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Tahayari — Portrait nr2

Published: 2008-10-25 20:18:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 203; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 13
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Description I'm so pleased with how this came out although i know it has it's flaws. Used a reference pic from one of my recent favorites --> [link]
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Comments: 4

KoTheArtist [2008-10-26 20:44:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, her face is too squished and not long enough, and her chin is too pointed and not rounded enough. Also her eyes are too far apart and sorta stretched, whereas they should be rounder. I think the nose might be a bit too wide aswell.

Keep practising though, you're getting there.

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chikafan [2008-10-26 17:31:23 +0000 UTC]

That looks goood! I love how you did the hair! So shiney! *touchtouch* Sweet job!

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timberwell [2008-10-25 20:22:59 +0000 UTC]

My teacher says to keep your eyes in the reference 90% of the time. You committed mistakes very akin to the ones I do.

Your drawing is near perfect, if only for the eyes (you made her Asian), and the face shape, you did it more pointy than her round face.

Other than that, congrats and keep practicing!

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Tahayari In reply to timberwell [2008-10-26 05:57:15 +0000 UTC]

Hey, thanks for the critique, I appreciate it . I'll keep in mind these small pointers from now on

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