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TBriddle — Contest Entry- Love is a Bucket of Bolts
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"I can't believe it. I can't believe I'm getting married before you... I feel guilty." The lynx started playing with her dress as her best friend helped neaten it up and her other friend worked on her hair. The lynx insisted she wanted to make her look naturally, organically and non-virtual.

"Why?" Sally asked giggling. "This is your moment, Nicole. Just because you aren't organic doesn't make you any less of a person. You have as much of a right to happiness as Bunnie and I." Nicole gave her an appreciated smile, though doubt twinkled in her eyes.

"Sally's right, Sugah. Don't worry about Sallygirl. Worry about you! Today's your day, Sugah." Bunnie told the worried lynx as she carefully braided her hair and stuck in little decorations.

Nicole felt tears come to her eyes. "You guys are wonderful... I just..."

"Hey, hey! Save those tears for him, okay?" Sally said, standing up and wiping Nicole’s tears away.

"Thanks, guys, you're the best..."

“And you’re programed sufficiently.” Sally said, smirking. Nicole felt tears come to her eyes again as she laughed. Bunnie laughed along with her as Sally followed but the laughter was silenced by the music that flooded the halls and managed to seep through the closed door. “That’s your que, Bunnie.” Sally smiled. Bunnie nodded and quickly examined her work, made a few finishing touches and then exited the room to join the ceremony.

Nicole then became increasingly nervous. As ceremony of emotion wasn’t exactly a fitting match for a robot and an AI, or at least a normal robot and AI. Sally stood up, satisfied with her work and pulled Nicole softly into a small embrace. “Hey. This is your day. Don’t let those judgmental people out there scare you. Focus on him and how much he loves you. Together you accomplished something most thought impossible and never get to feel; Love.”

Nicole smiled, wiped the tears from her eyes and pulled herself out of the hug. “Thank you, Sally. I shall remain eternally grateful to you for granting me this wish. You should go now. Soon my song will begin.” Sally nodded her head and told her she owed Nicole so much anyhow. There was no need for thank yous.

As Sally exited the room, Nicole looked herself in the mirror and smiled. She refused any digital enhancements to “sweeten” her appearance. Her spouse had always told her she didn’t need any special programming to impress him so she took his word to heart. She hoped he would notice.

She giggled to herself. Of course, Shard would notice. He hardly missed anything when it came to her.

Her ears perked up when she heard the bride’s song being played. Her song. Their song. She took a calming breath before walking out of the room and in front of the two closed doors. A ghost of Nicole’s past made himself present by taking her arm in his. She turned to look at him in his hunched over form. “Dr. Ellidy? I thought… I thought you weren’t going to come.” She was very surprised to see the old gray lynx next to her but did not break the hold he had on her arm. “I thought Sir Charles was-“

“Nikk- Nicole, I asked him if I may step in. I know,” His ears drooped a bit, and Nicole could see he seemed disappointed, “I haven’t been the best… Fatherly presence for you in the past so I had no idea why you would invite me but you have so much love and forgiveness in that heart I made for you. I can’t believe how my creation has grown. I owe you this much because you didn’t deserve the anger I had against you. You are still my daughter and I should be here for your special day…” He smiled and tilted his head to look at her face as Nicole was a slight bit taller than him with his hunchback. “He’s one lucky machine.”

Nicole smiled back, resisting the urge to cry and doing her best to obey Sally and Bunnie’s instructions. “Dr. Ellidy… Thank you!” She cried, flinging her arms around his neck which clearly surprised him. He slowly and awkwardly, but lovingly wrapped his arms around her and patted her back. “I-I only wish Nikki was here…” She said, pulling herself out of the embrace and trying to regain her composure as the music picked up.

It was time for them to enter. Nicole hardly noticed the many faces staring back at her in awe or the many whispers that were spoken among her guests. Her eyes were focused upon the robot standing at the alter waiting for her. However, her ears picked up on Dr. Ellidy’s comment of, “Nikki is here, Nicole. And I finally get to walk both my daughters down the aisle.” Then the glitchy tears just began to flow, and she couldn’t stop them this time.

