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TargonRedDragon β€” Limang Bayani ng Katarungan

Published: 2009-11-22 04:34:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 5206; Favourites: 80; Downloads: 160
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Description And it's done! The greatest fanart I've ever made! It composed of the united characters posing and preparing their weapons to fight for justice and freedom.

Translation for this theme: "Five Heroes of Justice"

I include that hawk behind them.

This is a special gift for my friends on DA,

Facts about this fanart (not including the sketch art):
I made Reptile almost 30 times in one year and two months.
I made Orion 2 times
I made Razen for the FIRST TIME

"Razen", "Orion" and "Hotara" are greatly inspired from Reptilecynrik's digital artwork "Three Warriors"--->

They're all in primary colors of light! (green, red and blue)

Characters, "Hotara" and "Skaro", are originally made by :iconkevindragon

Characters which are not mine are:
"Razen" is (c) to
"Orion" is (c) to and
"Reptile" is (c) to

Coloring duration: 8 days (one day for each character, and one day for the background, and two days for editing)

If you viewers want a solo pose of those characters, click the links:
Hotara solo
Skaro solo
Orion solo
Razen solo
Reptile Solo
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Comments: 29

Neminine [2013-03-21 06:12:11 +0000 UTC]

I think this is freaking awesome!

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TargonRedDragon In reply to Neminine [2013-03-21 08:22:32 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Neminine In reply to TargonRedDragon [2013-03-21 20:55:23 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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PlatinumArtist [2011-01-14 05:19:14 +0000 UTC]

Now that is sooo BADASS its like the meeting of Heroes
WOW YOUR AWAZING

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Spere94 [2010-06-25 18:06:21 +0000 UTC]

aww, i finish the congratulations ... haha!

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TargonRedDragon In reply to Spere94 [2010-06-25 21:32:59 +0000 UTC]

^^

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drakodragon [2010-06-03 00:09:05 +0000 UTC]

nice work man i like the color so
RAZEN IS THE BLUE DRAGON
ORION IS THE RED DRAGON
AND WATCH ONE IS
HOTARA,SKARO AND REPTILE

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TargonRedDragon In reply to drakodragon [2010-06-03 00:30:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you...ah, color sequence, huh?

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CasanovaUnlimited [2009-11-25 02:23:01 +0000 UTC]

Wow, you have ReptileCynrik as your teacher. I bet that's awesome!

You have the "Razen" and "Reptile" credits switched in the description.

I'm not one that can point out things wrong with the pics, but I'm seeing one thing that I don't know if you want to hear...

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TargonRedDragon In reply to CasanovaUnlimited [2009-11-25 07:09:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks then, for your comment.

You see, ReptileCynrik is often a art critique, whom I should not ignore (also anyone else). He does have some ideas on correcting any flaws in my picture. I always have to trust him, also his brother.

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CasanovaUnlimited In reply to TargonRedDragon [2010-10-03 23:12:05 +0000 UTC]

Oh my, It's been so long since I made that comment, I forgot what I saw wrong.

I'm not much of a critiquer though.

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TargonRedDragon In reply to CasanovaUnlimited [2010-10-04 07:12:16 +0000 UTC]

Mmhm ...ehmmm, I'm not talk much about those ^^"

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ReptileCynrik In reply to TargonRedDragon [2009-11-26 12:38:08 +0000 UTC]

You still need to change the character icons...

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RazenHashikado [2009-11-22 17:45:30 +0000 UTC]

I hoped indeed you could have corrected the feet, I have listened also some friends, besides reading the comments here, who have been feeling more upset towards the mistakes in the picture. Its basically overall nice picture still. Keep on improving and discover techniques to improve your work!

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TargonRedDragon In reply to RazenHashikado [2009-11-23 13:09:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, pal.

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RazenHashikado In reply to TargonRedDragon [2009-11-23 19:20:03 +0000 UTC]

no biggie, thanks from including me still though.

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TargonRedDragon In reply to RazenHashikado [2009-11-25 07:00:11 +0000 UTC]

Welcome.

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SymbolHero [2009-11-22 12:57:53 +0000 UTC]

Well, I see you already done with you drawing, I see you didnΒ΄t fix the mistakes from before, but I have to admit, this one looks very hard, a lot of option for the poses, colors, etc.
You did a great effort on it, I mean that, but you still need to "practice" with the bodies if you want that the characters fits good on your great background.
YouΒ΄ll see what I mean if you can do it, Thanks again foe this drawing

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TargonRedDragon In reply to SymbolHero [2009-11-23 13:08:46 +0000 UTC]


I agree to all the critiques so I can learn a lot better. That's everyday reminder.

