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Elite-Pirate [2011-07-09 15:50:10 +0000 UTC]
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So for starters, this is a piece that seriously needs to be viewed at max-resolution - for one because size-compression creates horrific aliasing, but also because it really is gorgeous to look at, overall.
So that's the first bit with this: it looks great. The palette is smart, eye-catching, vibrant, and overall very effective. You've got my eyes traveling over the details in something roughly approaching ocular ecstasy - which I think is a great way of describing the intended effect.
However, beyond the center of the picture the details begin to thin out. The coloring of the ship in the distance, for instance, (ha!) is not nearly as blended as it is with, say, our three fellows up front. The ground is sort of this lazy-looking, indistinct river of brown tones. The two dead Banshees off to the side aren't even that distinct - they're sort of half-done, just sitting there, an afterthought lost to another afterthought. The weird, half-overturned structure just standing there looks like it's meant to be some example of Eldar architecture, but it's not entirely complete.
And I'll just comment that when one can see a planetoid at that size from ground-level, it means some pretty bad shit's going to happen to the world the viewer is standing on. Just
Torturer looks absolutely amazing. Every bit of his armor is exquisitely-rendered, and his overall pose is really nice. I have to wonder, though, just how easy it is to maintain a posture like that with the weight of those enormous turbofans strapped to his back, seemingly also in idle.
Now here are the problems with his overall design:
The spike with the Imperial Fist head on it is sort of lolrandom, appearing to jut out from the center of a speaker-grille - furthermore that head itself is kind of questionable, as the dude's tongue is sticking out of the air-filter, along with the whole front of his face. Given the design of the helmets, both here and in-general, it would imply the dude's got a snout.
That gun that Torturer has strung across his crotch -- the one with the little vial of goop sticking out of it -- looks really stupid the way it's positioned, because I get the feeling that if he moves his left leg wrong it'll snap that thing in two. It looks really impractical and overall isn't particularly necessary.
So, the Eldar:
The two's armor suits look great - a departure from the standard design, but innovative. The shuriken pistol on the right is a bit more separated from the standard Eldar aesthetic, with a clunkier overall shape that I'm not sure really suits the Eldar's tendency for sleek and weapon designs.
The one on the left has some questionable posing, but overall looks great. Really vibrant colors, though the war mask looks a bit too big.
The one on the right has a really great pose, but that's sort of where my good thoughts end. She looks really fucking weird. The absence of her mouth-filter is extremely strange and kind of an odd way of getting to her face, since Aspect Warrior war masks tend to be just that - masks that connect to their armor, singular pieces. Her eyes are way too large for that face (hell, that skull) and her ears are too big as also too big to look good. The pieces the tentacles are taking off don't seem to fit anywhere on her body, either. Her breasts are kind of lumpy and slightly misshapen, too. I have some slight grief as well with the skin-tones on her torso being strangely-lit overall.
I'll also comment that it seems odd he managed to also take off the suits' underarmor bodyglove as well without removing the rest of the plating.
So, some nitpicking aside, this is a fun piece to look at. I'll have to argue the point of calling it your best so-far, but it's nice in-general.
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Walking-Maelstrom [2010-10-14 20:41:07 +0000 UTC]
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If these were Imperial women, then Cailean would give a damn and pound Torturer's face in.
However, that doesn't stop me from critiquing. First and foremost the vivid display of colors with the Eldar is what impressed me the most. The colors, look, and detail into the Banshees are fabulous and I can tell your advice from Sokil (sp?) paid off. One thing troubles me, and that's the lack of the look of terror from the Banshee without a mask. Unless she's submitting herself it just doesn't seem very fitting for what is to become of her. And while I have to make it a compliment sandwich, I'll add with a question about the Engine of Obscenity (pinkish hull?). How close is it to Torturer, or how high is Torturer up from base level? I assume it's just overhead, but want to be sure. I've also said it before, the Blood Angel's helmet also looks somewhat boxy, but I understand that's also your technique and go with it.
