Comments: 112
Autamleves [2011-06-29 16:40:16 +0000 UTC]
Nice. Her hair and eyes are very well done.
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Bobgirl5 [2011-06-29 15:34:35 +0000 UTC]
This is so pretty.
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Bobgirl5 In reply to Tajii-chan [2011-06-29 15:53:39 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. ^___^
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Paulcellx [2011-06-28 20:46:03 +0000 UTC]
The hands are good, but you know? It looks like someone is putting it's hand on her, i like that effect.
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Gothicamew [2011-06-27 03:45:19 +0000 UTC]
XDXDXDXD
Hand fail! I love it! Even the awesome fail sometimes.
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NovaScarlette [2011-06-24 23:18:38 +0000 UTC]
While the shoulders do indicated a nice tilt, the placement of the facial features could improve the visual affect! If you use guidelines, try tilting the whole face - From the eyes to the facial outline. And always remember how the neck connects to the back of the head! c:
My only advice with hands is to just use yourself or a relative, friend, etc. to be a reference. It always helps when the subject you're drawing it right in front of you!
Also, to me I feel like the hairline is slightly off the mark. The coloring is gorgeous (As usual!) But the way the hair is sitting makes it look like a part down the middle (Where both sides would usually have equal volume) but it's on the side. If it was intended to be a side part, always make sure that the larger part has more volume then the smaller part! It doesn't have to be incredibly defined, but it still gives a nice touch to the overall piece. And if it was meant as a part down the middle, just be sure to make sure the part aligns in the middle of the eyes! The neck is still a tad too thick, but I know you get that alot, so I will take it you will work even harder to improve that in the future! My final note is the alignment of the body. The way the neck and shoulders are placed make me feel like her chest would be tilted to the right slightly. I mostly see that in the shading and placement of her right shoulder. Again, just always double check to make sure everything is connected and aligned, even if it's just a sketch!
Other then that, I still adore the coloring. I like her calm facial expressions but I feel it can be spiced up a tad to REALLY show some relation to warmth and love. I also really enjoy the little fingernails - Nice touch!
Another great piece Tajii ^^ Keep it up!
(Also, I hope you don't mind my critiques on your work. If you ever want me to stop, just tell me! c
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Gloworm96 [2011-06-24 22:21:56 +0000 UTC]
I think the hands look fine^^
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Gloworm96 In reply to Tajii-chan [2011-06-27 12:54:34 +0000 UTC]
Welcome^^ I tryed to do hands like that once and did the same thing.....
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Gloworm96 In reply to Tajii-chan [2011-06-27 12:58:48 +0000 UTC]
than i redrew it and it looked alittle more normal!
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tramvo [2011-06-24 21:08:08 +0000 UTC]
OOOH <3 i love her hands! i've always wanted to draw the hand-heart pose thing, but everytime i tried i got frustrated and gave up ): maybe i should try again!
it's lovely <3 as always ; u ;
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