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TAKORUone β Naruto Chap. Page 16
Published: 2008-04-18 23:04:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 24864; Favourites: 375; Downloads: 0
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16.... The last one O_OWell there r a lot of pics in this chapter that r really bad quality ...but gezz i did this in a Week with school i didn't had time to do something big...:S
This was suicide! xD
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhh!
estΓ‘ muy genial!
es muy emocionante desde el primer capΓtulo jejeje
Supongo que Naruto tiene sus distintivos ojos pero con la pupila rasjada, so great!
good job!
bye!
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omg your too good...
Love it! the hole doujin!
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that's a GREAT shot...
love it! ^-^ <33333333
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meu comentÑrio aqui n deve fazer diferença nenhuma, mas tu tens um talento, bem bem
Epa adorei o naruto aaaaaah ta lindooo xD
Mtos parabΓ©ns hehe, ganhaste mais uma fΓ£ xD
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This is a very good manga, good history and good arts. Continuation please.
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Incredible job considering you were alone to do the whole thing.
You still need to practice your inking a bit or just give you more time because it lacked precision in some parts.
Since you added the tones on your computer, the result is a bit different. However be careful, I don't think I ever seen the kind of shading you used in page 5 in the original book. And we can see the pixels so it doesn't look traditional. I think Kishimoto try to make Naruto looks like everything was done by hand (I don't know if it's the case but that is the way it looks to me ) So the blurring effect used in page 14 looks more like something you would see in a bad quality scan (but the point of view was very good ).
I saw some errors of anatomy (like the hand on this page, it's too small ) but only a few.
If you could improve these points, your work would look just like an original page (which, I think, was the result you were looking for...? ) Be careful someone doesn't use it to make up some strange theory or mistook it for a new chapter XD
I didn't comment to say your work had still some errors, I commented because you did a fantastic work and I think you could make it look even better. I hope you didn't find me rude or something =.="
So really, without any assistants, the result is AMAZING. My deepest respect.
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are u still continuing this??? or is it over??
and about the other one... the Doujinshi or watever...u gonna make more of that.....cant wait!
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I must say this was amazingly done! Your style, while paying homage to Kishimoto, is really refreshing to see. Great job!
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Woah, dude this is awesome. Is this a chapter you made or is it a new one. I haven't read 413 yet. It keeps coming up with an error every time I try. I love that last pic of naruto in this one.
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ggaaah xD I'm so happy I could puke. really. this's amazing and beautiful quality work! :3
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0.o WOW!!!!! OMG UR AWESOME!!! just a suggistion but you should ssoooo make the next chapter!
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oh come on u have to continue (with this and ur other one, that ones funny ^_^) its too awsome to go. (same with ur other one, srry i dont wanna post a comment on that one about the same thing i'm saying here, i'm lazy ^_^)
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are u still continuing this??? or is it over??
and about the other one... the Doujinshi or watever...u gonna make more of that.....cant wait!
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oh I wish you'll contiune xDDDD this is awesome!!
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OMG!!!this is so AWSOME!!!please put up some more pages!!!!
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aww man! I think at you are going to be great mangaka! I would too if i live Japan... This chapter was so good!!!! Good luck!
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mmmmmm.... I'm making you my friend.. I'll be your stalker...!! *w*
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You are the next Masashi Kishimoto. Or Tite Kubo. Whichever you wanna be, man. But you can totally do it.
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Can I just say that this is an awesome pictures of naruto. The end.
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nice one naruto spills his serect & what will happen to evereone around him. make more naruto chap.
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I haven't been able to figure this out: DId you translate this or is this your own work?
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Looks exactally like Kishi~.
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You amazing!!!!! im puting you on my page for people to come and watch this 
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If you did this in a week with school, then I really admire your discipline and - of course - you talent.
You definitly got skill.
I just can hope, that you`ll keep on drawing, so I can continue to read.
Great idea to let him start fighting with his own powers. I like the kage-bunshin-no-jutsu-kick-ass naruto more, than that kyubi-coated-freakin-psych.
Geez, thats a lot of work, drawing so many kagebunshins. Good luck
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Your style os so F*** good , even better XD
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I read them all!
Marvelistic!
keep it up!^^
You have one of the best naruto mangas out there!
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Your manga style is fantasticlicous! Yummy!
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I love It!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Y)(Y)(Y)
Wow!
I was not much English but ....
This manga is incredible! O_OU
^_^
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Omg that was intense it'll great if it were continued
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Oh wow you're an amazing artist.
if you....no no WHEN you make an actual Manga yourself, I'll definitely have to find it 
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I hope so, I'll be sure to watch your page to know when.
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MOAR!!!!!!!!! lol, jk, i really hope you make more 4 us to thank you for and enjoy, gambatte!
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You are too powerful... You are like a Jinchiruuki of artists... We need to seal you away and only use you when needed... life if Masashi dies..., you and kunoichi-san will take over.
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not your best, but i et where your coming from. i am still even amazed that you did this in one week, and with school
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So does this mean you'll release more doujin pages quicker?
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