I was drawing it so hard because I'm not brave and deep enough to correct mistakes. I'm just an amateur, too.

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ReptileCynrik [2009-11-22 08:40:25 +0000 UTC]

Well, we have to value your huge amount of work here. And sure, this was a big pile of work!! That's a rather BIG artwork with many characters... so, "thump up" for the artwork itself.

What I really like:

+ Razen's feathered wings (nicely done)
+ The textures are brilliant (as usual)
+ The little background part with the lightning looks great


Like CURANUS said... still many mistakes, which you did NOT correct in the line art, at all.
- The hands are too massive and just flesh piles
- Reptile's legs were better in the line art version
- Razen's sword sheath has a perspective mistake
- Hotara's left arm is broken
- Razen's feet are wrong (Why didn't you correct it? He described to you HOW the feets are supposed to look like!)
- the ground is too flat... like a perfect street


But sure, this was a really difficult picture. Make more sketches in the future, so that we can help your EARLIER!!!

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TargonRedDragon In reply to ReptileCynrik [2009-11-23 13:04:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh man! minor mistakes again. I couldn't correct mistakes properly without your comment on my lineart. Sorry, that's my excuse.

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ReptileCynrik In reply to TargonRedDragon [2009-11-24 12:34:44 +0000 UTC]

No, that's NOT an excuse at all! I am not your "master" here... and you shouldn't make an artwork DEPENDING on MY comment!!
You read what RAZEN has written to you about his foot?? That was HIS correction wish. And you didn't follow it. So, I have nothing to do with RAZEN... I really thought, you would listen to HIM, because that's his character.
Well, never mind.

I am really sure, you already started colouring while sending the LINE ART to us. >..<
There is no chance for us to help you, if you are too quick.
And seriously... a LINE ART is not open for many corrections. Please send us a SKETCH first - IF you want some help!
You can also do the work all by yourself, I don't mind.
If you think, you don't need any of us... it's okay. I can accept it.
But don't ignore the OTHER PEOPLES' COMMENTS, EITHER!

The picture is NOT "crap"... but it could have been b etter.

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TargonRedDragon In reply to ReptileCynrik [2009-11-25 07:31:04 +0000 UTC]

I got your comment, and
I understand.

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Curanus [2009-11-22 07:59:10 +0000 UTC]

I like the bird... the rest is meh. Just a big pile of scale with many mistakes that ruin the picture.
I think no one should put so many "undifferent" characters on one pic.

Heres the most obvious mistakes:
- Reptiles fingers are just big sausages
- His left leg is IN FRONT of his loincloth (breach of perspective)
- His right hip is bigger and in front of his sixpack
- His left hand doesnt grip the pole at all
- his face doesnt look like Reptile

- Skaros left arm is floating at his side
- Breach of perspective on his right weapon

- Hotaras right arm is huge, man. Like he did training only on one arm
- His face looks exactly like Orion and Razen. They all look the same to me

- Orions loincloth looks painted on
- His sword is totally out of perspective. If you cant draw it this way, then dont and search for another pose

- Razens swordsheath is TOTALLY wrong. I mean there is so many things wrong with it i dont know where to start.


There is plenty more but i got tired of typing. Just want you not to hear to all of your "Yay-sayers" who cant see the mistakes or are too (incorrectly) polite to not tell you. Critique is the best thing you can get.

P.S.: I REALLY, really like the bird.

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TargonRedDragon In reply to Curanus [2009-11-23 12:59:54 +0000 UTC]

Sigh, thanks for your good help. I hope I will know what you say in the future.

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aliancedragoncomandr [2009-11-22 06:02:05 +0000 UTC]

Awesome group pic, The texture and the background is cool
Ya seem to be so much a huge fan of Repitle 30 pics of him made in 1 year that's a lot
Razen looks good for a start

Ya should try to draw my characters sometime
Jk

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KiroVBS [2009-11-22 05:01:05 +0000 UTC]

TheyΒ΄re all very nice! Their armors and weapons are ver cool too, and those wings have a nive effect in my opinion! And the scenery gives a nice feeling of freedom to all the characters

keeps up with the good job, Kevin! ;D

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TargonRedDragon In reply to KiroVBS [2009-11-22 05:04:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for your good comment!

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KiroVBS In reply to TargonRedDragon [2009-11-22 05:05:56 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome! ThatΒ΄s what your drawing is about, after all

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