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Published: 2007-07-15 17:57:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 288; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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The sea so cold, and soothing tooExtending out to limitless blue
Gently caresses the curves of sand
And licks the lips that lead to land.
Waves beating with a shared heart,
Washing away worries and pain apart
Slowly ebbs against silver clouds
And with the tranquil wind it ploughs.
Footprints in the sand trail away,
With virgin infants mind of stay
Disappearing into the watery end
Left never to be filled again
Smooth limbs taunt of eager bowstring,
Curious senses embracing gull’s sing
Rising and falling, in time it breathes
Taking and bringing from its guest, it leaves.
The tide has come and gone at last
Leaving only footprints of times past
Slightly changed from those that came
But to onlookers they remain the same.
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Comments: 18
i love beaches. it's too damn cold to go to the beach here! silly newspaper, i think this rocks!
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I love this poem... I went to the beach too. and I had a lot of feelings.
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This piece portrays such beautiful imagery...well done!
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great poem. very emotional and really amazing
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yeah, it seems so...
I live on an island full of top class beaches and i never experienced that... maybe i should go again sometime.
Very inspiring!
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lol that's becasue you have to open your soul and spirt to all that mother nature has to teach us and truly savor her gifts befor they vanish form the earth.
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You are right. Soon I won't be able to see any of my white sandy beaches, cus those fools keep building ugly hotels on them. Plus "they" keep releasing the sewage from the hotels into the water... really gross! The tourists don't seem to mind, but you sure as hell wont find local ppl swimming there!!!
I wrote that poem "raped" cus it upset me so much to see how industrialised my little piece of paradise has become in such a short period of time. It makes me cry inside.
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me too, I live near a beatiful place with lots of trees, but it breaks my heart every time I pass by a section that was clear cut.
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Cool poem. Nice use of imagery and metaphors. I really can see the beach in my mind in this poem.
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i went to the beach too ^^
This poem you're descrbiing the beach yay!
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