depth to the whole scene and allows you to see further.
The Subject matter is beautiful it is full of colour, giving life to the picture.
It does bring back memories of child hood and I love it.
I like also the way that you have captured the clouds and sky line, it reminds me of the time I was on the round about looking up.
Again the feel in this photo is that you would actually be the child from within looking up at this great structure designed for pleasure.
A brilliant shot.
š: 0 ā©: 0
I like the colours in this photograph but other then that I don't think it's a very interesting piece. At first I was kind of like "well this is boring...oh wait are there children in there?"... Maybe if you had gotten a better angle of the kids or a closer view it might have been more interesting? OR maybe if you had done something with that circular hole in the roof and the brilliant blue sky... that would have been cool.
š: 0 ā©: 0
I love the perspective on this shot, makes it look like it's towering over you... like how everything seems so big when you're younger.
š: 0 ā©: 1
Thanks. I love the angle of this view because I want to have it the "feel" of being a kid again.
š: 0 ā©: 1
it def worked out well, great job!
š: 0 ā©: 0
Wow I never thought play ground equipment could be so beautiful. Such a perfect capture for young and old alike. Not only for the memories but memories being made.
The contrast between the sky and the playground is beautiful. There is so much detail to take in. True eye candy.The colors just burst out.
I can't even point out improvements.There crop is lovely just right to make the focus go right to the subject of the image.
Lovely Capture!
š: 0 ā©: 1
Thank You soo much! Just the Critiques I need! Full and Detailed. You're the best!
š: 0 ā©: 0
I have many memories of the playground...all of them good...and this photo reminds me of them.
š: 0 ā©: 2
If only, I have my own photo at the playground when I was a kid.
š: 0 ā©: 0
All good? That's great!
When I took this photo. I sat down for a while and I remembered how I made friends from the playground.
š: 0 ā©: 0