When they had reached the alter Nicole practically hopped on, her programming nearly malfunctioning from all the joy she felt. She looked Shard in the optics only to find he was crying too.

“You’re crying?” He chuckled with that android like voice.

“You’re crying too, you dork.” She said as King Acorn called the ceremony to order. It went on as any normal ceremony but with occasional robotic twists that were hard not to notice. By the time it came to hand over the rings, Cheese (the ring bearer) flew up to them as soon as possible. They each took the other’s ring from the little chao and repeated the words they were told to repeat to each other.

Nicole watched as Shard shakingly slipped the ring, suspiciously shaped like a metal nut, onto her ring finger. She giggled as he gave her a silly face, clearly enjoying their own humor. The night he proposed all he had was a bolt on him. They laughed inwardly as she slipped his ring on his metal finger. The ring was simply in the shape of a tight-fitting washer. Clearly no one had no idea what pulled them out of the real world and into this silly faced state.

Shard stepped closer to Nicole, not letting the King finish his statement as he said to Nicole. “So… Are you gonna kiss me or not?” Nicole merely smirked and pulled him towards her, tossing the flowers over her head a bit early, taking everyone by surprise. The best maid, Sally was the one to catch them, a smirk on her face as she handed them off to fellow bridesmaid, Amy Rose.

“I thought you would never ask!” She cried, before kissing him on his metal muzzle, their tears flowing more. The best man, Silver, merely facepalmed as Larry put a hand on his shoulder and they both laughed. The King was clearly dumbfounded as the rest of the crowd erupted in cheers.

Cream, the resident flower girl, pranced around the couple tossing petals to and froe and applause were made. It took that to shake the king out of his confused state and scream the order to let the services begin over the cheering crowd just as the two non-organic beings pulled away.

“You look like a million sparkling pixels.” Shard whispered to her, leaning his forehead against hers and messing up her neatly made hairdo.

“And you look like a handsome pile of spray-painted scrap metal.” She said, mischievously.

“Hey!” Shard cried. In act of revenge he swung his bride around in circles before pulling her closer to him.

“I’m so glad I found you again.” Nicole cried.

“I’m so glad you built me again!” Shard laughed as Nicole rolled her eyes.  

A figure raced up to the newlyweds. It was none other than Sonic who wrapped an arm around each of them. “Man, you guys sure know how to make a wedding interesting!” He cried. “That was a movie moment, there.” Sonic whistled before getting pulled off them by a familiar aura.

“Hey, give them some peace. They just got married.” The best man walked up to the floating speedster. Silver turned his head and smirked at Shard. “You don’t even follow the rules to your own wedding.”

“What can I say? It’s against my programming to play by the rules.” Shard smirked back. Silver rolled his eyes and walked off, pulling Sonic along with him. The blue hedgehog was heard making threats as they disappeared into the crowd.

As that went on, Nicole felt a tap on her shoulder and turned to find a crying Sally in front of her. “I thought you said no crying?” She gave her best friend a sweet smile. Sally laughed and pulled her into another embrace.

“I’m so happy for you, Nicole. You deserve him and he deserves you after all you both have been through. I’m so proud.” Sally cried. Nicole softly hugged her back.

“Sally, I finally found the definition of happiness.” Nicole cried, looking back at Shard as he caught up with Sir Charles. She smiled knowing that made him so happy to be a part of someone who meant so much to him in his life. “And I never want to lose him again.”

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Comments: 82

TBriddle In reply to ??? [2018-06-19 16:36:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! 

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ChocolateCoatedSonic [2017-12-29 06:23:50 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you put Dr. Ellidy in this story.

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TBriddle In reply to ChocolateCoatedSonic [2017-12-29 06:24:22 +0000 UTC]

I really love him.

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xX-Royally-Mystic-Xx [2017-11-16 05:43:17 +0000 UTC]

hOw dId I mIsS tHiS!!????

