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synchrochick007 — Palpitations by-nd
Published: 2008-04-01 01:18:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 318; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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Description Palpitations of the chest
in effigy, manifest
as petals from the magnolia tree

caught by wind currents, aroma
floating upwards, merry be
spiraling; pungent; asymmetry

filing open cavities, ethereal
peaceful thoughts of spring
spread a serial air of lightness


tentatively across the ground
and settle upon a whim
leaving a trail
of what once was
or could have been
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Comments: 7

elle-sophocles [2008-04-22 07:00:30 +0000 UTC]

this is so bright and clear. you really do sound like a classic poet.

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synchrochick007 In reply to elle-sophocles [2008-04-22 17:35:58 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much

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Duvidoo [2008-04-05 19:20:11 +0000 UTC]

Wonderfully evocative. Kudos, David

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xiangrei [2008-04-04 01:53:17 +0000 UTC]

caught by wind currents, aroma
floating upwards, merry be

This is a very good line

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synchrochick007 In reply to xiangrei [2008-04-04 02:33:35 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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RenderedHelpless [2008-04-02 02:06:33 +0000 UTC]

You have a lovely poetic voice; very eloquent.

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synchrochick007 In reply to RenderedHelpless [2008-04-02 03:56:47 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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