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Fabbityfabfab [2006-10-09 03:11:22 +0000 UTC]
All I can say is awesome!
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sylvacoer In reply to DranineStone [2006-09-19 02:32:35 +0000 UTC]
Yep, we can always count of toph to say exactly the right thinga t the right time in exactly the wrong tone of voice. (*^-^*)
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Murgatroyd [2006-08-17 23:31:14 +0000 UTC]
Good action, excellent imagery, accurate characterization, and one astronomical impossibility that took a while to recover from.
The new moon can never be rising as the sun sets. At the new moon, both celestial bodies are in very close to the same position in the sky. The only time the moon rises as the sun sets is at full moon.
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sylvacoer In reply to Murgatroyd [2006-08-18 03:37:27 +0000 UTC]
? What's the impossiblity? Did it ruin the fic for you?
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shrike85 [2006-07-19 12:30:44 +0000 UTC]
Realistic and in character.
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Darkbutterfly137 [2006-07-17 08:50:11 +0000 UTC]
very nice, realistic and in character.
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Darkbutterfly137 In reply to sylvacoer [2006-07-19 04:01:46 +0000 UTC]
agreed. I can't write Zutara worth my life, but I love reading it.
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sylvacoer In reply to SingingFlames [2006-07-13 02:39:39 +0000 UTC]
(*^-^*) Thanks, hon - If enough people do like it, I suppose I'm obligated to continue...
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BeakyGirl16 [2006-07-13 02:23:06 +0000 UTC]
Wow! This is really nice! Are you going to be writing more?
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ShinkuNoTenshi [2006-07-13 01:57:12 +0000 UTC]
-grins- I so wanted Katara to whip the floor with him. ^_^ I love Zuko but he can be a pompus ass at times.
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