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TBriddle In reply to xX-Royally-Mystic-Xx [2017-11-16 05:48:17 +0000 UTC]

I DON'T KNOW

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Galaxynite [2017-11-05 01:18:10 +0000 UTC]

aaAAAAAAA HERE IS YOUR PROPER COMMENT! <3
I honestly needed all that time to really get my feelings in order about this, haha! Whim is right, I'm such a sucker for the wedding theme- this really hit me in all the right spots haha!
In a nutshell- I love it! It's an absolutely beautiful representation of their characters and takes a very special approach to the theme of the contest. The personalities are spot on and I think it's great that it was told from Nicole's perspective. Given that of the two, she has a bit more of a reserved personality, it was really special to see her open up to her friends, to Dr. Ellidy, and to Shard even too. You really captured very powerful feelings of growth and hope and joy that were absolutely infectious. The emotional range is really satisfying, going from being silly, to serious, to joyful in a very cohesive manner, and your lovely choice of wording and description really helps with tat. I also love that you chose to incorporate their friends in this too, because as this contest was also meant to commemorate the end of the comics, it was a really nice touch to have them all come together for such an important event- it felt like a tightly knit community, and that was really perfect.
It was also really cool to spot little hints of my headcanons in there every once and a while- bonus points for that, haha!
Overall, this is an amazing piece of writing! Thank you so much for entering my contest ;;v;;

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TBriddle In reply to Galaxynite [2017-12-24 05:17:52 +0000 UTC]

Sorry it took me so long to reply... THANK YOU!! I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT!   And thanks for the feedback.

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xcreeper321 [2017-10-05 19:54:26 +0000 UTC]

YEEEEESSSSS!!!!!!!

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TBriddle In reply to xcreeper321 [2017-10-05 19:59:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you? XD

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xcreeper321 In reply to TBriddle [2017-10-05 20:30:35 +0000 UTC]

(whispers) your welcome

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TBriddle In reply to xcreeper321 [2017-10-05 20:40:14 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Whimsical-Wings [2017-08-29 16:31:22 +0000 UTC]

This was very well written, Birdy!

There are a lot of really good things about this writing, the character interactions, the way you've constructed the story, and oh~ The theme is just adorable!

I have some critique, so bear with me...
It's difficult to write dialogue and I know everyone has their own interpretations of the characters, so take this with a grain of salt!

The biggest thing that threw me off was the interaction between Dr. Ellidy and Nicole. In my opinion it would be more impacting if you had heavily implied Nikki's role in Nicole's life. And perhaps even had Dr. Ellidy admit that Nikki was gone, Nicole was her her own person now, and shouldn't be tied back with the person she was meant to be, or perhaps more accurately the person who inspired her creation.
She is his daughter, but not the daughter he remembered/wanted her to be. Maybe this would be the point to express that he had come to terms with that? Rather than seeing her as two people at once...

There are other things like using the abbreviation, w/ring. That's fine in casual writing, but in something more intended to be emotionally impacting (in a happy way) just going the full length. Not abbreviating things is the way to go! Even if you end up repeating that word several times XD There are a few other grammatical errors, such as  "the ring barrier", should be ring bearer, but they don't distract too much from the overall story.

It was a really sweet touch to have Sally pass the flowers on to Amy, I liked that part a lot!
Considering Sally isn't interested in boys as much as Amy is, the disappointed expression Amy would have when Sally caught the bouquet, and then the overjoyed/thankful expression she would have when it was handed to her,
pricelessly adorable!

Also that bolt/nut ring was 11/10 yes.

I think you nailed Shard's sassy personality well! Nicole's emotions were a bit all over the place, but I suppose that's to be expected on your wedding day~! I really saw the personalities of the characters shine in this, terrific work!

All in all, this is quite the impacting story, I think you nailed the theme of "Hope" perfectly, and I know that Galaxynite is a sucker for the wedding theme~ So you certainly get massive points there!

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TBriddle In reply to Whimsical-Wings [2017-08-29 17:40:39 +0000 UTC]

I found that w/ring part. I didn't put that there. I think DA did for some reason? Or it was something to do with earlier when I tried to back space the w because writing this story I got tired and spelled ring, wring. It must have put = there instead and then my program automatically corrected it to that? However, reading through it the second time I didn't catch it but I guess I could have missed it, however my mother (who is a stickler for grammar) surely would have noticed something like that, even in her tired state. *shrugs* Anyhow, it is fixed. 

