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TaiStormsword — The Rogue of Dreams

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While Dreamscapes are not in use, they are black and void of anything. But when a person is dreaming, the Dreamscape can be a vivid, powerful place. The Dream Spirits are there to protect dreamers from their counterparts, the Nightmare Spirits, and Keiriko is one of the best Dream Spirits of his age group. He is still young and reckless, but he knows what he's doing, and has defeated many powerful Nightmare Spirits. Even as we watch, dark clouds skid across the horizon, and an ill wind flows through the air as a Nightmare Spirit approaches...


I said I'd get another painting of Keiriko done, but I didn't expect it would be this year. @.@ I really dislike how his hair turned out, it looks like dark water splashing off his head. His hands are also weird, but meh. At least it's done.
Note: The symbols are Dreamscape runes. The one on his collar designates him as a Dream Spirit (Dream), and the tattoo on his leg is his personal call-sign, Rogue. For better views of the symbols, look here.

Partial lineart done in pencil on computer paper.
Complete lineart and colouring done in Photoshop Elements 3.0.

Keiriko © ~Tyrin-Claw
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Comments: 27

ChocoboDreamer [2006-02-10 00:24:57 +0000 UTC]

Hmm critique eh?
Well, what I would say is that the grass seems to be a bit rushed to me. Its just flat color gone over with the grass brush in Photoshop, it needs more detail to it you know? May I suggest adding smaller grass blades way back in the background, that might help a bit to add some more perspective to it, you know . Also, I'm not quite sure what that black thing in the background is supposed to be, it looks like a cloud but because of its shape and its proximity to the ground, it looks to be other wise. You need to spread it out and take it off the ground a bit, also make it more transparent.

Now for the nice stuff, really nice character. It has a really awesome design to it. I just love raptors.. they're always so awesome looking. I also like his colors, weee they're sooo pretty you picked a very kewl color combination on this picture that you did . His expression is really nice too

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TaiStormsword In reply to ChocoboDreamer [2006-02-10 00:45:55 +0000 UTC]

Haha, well then the background looks the way it is: rushed. Only more recently have I begun caring about the backgrounds. It's sort of a cloud-slash-approaching-darkness thing. Didn't spend much time on it. As for the grass...I don't have a grass brush. All of the grass blades are drawn individually, which is why there isn't much detail--I get lazy if it takes too long. But, I appreciate the critiques.

Thank you for the compliments too. I should draw him more often.

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ChocoboDreamer In reply to TaiStormsword [2006-02-11 15:12:05 +0000 UTC]

Oh, yeah I used to be that way about backgrounds. Actually I used to be that way about the entire picture.. but now I spend time on it and they are soo much prettier X3

Huh.. I didn't know that Photoshop Elements didn't have a grass brush. Now that I look at it it no longer looks like the work of a grass brush.

Yeah, you should raptors are soo pretty

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TaiStormsword In reply to ChocoboDreamer [2006-02-11 17:39:22 +0000 UTC]

Photoshop Elements doesn't have much at all. Not even a Pen Tool.

Don't tell anyone, but Keiriko's going to make another appearance in an upcoming digi-painting. With my new detailed-background outlook, it could take a while to finish though.

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ChocoboDreamer In reply to TaiStormsword [2006-02-11 20:28:14 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I won't tell *makes huge billboard with that written on it*
0_o What? You said don't "tell" anyone.. meaning don't say it... I didn't say it.... I wrote it on a billboard and showed people. Telling and showing is different

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TaiStormsword In reply to ChocoboDreamer [2006-02-11 21:17:44 +0000 UTC]

The secret's out! D:

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kalamu [2006-02-08 15:20:51 +0000 UTC]

wow I just love the stiry behind it!!
Like yar colored lineart, gives it a disneyish feeling, but still it is very undisney too...wierd.
Raptos(?)rawks

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TaiStormsword In reply to kalamu [2006-02-08 21:01:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, the colored lineart did come out good in this one. I haven't done it in a while though...

Raptos? You mean raptors, or his name?

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kalamu In reply to TaiStormsword [2006-02-08 21:14:37 +0000 UTC]

raptors..sorry, ment raptors^^

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TaiStormsword In reply to kalamu [2006-02-08 22:23:33 +0000 UTC]

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wolfenwonderlight [2006-01-30 03:08:12 +0000 UTC]

^^ Oh by the way I drew you a picture of a Dragon n_n Its in my gallery. Sorry its not that good. . . hmmm. . . it just needs a little color is all ^^

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wolfenwonderlight [2006-01-30 00:18:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow thats soo cool n_n.

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TaiStormsword In reply to wolfenwonderlight [2006-01-30 02:02:21 +0000 UTC]

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Lilliosa [2006-01-13 22:29:54 +0000 UTC]

awesome job!!!!!

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TaiStormsword In reply to Lilliosa [2006-01-14 00:52:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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PyroTeamkill [2006-01-08 05:24:17 +0000 UTC]

I really like this! Rapters are for the win.
The markings are pretty damned cool too.

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TaiStormsword In reply to PyroTeamkill [2006-01-08 05:36:19 +0000 UTC]

Heh. I would've made the markings more detailed and dramatic, but then I'd never be able to do them again.

Anyway, thank you.

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OS9 [2006-01-07 22:10:11 +0000 UTC]

so cute! i read your profile and I saw that you like Dinosaories (I cant spell it, sorry) and dragons.
so I just "OMG!! I am NOT alone"


(sorry about the bad, bad enghlish)

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TaiStormsword In reply to OS9 [2006-01-07 22:42:22 +0000 UTC]



Thank you.

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AlysaTaladay [2005-12-31 01:59:12 +0000 UTC]

I think the hair looks fine, and I noticed the hands, but I can't say exactly what it is that's wrong.... Looks good to me, all in all.

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TaiStormsword In reply to AlysaTaladay [2005-12-31 02:16:52 +0000 UTC]

I was told that the hands look fake, that's probably what's wrong.

Thank you for the comment.

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Weird-Duck [2005-12-24 00:16:53 +0000 UTC]

That's cute! ^_____^

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TaiStormsword In reply to Weird-Duck [2005-12-24 00:24:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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snoopythesmarty [2005-12-19 01:32:17 +0000 UTC]

looks nice *pets hair* i like it

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TaiStormsword In reply to snoopythesmarty [2005-12-19 03:28:33 +0000 UTC]

Thankies.

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P1-2004gsb [2005-12-18 20:24:00 +0000 UTC]

Woah nice...

[Possible Critiques]
As I said before in dAmn... your anthro drawings seem to be too feral... maybe balancing it out?
(If it wasn't meant to be an anthro... This can be disregarded)

In this paticular picture... It appears that the legs are "lopsided"... [not the best word choice but...]
*I have no helpful hints on that...*

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TaiStormsword In reply to P1-2004gsb [2005-12-18 21:05:03 +0000 UTC]

Keiriko is meant to be that way; he was only a little anthromorphosed before he escaped.

And yeah, the anatomy is probably a bit off. I couldn't seem to draw the lower body right at all...so I did my best and let it be.
Thanks for the comment and !

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