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tamiveldura — Fireflies by-nc-nd

Published: 2010-08-15 03:11:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 1045; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 0
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Description Photoshop, 3 hrs, no ref.

I love the colors in this and I attempted to put a wider range of value in the image (compared to 'Waiting') from fore to middle to background.

I also like this slightly basic style of color much more than the previous. While there's less overall detail, there's a lot more focus on the character in the middle rather than the landscape (and it doesn't take 15+ hours either).

Next time the landscape lineart won't be so heavy.

CRITIQUE PLEASE!

Thank you for each and every , +watch, +collection, and vote. I cannot respond individually or I get flagged for Spam, but if you would like a personal thank you, mention it in a comment!
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Comments: 32

MegaJamieV [2010-10-09 19:30:58 +0000 UTC]

Very nice.

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tamiveldura In reply to MegaJamieV [2010-10-13 00:11:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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CezLeo [2010-09-24 23:39:11 +0000 UTC]

Really cool!

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tamiveldura In reply to CezLeo [2010-09-24 23:51:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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CezLeo In reply to tamiveldura [2010-09-24 23:54:57 +0000 UTC]

you are sooo welcome!

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Keitana [2010-09-04 01:29:56 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, so pretty. I adore the background! It's really not that complicated shading wise, but it looks so nice nonetheless. I actually might try something like that in the future, whenever I get into backgrounds =O Simple > Detailed. You just proved it.

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tamiveldura In reply to Keitana [2010-09-04 01:54:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it. This simple style didn't take a lot of time (because it's pretty basic) but it does a lot of focus on color which I like

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Keitana In reply to tamiveldura [2010-09-04 02:27:55 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. ^^
Yeah, I've just started learning on composition and perspective. The focus is well done = D

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tamiveldura In reply to Keitana [2010-09-04 02:40:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I cheat a bit on perspective. I have a grid on a transparent background saved as it's own file in photoshop and I distort it on my new pictures to get the perspective I want. It makes things go a lot faster!

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Keitana In reply to tamiveldura [2010-09-04 03:50:33 +0000 UTC]

...Omg, seriously?? XD
That's such an amazing cheat there. It never occured to me that one could do that. I'm totally going to use that until I get the hang of perspective on my own :'D

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tamiveldura In reply to Keitana [2010-09-04 03:59:30 +0000 UTC]

I know >.< It's brilliant. I didn't come up with it myself, though. All credit where credit is due: This Composition Tutorial gives a nice overview of composition 101 and has the grid cheat in the end.

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Keitana In reply to tamiveldura [2010-09-04 04:06:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh, neat. ^^ Guess I'll grab a few pointers from that as well, then!

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areautena [2010-09-04 00:13:52 +0000 UTC]

Great colors, I can really see the depth in this picture. What a beautiful scene! I really admire it.

However, only because you asked for critique, I will say... Given the lighting you suggested in this scene, the shadows/lighting on your subject should be more blue-ish. Kind of like how everything looks blue at night, right? The way it is now, it is kind of like cutting out a picture of a person standing under a daytime sky, but pasting them into a night scene. You can have blue shadows and still have the subject stand out.

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tamiveldura In reply to areautena [2010-09-04 01:20:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

I've been through color theory but I still have trouble applying theory to practice Thank you for pointing out the shadows, I'll try to apply my scene's colors to my character in the future!

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ButterscotchSundae [2010-09-03 23:57:30 +0000 UTC]

Oh i'm lovin this. You're right. The contrast of the bg and the central character does put your eye on either one or the other separately, but as a whole.

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tamiveldura In reply to ButterscotchSundae [2010-09-04 01:20:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm glad you like it

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Kathrin-a [2010-08-17 15:04:53 +0000 UTC]

I love the background! <3

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tamiveldura In reply to Kathrin-a [2010-08-17 16:40:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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digitalbird06 [2010-08-17 00:09:52 +0000 UTC]

I like the colors too, but the body looks weird, does he have a hump on his back or something?

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tamiveldura In reply to digitalbird06 [2010-08-17 01:35:43 +0000 UTC]

No, it's the way the barrel of the chest/neck looks when my German Sheppard sleeps like that. I agree, it's not the most flattering pose.

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digitalbird06 In reply to tamiveldura [2010-08-17 18:28:17 +0000 UTC]

I think it's the angular shape to it. If you rounded it off, it'd be a more believable chest or even hip.

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tamiveldura In reply to digitalbird06 [2010-08-17 18:47:14 +0000 UTC]

Could be, my sketches tend to be angular so the end result often reflects that.

Thank you for the favorite!

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digitalbird06 In reply to tamiveldura [2010-08-17 18:51:01 +0000 UTC]

your welcome, all in all, it is a beautiful piece

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tamiveldura In reply to digitalbird06 [2010-08-17 19:48:19 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Mindless-Ho-oh [2010-08-16 15:35:40 +0000 UTC]

D'awww, I love this.

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tamiveldura In reply to Mindless-Ho-oh [2010-08-16 16:28:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Mindless-Ho-oh In reply to tamiveldura [2010-08-16 16:45:04 +0000 UTC]

welcome :3

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strangebloke [2010-08-16 00:59:12 +0000 UTC]

quite beautiful, really. The scenery is impressive, especially the tree and the rock in the foreground. It would be nice to see more detail on the thing that we are looking at most directly, though. (aka, the wold in the center.)

perhaps detail isn't the word im looking for... What I mean to say is the posture of the wolf is somewhat ambiguous... it somehow feels contorted. perhaps a more regular position would work better.

all in all, though, this picture is one of your best, and the colors mesh beautifully.

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tamiveldura In reply to strangebloke [2010-08-16 01:04:23 +0000 UTC]

I drew the wolf based on a position our German Shepard often sleeps in so while I consider it very true to life, I agree with you, it looks rather strange. The 'strange' feeling really popped when I colored it and by then I wasn't gonna go back and change the sketch/lineart. Live and learn.

Thanks!

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adelaar1 [2010-08-15 03:13:57 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I really like the application of the color and how saturated it all is. And I love how the character stands out but still has a soft color.

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tamiveldura In reply to adelaar1 [2010-08-15 03:19:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I wanted to do more detail work in the landscape but I didn't want to take away from the focus, one of those 'I'm gonna screw it up!' moments

I'm glad you like it, and thanks for the fav!

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adelaar1 In reply to tamiveldura [2010-08-23 10:03:39 +0000 UTC]

Yea, subtle was best here. Love it.

Anytime. ^^

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