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Whimsical-Wings In reply to TBriddle [2017-08-30 05:39:18 +0000 UTC]

It's alright XDD
I make silly writing mistakes all the time no need to explain yourself, really it's okay! I'm just trying to help. *hug*

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TBriddle In reply to Whimsical-Wings [2017-08-30 16:02:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I didn't mean to sound like I was explaining myself... I was wondering what the heck happened so I typed up my thoughts without thinking. XD I do that sometimes. Say or type stuff without fully thinking it through. XD

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TBriddle In reply to Whimsical-Wings [2017-08-29 17:35:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

Yes... I noticed it did not come off as I intended... Hm... I'll remember that next time. However, I'll edit the ring bearer part. My intention was for it to come off as Nicole felt like Nikki was with them in spirit but this was a short story so I don't think I put too much thought into it however, it was meant to kind of sound like he hadn't comfortably accepted her yet because that made sense to me so that part was intentional. I feel over time Dr. Ellidy would stop comparing her to Nikki and instead finally recognize she is her own "person" in a sense. Although, yeah, Nikki's passing might needed to have been mentioned but I didn't want Ellidy to because I feel like he has always avoiding the subject of his daughter's passing and it would take some time for him to really accept it.

I don't remember using an abbreviation? I don't think I had used an abbreviation. I'll read over it but I swear I didn't. I made many mistakes but that one is certainly one that would stand out to me as I don't like to abbreviate in a story. It distracts you from the storyline. >.>

It actually meant a lot to me I did that. It was important to me and I don't exactly know why it was except that it justified how I saw Sally as a character and what others often overlook.

I did that for pure robo humor. XD

Yeah, I think Nicole would have her emotions going every which way because she hasn't necessarily gripped the concept of emotion. It's only when in Shard's present I think she forgets how confusing emotions are. And yes, I worked hard on Shard. Really dang hard. XD I'm good with humor so I felt he was simpler than I thought he would be. XD

Thank you and she said she loved it when giving it a read over when I asked about the accuracy of personality. 

Also, thank you for your criticism, as it helps me as a writer. I'll go fix that bearer thing now as I want to make sure it's edited nicely. XD I'll keep the Dr. Ellidy part there because it proves I'm not perfect in my writing.

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Whimsical-Wings In reply to TBriddle [2017-08-30 05:42:50 +0000 UTC]

It's perfectly alright that you see the characters differently from how I do~
That's the joy of creative freedom! I just thought I'd put my thoughts out there ;v;

Ah no no, I don't think anyone ever expects a writer to be perfect! However it is important to improve at every chance and not just leave your flaws out there just for the sake of having flaws. There was nothing "wrong" with your writing of Dr. Ellidy, I just wanted to throw my opinions at you XD
And, no problemo, Birdy~! I hope to see more writing from you in the future!

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TBriddle In reply to Whimsical-Wings [2017-08-30 16:01:42 +0000 UTC]

No, I mean, I didn't want to completely change it as I did already post it and feel like that would be cheating for the contest. If it wasn't for a contest I would gladly go up there and fix it. ^^ At least it's hardly noticeable and can be brushed off as my opinion. I just had to fix the grammatical errors though... I cringe when seeing them. XD

I respect your opinion and actually agree with it in many ways. XD Aw... Thank you! You're the best! I hope I do write more.  

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Whimsical-Wings In reply to TBriddle [2017-08-30 20:45:58 +0000 UTC]

Well usually the rules of contests are you can change your entry as much as you want until the due-date, but I also appreciate your desire to be honest in your entry! ^v^

Yeah, character interactions are debatable but grammar isn't as muchhh XD

I can't wait to see it if you do! ^A^

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TBriddle In reply to Whimsical-Wings [2017-08-31 05:07:41 +0000 UTC]

I want to be honest. I suffer from this thing that I can't exactly explain so I would feel guilty. XD

True, true. XD

I SHALL TAG YOU FIRST

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Burningstarlight17 [2017-08-29 14:57:35 +0000 UTC]

I cried myself reading this. Nice job!

