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Published: 2010-10-17 01:33:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 352; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 22
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"They say it skins most of its victims alive. Nasty piece of work."A creature from a short horror story I've written. I've decided that after he kills you, you steals your soul, and brings it to a realm of horrors. What's in there? I can't say. You just your let your imagination work up an explanation.
www.creepypasta.com/horsehead/
NAME: Unknown
NICKNAMES/TITLES: Horsehead, The Flayer, Soul Taker
AGE: Unknown
HEIGHT: 12' 5''
WEIGHT: Unknown
EYES: White
HAIR: Black
ALLIANCE: None
BIRTHPLACE: Unknown
THREATΒ LEVEL: Extreme
ABILITIES: Can appear just about anywhere; Seemingly impervious to physical harm; Incredible strength; Is said to be able to steal souls; Can incinerate or rotΒ flesh with its touch; Can breathe a black mist that causes skin to slide off the bone
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Comments: 10
Very interesting, I think the horse skull gives it a much more haunting look than a human skull would.
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I agree, something about horse skulls are so creepy. Of course, I prefer the new version to either of the old ones, but I won't get to coloring him for a while yet.
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I see, I wish more people would use animal skulls for creepy undead, I think human skulls have been overplayed (to put it light).
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I wouldn't disagree, though I do love me some regular ole' skulls on occasion. Also, coulda sworn I had the story for this guy uploaded here.
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Yeah. This may be an outdated version though.
www.creepypasta.com/horsehead/
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You gonna post an updated version anytime soon?
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I honestly don't remember if that was the most recent or not XD Been awhile since I checked that post. Reception seems mostly positive, although grammar complaints are common, which is totally understandable. Should put this pic up with it. Probably would've helped.
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Yeah also you may want to look it over yourself or get a beta reader.
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Potentially. Don't do a lot of writing though, so we'll see.
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