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Tammiflu β€” Comission: Silencium

Published: 2011-05-06 23:01:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 635; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 12
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Description A big battle....death, blood, screaming, pain....everything came together at this place. It was a big massacre...nobody could win. I asked myself why I'm still fighting...but I coudn't stop.
Suddenly I felt a stab in my chest. I looked down and I could see a sword sticking in it....blood runs down my body....my vision got worse and worse....until I could only see a silouette of my enemy....and finally fell down to the ground.... now the battle was over.
Now you can see nothing of a battle anymore...there are tombstones rising from the grass covered ground...an old sword and a rusted helmet are reminding of a fallen warrior...only the crows..sitting around this place...are disturbing...this deadly silence...

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:yay: my first commission

Here you are JJ I hope you are satisfied with it..^^
A very nice idea I think..^^ and I'm wondering that it turned out that good...<.<
I wrote a short story to it...because I thought it would make the picture more...'alive' ^^
So I hope you like it..^^


Drawn with coal chalk and white chalk.
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Comments: 6

Schatten-Drache [2011-07-02 12:16:57 +0000 UTC]

wirklich sehr dΓΌster - du hast es wrklich geschafft 'nacht' zu malen!

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Tammiflu In reply to Schatten-Drache [2011-07-02 12:41:30 +0000 UTC]

hehe danke

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KaitoAozora [2011-05-07 02:33:34 +0000 UTC]

Ellipses. Ellipses are everywhere. I'm fine with a well-placed ellipsis here or there, but you need to tone it down, man.

Also, pet peeve'a mine, ellipses only ever have three dots.

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Tammiflu In reply to KaitoAozora [2011-05-07 11:15:04 +0000 UTC]

Uhm...I'm sorry?
I didn't take care about stylistic devices...I only wrote some words to this picture to make it more alive...that everybody can image the scenery..

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KaitoAozora In reply to Tammiflu [2011-05-07 13:37:10 +0000 UTC]

A'know. 'm just saying. (Actually it seems like you just really like ellipses.)

Ellipsis-overuse, happens to everyone, I used to do it all the time m'self.

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Tammiflu In reply to KaitoAozora [2011-05-07 23:55:08 +0000 UTC]

ah okay^^...yeah I really like to write like this..^^

hehe

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