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TBriddle In reply to Burningstarlight17 [2017-08-29 15:04:03 +0000 UTC]

:') OMD! THANK YOU!!

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Burningstarlight17 In reply to TBriddle [2017-08-30 00:56:30 +0000 UTC]

You're so welcome!

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TBriddle In reply to Burningstarlight17 [2017-08-30 01:03:06 +0000 UTC]

  

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BionicD4C [2017-08-29 13:19:44 +0000 UTC]

I just remembered something intersecting, have you heard that the Archie Sonic being axed?

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TBriddle In reply to BionicD4C [2017-08-29 13:49:09 +0000 UTC]

Yes. XD That's the whole point of the contest.

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BionicD4C In reply to TBriddle [2017-08-29 14:01:55 +0000 UTC]

I see, do you know who is going to continuing it?

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TBriddle In reply to BionicD4C [2017-08-29 14:08:33 +0000 UTC]

Well... There are going to be Sonic comics but the Archie storyline most likely won't be continued. The comic will be produced by the same company that makes My Little Pony comics, Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle comics, and Transformers comics.

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BionicD4C In reply to TBriddle [2017-08-29 14:08:50 +0000 UTC]

IDW

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TBriddle In reply to BionicD4C [2017-08-29 14:11:10 +0000 UTC]

Yes, that. I forgot for a second. XD

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BionicD4C In reply to TBriddle [2017-08-29 14:14:42 +0000 UTC]

Their are really Good, pacifically with Transformers

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TBriddle In reply to BionicD4C [2017-08-29 14:18:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. But I will miss the old storyline. :')

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BionicD4C In reply to TBriddle [2017-08-29 14:29:03 +0000 UTC]

I would think you would

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TBriddle In reply to BionicD4C [2017-08-29 14:30:53 +0000 UTC]

I especially liked the newer universe storyline unlike most  Archie Sonic fans. 

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BionicD4C In reply to TBriddle [2017-08-29 14:32:25 +0000 UTC]

I don't know basically anything about the comics so I don't have a opinion on it

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TBriddle In reply to BionicD4C [2017-08-29 14:34:17 +0000 UTC]

Well, in a way that makes me happy because I didn't want to get in an argument about which was better. XD

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BionicD4C In reply to TBriddle [2017-08-29 14:51:40 +0000 UTC]

Still don't understand it but ok

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TBriddle In reply to BionicD4C [2017-08-29 15:04:10 +0000 UTC]

XD

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BionicD4C In reply to TBriddle [2017-08-29 15:06:16 +0000 UTC]

Cool thing happened i while a go, Haos got a Skype and we have been talking

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TBriddle In reply to BionicD4C [2017-08-29 15:10:46 +0000 UTC]

That's nice. ^^

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BionicD4C In reply to TBriddle [2017-08-29 15:12:41 +0000 UTC]

I guess, you still don't have one?

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TBriddle In reply to BionicD4C [2017-08-29 15:39:20 +0000 UTC]

No. I'm sorry.

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BionicD4C In reply to TBriddle [2017-08-29 15:39:38 +0000 UTC]

K

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SonicFanGirl321 [2017-08-29 08:01:02 +0000 UTC]

Cheers!   

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TBriddle In reply to SonicFanGirl321 [2017-08-29 11:51:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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SonicFanGirl321 In reply to TBriddle [2017-08-29 11:56:14 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. By the way, if I may suggest, you could pair Sally with Manic or something.

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TBriddle In reply to SonicFanGirl321 [2017-08-29 12:03:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I do pair them. I ship many Sonic couples. There's only a small few I hate. XD I just wish I could think of a good story for them.

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SonicFanGirl321 In reply to TBriddle [2017-08-29 13:27:29 +0000 UTC]

Me too! Maybe I can help?

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TBriddle In reply to SonicFanGirl321 [2017-08-29 13:49:48 +0000 UTC]

Really? Thank you. ^^

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SonicFanGirl321 In reply to TBriddle [2017-08-29 14:04:56 +0000 UTC]

Yep, I suppose you're wondering 'why'? My pleasure.

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