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Neminine [2013-03-21 06:12:11 +0000 UTC]
I think this is freaking awesome!
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PlatinumArtist [2011-01-14 05:19:14 +0000 UTC]
Now that is sooo BADASS its like the meeting of Heroes
WOW YOUR AWAZING
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Spere94 [2010-06-25 18:06:21 +0000 UTC]
aww, i finish the congratulations ... haha!
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drakodragon [2010-06-03 00:09:05 +0000 UTC]
nice work man i like the color so
RAZEN IS THE BLUE DRAGON
ORION IS THE RED DRAGON
AND WATCH ONE IS
HOTARA,SKARO AND REPTILE
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TargonRedDragon In reply to CasanovaUnlimited [2009-11-25 07:09:55 +0000 UTC]
Thanks then, for your comment.
You see, ReptileCynrik is often a art critique, whom I should not ignore (also anyone else). He does have some ideas on correcting any flaws in my picture. I always have to trust him, also his brother.
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SymbolHero [2009-11-22 12:57:53 +0000 UTC]
Well, I see you already done with you drawing, I see you didnΒ΄t fix the mistakes from before, but I have to admit, this one looks very hard, a lot of option for the poses, colors, etc.
You did a great effort on it, I mean that, but you still need to "practice" with the bodies if you want that the characters fits good on your great background.
YouΒ΄ll see what I mean if you can do it, Thanks again foe this drawing
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TargonRedDragon In reply to ReptileCynrik [2009-11-23 13:04:24 +0000 UTC]
Oh man! minor mistakes again. I couldn't correct mistakes properly without your comment on my lineart. Sorry, that's my excuse.
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ReptileCynrik In reply to TargonRedDragon [2009-11-24 12:34:44 +0000 UTC]
No, that's NOT an excuse at all! I am not your "master" here... and you shouldn't make an artwork DEPENDING on MY comment!!
You read what RAZEN has written to you about his foot?? That was HIS correction wish. And you didn't follow it. So, I have nothing to do with RAZEN... I really thought, you would listen to HIM, because that's his character.
Well, never mind.
I am really sure, you already started colouring while sending the LINE ART to us. >..<
There is no chance for us to help you, if you are too quick.
And seriously... a LINE ART is not open for many corrections. Please send us a SKETCH first - IF you want some help!
You can also do the work all by yourself, I don't mind.
If you think, you don't need any of us... it's okay. I can accept it.
But don't ignore the OTHER PEOPLES' COMMENTS, EITHER!
The picture is NOT "crap"... but it could have been b etter.
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Curanus [2009-11-22 07:59:10 +0000 UTC]
I like the bird... the rest is meh. Just a big pile of scale with many mistakes that ruin the picture.
I think no one should put so many "undifferent" characters on one pic.
Heres the most obvious mistakes:
- Reptiles fingers are just big sausages
- His left leg is IN FRONT of his loincloth (breach of perspective)
- His right hip is bigger and in front of his sixpack
- His left hand doesnt grip the pole at all
- his face doesnt look like Reptile
- Skaros left arm is floating at his side
- Breach of perspective on his right weapon
- Hotaras right arm is huge, man. Like he did training only on one arm
- His face looks exactly like Orion and Razen. They all look the same to me
- Orions loincloth looks painted on
- His sword is totally out of perspective. If you cant draw it this way, then dont and search for another pose
- Razens swordsheath is TOTALLY wrong. I mean there is so many things wrong with it i dont know where to start.
There is plenty more but i got tired of typing. Just want you not to hear to all of your "Yay-sayers" who cant see the mistakes or are too (incorrectly) polite to not tell you. Critique is the best thing you can get.
P.S.: I REALLY, really like the bird.
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TargonRedDragon In reply to Curanus [2009-11-23 12:59:54 +0000 UTC]
Sigh, thanks for your good help. I hope I will know what you say in the future.
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