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Taco-Bandit — Caramel's Story Part 5
Published: 2011-11-10 11:34:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 21860; Favourites: 256; Downloads: 459
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The long awaited Part 5Part 1:fav.me/d46qqez
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Part 5: You are here!
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Sorry for the long wait but this took me days to make. I hope you all can read the text..I dun goofed
If there is any grammar or spelling mistakes, please help me correct them. I go through this thing so many time that I could miss the most simplest thing.
EDIT: Changed Sunny boy to sonny boy, Changed kicked to kick, and change wishpers to whisper. Thanks tarynsgate
Caramel, Big Macintosh, Granny Smith©Hasbro
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic© & Studio B
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Comments: 195
One mistake... Granny Smith says"you look like your from Manehattan!" the mistake is clearly clear with a topping of vision and a side of realization.
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Dayum! 😝 Mig Mac is takin charge of the situation like a boss!!!! Remind me to brohoof him when he raises his foreleg in the comic pages 
And also, am I the only one that enjoys looking at Caramel's wet "Shaggy dog" styled wet mane?!! 
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Well Somepony got to! Will do xD
Nope! I enjoyed drawing gis wet mane too much xD
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That's what they all say 
You're not the only one, believe me
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YAY! I'm not a total weirdo!
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another thing in my headcannon is that caramel does seem to have a bad luck streak
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Yeah, that's like my headcannon in a way XD
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Gotta love Big Mac and his fancy mathematics! Glad he offered Caramel a job...if he gets along with Caramel later then the Caramel/Applejack relationship can go smoothly, without much brotherly interference!
What to do with Apple Bloom though... Know what, she won't be able to interfere much with her buddies since she is so busy spinning here.
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That's true, though he could still be protective of his lil sis(I believe he's older) but who knows *shrug*
You might see her soon but no guarantee, she sure love spinning XD
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Big Mac actually gives Apple Bloom a verbal beat down and "The Reason You Suck" speech after Apple Bloom and her friends crush Applejack's feelings with their Gabby Gums news column. It's funny hearing him vocal, but then you realize that he is only vocal because Applejack has gone to using "Yup" and "nope" like he normally does due to being upset.
Caramel better tread lightly XD
I think Big Mac is the oldest. It would make sense with how they originally planned for him to be the owner of the business and how he is so big.
This is by far my favorite pony icon, if not icon in general. So cute XD
She does love her spinning to see if she got her cutie mark
Second favorite icon and a close one at that would be this
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Yeah I wish he would talk more bud sadly he not much of a talker XD
That's true.
haha those are good choices. They're awesome
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It's okay I guess. In real life I am not much of a talker either. Shy guys can still be cool guys. It's not how much you say, but what you say that counts.
There are so many great icons out there to use
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That's true!
I know it's great!
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This is my favorite still. You think she ever gets dizzy?
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Hmm good question XD
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This is my new second favorite. I didn't think Twilight was ever that adorable. I was horribly wrong.
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So adorable...must...not..hug..screen!
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But Big Mac knows fancy mathematics o:
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oh i see -w-
0w0 Wait min Big mac knows fancy mathematics!?
Big Mac: Eeyup
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Omg!! Big Macintosh said a lot! lol. He's awesome. He reminds me a lot of my big brother. And is it just me or was Caramel smiling when the rain started falling?
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When Big Machintosh talk a lot, it make me a happy pony too 
Caramel was smiling because he was happy that he got the job but also had a sympathetic smile since his luck never changes.
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This is awesome and sweet! i cant wait to see the rest
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Thank you very much, I just uploaded Part 6 earlier today ^-^
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Thank you very much, I'm glad that you like it
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Will there be more parts?
THERE MUST BE, AND WILL BE.
Or I'll eat your muffins. >->
Yes,
That was a threat.
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Nuuuu not my muffins! They're meant for Derpy!
haha thank you very much for being interested. I'm currently working on the next part and if everything goes well, it should be out this week
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Yeeees, the muffins! Especially the banana muffins!
You're welcome! I adore your comics. ;u; Even if I don't fav them, that's because I'm too busy going onto the next one. XD
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Mmmm that's sounds tasty right now X3
Well thank you very much, I'm glad that you like them. Well the next part is up if you want to read it ^-^
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Caramel has no cutie mark! He's a black run for your lives
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Yeah poor little Caramel hasn't gotten his cutie mark yet (as stated in previous comic)
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That certainly was long-awaited! I hope we're not left waiting that long for part 6!
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Yeah sorry about that
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so ive read this through for the fourth time. please continue!!!!!! but dont feel pessured take you time ill still be a fangirl not matter how long it takes = D
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Yeah I'm so sorry I haven't done it sooner. But since I'm finally done with the sick...I think. I will continue working on the next part. I'm glad that you're still interested in it
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still intrestrsted??? try obsessed! i check for updates on this WAY to much. = D
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haha Yay! I'm glad you are though I feel bad that I don't have the next part out. I will try to get that part done as soon as possible.
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Oh my GOSH. I just stumbled across this, and now my life will not be complete until this is!
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Well I'm glad that you have taking interests in the story. I will keep continuing it :3
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