Shikage-sama [2009-07-09 23:13:41 +0000 UTC]
she's cool, but i think should make him a dude, im about to get shojo-y on u so prepare self.....
make him like the lonely prince type, not like the co-dependent Haku/Kimimaro type, but like Dues is the ONLY one he trusts, but yet Kira trusts no1...yet distrusts evry1.....kinda like people think he's around him by obligation, but deeeeeeeep down.....the 2 of them have a secret special...bond....ok now just put that in ur back pocket and think about it 4 a while *with an open mind/reread it if u have to* and tell me wat u think....
sorry im tellin u how 2 write ur story lol i couldnt hold back the Shojo lol
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