Now for moar good. Since you're a stickler for it, body positioning fails not, especially with the helmeted Banshee, as if you caught her mid air. Your own appearance with jointed legs and a merciless grin in your mask alludes to the fear and terror aspect you heretics are so fond of. Gory as always with the severed Fist head and what's about to happen to the Eldar. I love what you did with your powerfist too, the clenched fist displaying dominance and utter debauchery to follow. Well done for a 188K appreciation pic...of course this is before Cailean vaporizes your body and soul.
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TD-Vice In reply to Walking-Maelstrom [2010-10-14 21:05:54 +0000 UTC]
But since it's Eldar women, it's AWWWWRIGHT?) Hehe.
Ah, it wasn't advice, it was blatant design burrowing - with my customization of course.
To answer your question about the Banshee, I'll just say that you have to pay attention to detail, that's the whole point - look, and you'll see that she is being strangled and suffocated with a tentacle. Therefore, had already slipped into a blissful state of near-unconciousness, where a person doesn't really care what's going to happen to him/her. Hence the open mouth, etc.
Ah, don't ask about the ship. I threw it there on the latest stage, as you know, so it's just there to make the composition pretty)
Durr hurr, we'll see who evaportates who
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Walking-Maelstrom In reply to TD-Vice [2010-10-14 22:24:34 +0000 UTC]
Sure is.
Ah...customization, roger. Yeah upon second look I see dat stranglin' so now the look is more understandable. I'm sure Proto's already feeling the butthurt from that one.
Never mind what I said about the ship.
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Chucklefugs [2019-01-17 08:08:05 +0000 UTC]
how lewd!
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DeantheFoul [2013-12-06 00:10:28 +0000 UTC]
Boobs- check
Rape- check
Chaos- check
Slaanesh- check
Badasssery- check
I have absolutely no idea how I could not have come across this before. Its amazing, its chaotic, its great.
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Waitingforyoualways [2013-08-17 18:55:42 +0000 UTC]
Love the detail and texture in this one, though the one on the right looks like she is secretly enjoying it. Drugs perhaps?
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emprahsque23 [2013-08-14 21:31:02 +0000 UTC]
How'd the armor parts disappear?Ā
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TD-Vice In reply to emprahsque23 [2013-08-14 21:34:49 +0000 UTC]
tentacles ripped em off
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emprahsque23 In reply to TD-Vice [2013-08-16 04:33:43 +0000 UTC]
Got one where he's with a dark eldar female? Their both extremely morally and sexually(?, its not just sex) depraved beings, who have crossed the Moral Event Horizon
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Willroy [2013-03-27 04:39:18 +0000 UTC]
holy shit this is cool
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VeteserusLupus [2013-03-22 09:31:11 +0000 UTC]
Greeting) May I ask, have you record you drawing? I'am very want see how you work. Sorry for my english) This art is perfect))))
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DasTierLockjaw [2013-03-04 05:53:00 +0000 UTC]
Ooooh, love the colors and overall look of this piece! And those eyes of his... how I love the look he has hehehe. Very lovely work, keep it up! Also... hope those spikes arent TOO sharp... otherwise that could be quite..... not very healthy ._.
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Lasagnaface [2013-02-28 02:59:17 +0000 UTC]
Aww man i'm so cool i make shitty warhammer porn, i get mad pussy from folks
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TD-Vice In reply to GreyRoseMistress [2013-02-08 08:42:38 +0000 UTC]
That's flattering to hear, because what I meant Torturer to be is a non-stupid, non-cardboard Chaos Lord which are mostly absent in the lore.
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DasTierLockjaw In reply to GreyRoseMistress [2013-03-04 05:55:48 +0000 UTC]
I'm a bit curious how he would react to someone.... thats more curious about him than all "ARG, IM GONNA KILL YOU!" or flat out scared.... cuz honestly, I get curious about things that look like this... and fascinated by it as well >_> likely not good for me but meh.
