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Myrethy [2014-08-22 18:00:00 +0000 UTC]
Gotta love the panel with Melle WA-CHOKing Azog in the face with her boot! She got some moves!
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TeaDarkA In reply to Myrethy [2014-09-23 00:18:54 +0000 UTC]
indeed, she has a lot of nervs... Perhapse too much.
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AnimeWolf13 [2013-10-15 20:10:13 +0000 UTC]
i'm really loving this
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LegendaryAvenger [2013-10-06 22:55:21 +0000 UTC]
You know, I'm nitpicking but.... isn't Orc blood black?
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TeaDarkA In reply to LegendaryAvenger [2013-10-07 00:39:16 +0000 UTC]
I really don't know if its black or dark red...
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LegendaryAvenger In reply to TeaDarkA [2013-10-07 03:49:28 +0000 UTC]
I remember it being black and "sour". In the movies, it was jet black. It's cool that you include Orc females. Ever since the movies, everyone thinks that they pop right out of the ground (like Dwarves or something).
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TeaDarkA In reply to LegendaryAvenger [2014-01-15 02:49:45 +0000 UTC]
I saw some movie again, and indeed, its black....
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aniwablue [2013-10-02 02:24:12 +0000 UTC]
Wow, c'est tellement triste et si touchant... Et en même temps, je me doutais que ça allait tourner de manière tragique. Enfin...! C'est superbe...!
En tout cas! Azog s'est prit un sacré coup de botte dans le nez! En comprend qu'il voyait rouge, par la suite! Il ne connait pas la pitié! Mais je me demande bien c'était quoi ce Flash-Back qui l'a si soudainement calmé...!
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TeaDarkA In reply to aniwablue [2013-12-25 21:50:50 +0000 UTC]
Oui, Melle est plus forte qu'elle en a l'aire. Mais ça devrait ce régler bientot
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SkekLa [2013-10-01 15:58:03 +0000 UTC]
HEY!!! NEW CHAPTER!!! I'm glad you made it!!!
First of all: I LOVED Naamee!!!!...Burzum's mate!!! True, orc women are not often seen in Tolkien's world...but then again, whatever you think of them, orcs had mates too, and they either probably trained them to fight side by side with men (In which case it would've been difficult to difference one from another during war) OR kept them off the war business, trying to put a safe distance between their children and mates and the ongoing disaster...(That's why we don't see them, in a trilogy which speaks mostly of the warpath and the warring sides.)
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED HER!!!....Though I regret knowing what Aragorn did after the war...
"Cleansing" of the lands I find...quite awful. I know. One should favor beautiful blond-human-men and women in favor of "ugly, monstery" orcs...but for me, however they look like and whatever race they're form, THEY'RE ALL PEOPLE!...And slaughter is slaughter...So I honestly want to believe "ART CAN SAVE YOU", orcs...
At leassst, the onesess who didn't held me captive and tortured me!...Usss...
And then...There's THIS THING Azog did...
It leaves me, the same time, a feeling of both:
SSSSTOP IT,BIG ORC! You hurtsss the poor girl!!!
AND, ALSO:
He doesssn't belong there at all...He'sss going crazy with pain and even melancholy,though he can't express either, and being what he isss, he can't help bursssting like he did...but if he goess on like thiss, both the girl and the warg might die during of one of hisss loses of temper...WHAT TO DO???
VERY WELL DONE!!!
You were wrong in your foreseeing, however: I DO NOT HATE YOU!!! I think you made Azog exactly like he would probably be in this context!...
Mad, violent, even unsufferable to be with...but that doesn't mean he doesn't have reasons to be like that!
I might not like what he did...but I understand why he did it, and I am sorry for him.
He also misses his mate, evidently...Melle reminds him of her...but she's probably long gone, just like his son, Bolg...How would anyone feel about that?...
And then..being a three feet tall, HUGE orc...can't hold all the feels...and simply attacks whatever reminds him of them, for he can't bare it.
I LOVED THIS PAGE!!! (Plus, your english is getting better and better!!! I have my struggles with that, too...XD)
Can't wait to see the next one, my friend! EXCELLENT JOB!!! THUMBS UP!
