tamtamgod In reply to julian0123 [2014-03-22 23:38:07 +0000 UTC]

You're probably right lol it's still a weird jump though

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julian0123 In reply to tamtamgod [2014-03-23 01:48:10 +0000 UTC]

Yeah XD

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tamtamgod In reply to Zamidge [2014-02-22 23:34:39 +0000 UTC]

I suppose, but the third line weirds me out ._.

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Zamidge In reply to tamtamgod [2014-02-23 06:48:38 +0000 UTC]

Not sure if mind in the gutter or...

Dammit, now my mind is in the gutter. It was a good line until you pointed it out . Perhaps change it to "Blazing tongues invade and pervade"? It keeps the line in accordance with the recurring 'b' sounds, and with the line's recurring 'a' sounds. If I had to change anything about that line, that's what I'd do, but you could get away with keeping it as is.

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tamtamgod In reply to Zamidge [2014-02-26 23:50:34 +0000 UTC]

Ahahahaha I've corrupted you I shot myself in the foot in the process, but it was worth it!

Nahhhh I prefer to leave your mind in the gutter Plus, that requires effort, and I'm very lazy

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Zamidge In reply to tamtamgod [2014-02-28 08:36:22 +0000 UTC]

Ehh well my mind seldom leaves the gutter anyhow. You've only sped up the process

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tamtamgod In reply to Zamidge [2014-03-01 23:42:12 +0000 UTC]

I'll still take it as a win ^_^

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Zamidge In reply to tamtamgod [2014-03-02 07:41:51 +0000 UTC]

Fine; you win this round .

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tamtamgod In reply to SirRinge [2014-02-22 23:38:42 +0000 UTC]

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