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GreyRoseMistress In reply to DasTierLockjaw [2013-04-26 22:17:15 +0000 UTC]
Nope. Not good for you at all. A sure sign of impending corruption, in fact. I guess you'll just have to be purged for that at some point. You know, to save your soul and what-not. XD
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GreyRoseMistress In reply to DasTierLockjaw [2013-06-22 22:12:33 +0000 UTC]
Since when do Imperials ask if you WANTED your soul saved? >_> Dicks. Never ask... just flame first... *sigh*
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mmpratt99 [2013-02-08 04:36:29 +0000 UTC]
I'm rather curious about those weird tentacle things. How exactly does he make those Lovecraftian devices?
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TheBrittsterOfDoom [2012-12-10 01:44:14 +0000 UTC]
After seeing this, I had a dream with your Torturer guy in it.
I was terrified.
And I thank you for it.
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CommisarJakster [2012-11-24 14:55:48 +0000 UTC]
Rape. Delicious rape.
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DasTierLockjaw In reply to CommisarJakster [2013-03-04 05:49:31 +0000 UTC]
mmmn, depending on how sharp those spikes are.. I'm not too sure it could be called that... well, if I were them at least, LOL!
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StephenFauster [2012-11-14 21:41:54 +0000 UTC]
Looking at the picture, I'm curious as to how the discs in the pistol go from a vertical standpoint to a horizontal one in the barrel, I may just be nitpicking, but I find it irksome.
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xSilenz [2012-08-20 19:44:39 +0000 UTC]
Awesome. Just like most of your work.
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XeroNecross [2012-05-02 16:56:08 +0000 UTC]
Slaanesh!
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artisninja [2012-03-25 15:14:11 +0000 UTC]
Whilst I feel sorry for the eldar they should not dress like that so...
Haha, great peice and colours man, and as people have said anatomy is great
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Synthomatic [2012-02-23 18:34:24 +0000 UTC]
Great. now whenever i play chaos, im going to be imagining my banshees getting tentacled.
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GrenAcid [2012-01-31 13:59:53 +0000 UTC]
Just like any other wh40k work of yours....strait awful
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Gen1969 [2012-01-25 19:39:16 +0000 UTC]
I love this. The colors, the composition. Simply fantastic.
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TD-Vice In reply to Gen1969 [2012-01-25 20:06:17 +0000 UTC]
thanks!!
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Khiralas [2012-01-23 02:13:10 +0000 UTC]
I'm... In utter awe. The artwork aside, I adore how you've rendered Torturer, and I find myself getting lost in the details. In fact, I got so lost I didn't even register the whole Slaaneshi-tentacles-of-doom encroaching on Eldar territory, there. The colours are vibrant and eye-catching, and while the background is vague I find myself not caring, as it seems like it's there to tie things together and not be a focal point.
I can't say too much more, honestly. Speechless, favourited, watching, and recommending to other Warhammer/Artist friends.
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namezong [2011-12-31 12:47:51 +0000 UTC]
very cool art. but fluffwise you would need to get them out of their battle-trance, or they won't be very ... receptive.
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Synthomatic [2011-12-15 22:57:53 +0000 UTC]
oh god...the tentacles...i am never playing against chaos again...
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TheBroodMother [2011-11-07 12:52:39 +0000 UTC]
The Dark Prince would be proud!
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UmbrellaCorpUS [2011-10-30 19:59:10 +0000 UTC]
That piece of art is deep. At least if I'm interpreting it like you meant it.
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Redfoxbennington [2011-10-30 19:52:06 +0000 UTC]
Whats wrong with you?
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Redfoxbennington In reply to TD-Vice [2011-10-30 22:20:01 +0000 UTC]
I don't remember. That's the problem. I don't remember.
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CHIKN404 [2011-10-23 22:36:05 +0000 UTC]
Why does that Imperial Fist head have such a long tongue?
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Kakutachi [2011-10-23 21:53:44 +0000 UTC]
ICH WILL SO EINE ENERGIE FAUST!!!
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Jeht-Maverick [2011-10-16 04:50:55 +0000 UTC]
So, if I'm right, this guy is a Slaaneshi Noise Marine?
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