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TeaDarkA In reply to SkekLa [2013-10-01 22:45:21 +0000 UTC]
YEA FOR DA FEMALE ORCS !!!!!
I don't know for the real story, but I'm sure they fight with theire mate. I plan to put Orc couple in Burzum 'S Elite Armie. After all, cutting some head is a nice Honey moon for orc
Yea, I just hate so much Aragon for this. Hu.... * faith in humanity lowering*
You understand him perfectly. Perfectly . I know its hard, even myself I fund I went too far for Melle. But I won't be good fan of Azog if I change how he is. And yus, Melle remind him his mate. (Did you recognize the female because she got the same hair as Bolg or its something els? ).
I plan to make people change their mind about Azog in the next page. Yea. That will be good. Otherwise, Warg are gonna came and me
I saw theme and its hard... In fact its very unfaire for Sméagole. But At the same time, I can't forgive Gollume for eat baby Goblin... An adult goblin, ok. but a baby thats other thing.
But if he attack a adult orc, I don't care. Seriously. He suffered enought in the Torture Room. Too much. Orcs will deserve it. If the Torturer come back for hurt Sméagole, let me tell ya that I will make sure Warg will have nice Orc Torturer candy for breakfast !
And thankx so much
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SkekLa In reply to TeaDarkA [2013-10-07 16:46:28 +0000 UTC]
There must be moar on them!!!
HAHAHAH YES!!!...XD
And probably the females are too big and proud to be able to tell them to "stay home"
Lowering?...Mine's almost completely gone!!!...(Humansess never were nice to me...usss...to orcsess either! )
Well, at least he didn't murder her... I am sorry for her...she appears to be badly wounded...but at least she's alive!
Then...yes, you must keep the character you lovein character...(HA , eveyrone says I don't, but I think I do!)...I think my Gollum and Sméagol are interpreted as different persons in a same body, but if I mostly represent Sméagol is because he's the one I actually like...because of all he's been through, all alone...poor guy. I think that's why some people think I make "A TOO NICE GOLLUM"...When he's nice he's NOT Gollum...it's that easy...
Strill, sometimes I wonder if I'm doing it right...¬.¬U
AH! On the female...yes, what made me recognize her (besides the hair color, same as Bolg's) was the fact that you used a transposition of images where Azog, actually seeing Melle, thought of someone else, and it was obviously a female...so, the rest is logical. Your narration style works!
NAAAAH don't let the wargs eat you!...You can make it! I know you can!
Oh yeah...but...about the babies, I have an entire theory! XD (Too much time reconstructing Sméagol/Gollum's story)
I'll try and resume it...In the hobbit, (the real Tolkien book) it's stated that he ate "Goblin imps" Meaning Goblin youngs...I always imagined that as "teens" or something...why?...Well, being as he is, so torn in two, when confronted with Gollum's scheme, in the two towers, to hurt and/or/kill Frodo for the ring, what does he react like?..."No, not kind master, not that hobbit...we must not harm the nice hobbit" etc...so...could REALLY such a person,even being crazed by hunger, kill and eat a baby?...I don't know for sure...What I think, personally, and what I reconstructed (I even have stories on this) is he looked bad, and was in the wrong time at the wrong places. In one of my stories, (from the drawing of the orc family I've in my gallery) Sméagol, looking for something to eat and wishing he can get some good meat from an orc or goblin bounty, finds this family: a woman and two children. One, a kid, the other a baby. Gollum inmediately thinks "It's a feast" and tells him they must get to snatch the baby. Sméagol feels his stomach turn at the thought, and denies it. Gollum then forces their body to leap forth to the cave, but Sméagol, making a great effort, resists the impulse and turns round, running away. Gollum (as I see it, more or less possession-like) has the ability to submit Sméagol through pain, when not obedient...so he emmits a sharp boiling pain through his chest...but he still doesn't stop. Finally, they slip on the corner of a passage and roll down some feet to a ditch. Sméagol feels exhausted and hurt, but is happy, because they couldn't go back and hunt now...he doesn't want to eat a so defenseless thing, even if he must starve...
