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Schatten-Drache [2011-07-02 12:16:57 +0000 UTC]
wirklich sehr dΓΌster - du hast es wrklich geschafft 'nacht' zu malen!
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KaitoAozora [2011-05-07 02:33:34 +0000 UTC]
Ellipses. Ellipses are everywhere. I'm fine with a well-placed ellipsis here or there, but you need to tone it down, man.
Also, pet peeve'a mine, ellipses only ever have three dots.
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Tammiflu In reply to KaitoAozora [2011-05-07 11:15:04 +0000 UTC]
Uhm...I'm sorry?
I didn't take care about stylistic devices...I only wrote some words to this picture to make it more alive...that everybody can image the scenery..
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KaitoAozora In reply to Tammiflu [2011-05-07 13:37:10 +0000 UTC]
A'know. 'm just saying. (Actually it seems like you just really like ellipses.)
Ellipsis-overuse, happens to everyone, I used to do it all the time m'self.
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