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Forcedlactationlover [2014-06-21 06:33:36 +0000 UTC]
What, no cellphones available? Oh, well. Nice tale well told. And each girl's body stayed true to its creator's ideas. I like.
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GGJ2 [2010-04-13 05:51:03 +0000 UTC]
Exhilarating! That was a great twist of the usual that happens, most of the time "You know who" would have been the victor. But I'm glad to see something different.
Also on another note, I've noticed a slight error. At the beginning of the story, you had Annette taking out out a CD, then it turns into a cassette tape and then it became a CD again. I"m not trying to bust your balls but that confused me a little. Other than that, little detail, the story was fantastic.
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T-Danger In reply to GGJ2 [2010-04-13 06:20:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for pointing out that error. And I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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munemune [2010-04-12 23:26:05 +0000 UTC]
I think you did a really good job with this story. You not forgetting motion was a big factor in why I think it did so well. The inertia and "hang time" made the bellies feel weighty, even if the girls were flaunting light as air bellies. Thanks.
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T-Danger In reply to munemune [2010-04-13 06:19:36 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you approve.
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YrrallDlok2 [2010-04-12 22:50:36 +0000 UTC]
that is one awesome dance
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