Then there's another story on human babies...in esgaroth. There, in my reconstruction, Sméagol creeps through a window in a house. A simple log cabin. There he steals some dried meat and ham, happy to have found this new tasty food. The rooms are simple and small, so the place where the baby of the family sleeps is a basket near the table. The baby notices the presence and starts making noises and finally cries. Smeagol tells him to shut up, but it's no use. Then Gollum proposes they must steal him as food...Sméagol, again, denies it, and convinces Gollum the raw dried meat is better...then, a woman opens the door and walks in. She had been out for a moment, probably tending for the chicken or gathering firewood. She freezes at the sight. A weird, bald, skinny thing, haunched near his baby's basket...and the baby cires louder and louder. The woman inmediately begins throwing things at him, and Sméagol runs off with a handful of dried meat. The whole town is wawken by the desperate screams of the woman, who claims "there's a monster in the forest who sucks blood, and tried to eat her baby"...
The rest is almost an urban legend...At the mere sight of him, people would point at him like the "forest creature", the "baby stealer".
I couldn't think of anything more logical...that's the stuff popular legends are made of...
WAAAAH I WENT TOO FAR FETCHED!!! Forgive me!!!
I wonder what would you think of my hypothesis on the "baby business"...
Hahaha, then, about adult orcs...it's a...cleaner fight?...Seriously, I don't know, when Smeagol's deisarmed and even too naked...fighting against a bigger oponent...but they're both adults, at least!...And that did sure happen...it's even written he did eat some orc here and there...after mordor I wouldn't find it strange...
YAY!!! Canssss we feed the nice white warg puppy with orc torturersess candy???
Thanks for always hearing my babblings!!!
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TeaDarkA In reply to SkekLa [2014-01-15 02:59:20 +0000 UTC]
Indeed, femal orcs got balls! XD
I hate to generalize.... So I just say my faith lowering...
No, its ok, you didn't went too far, I like lil reading like these one... it help to understand.
Like I said once, I don't if he hurt a Torturer Orcs... Except if this one didn't wanted to do his job maybe....
YES, candy Torturer orcs XD
yw honey
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SkekLa In reply to TeaDarkA [2014-01-23 16:15:53 +0000 UTC]
Yes they do!!!
You're still a believer...I respect that!
YAY!!!...That's all I ever wanted...I am smeagol's advocate...kind of...
I don't think he could do any harm to the torturers, in the state he was while in mordor...the poor thing was tormented for years n a daily basis...it's surprising enough that he lived it through!
YUMMY...
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ADFTlove [2013-09-30 15:24:07 +0000 UTC]
Azog you....you *hugs Melle tight* GGGGRRRRRRRRRRR
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TeaDarkA In reply to ADFTlove [2013-10-01 02:20:31 +0000 UTC]
Don't be mad at him. He is who he is. And trust me, if there is a thing that could break Melle's heart would the pale orc's death.
But I admit, I've been quite hard with Melle... maby too much.
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TeaDarkA In reply to ADFTlove [2013-10-01 21:56:11 +0000 UTC]
Yo must understand this:
Azog is in the Third Age. a periode of time where he do not belong ( the Hobbit movie is in the second Age I think).
And he isn't supposed to be here. He is supposed to be dead. Well, in the hobbit movie, knowing Peter Jackson, he will probably die because he is the "bad orc". Anyway, He is in a period of time were he do not belong. His mate , the mother of Bolg, is dead there is a long time of that and his son Bolg too. His pale warg too, witch mean he is all alone.
He is confused, frustrated, and in a way , afraid of the new age. And he is an Orc. All of this make him EXTREMELY nervous and fearfull. In this context, an Orc can become dangerous.
I'm not giving him any excuse, what he did was wrong. But let me tell you he will suffer from this, and Melle made him remember from is mate so...
Its do a will I saw it..... but it always nice to see it again.
Also, is the mother of Raven and Suzan were Adra?
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ADFTlove In reply to TeaDarkA [2013-10-02 11:48:35 +0000 UTC]
they are not sisters and no they are different goddess X) but they are friends which maybe I'll make them
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Jakara92 [2013-09-30 09:46:43 +0000 UTC]
new chapter *_* I love it
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Katniss-Everdeen16 [2013-09-29 19:42:48 +0000 UTC]
Amazingly sad! (In a good way. ^^)
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Hexopolis [2013-09-29 19:32:23 +0000 UTC]
I've said it before, but you get better and better!
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TeaDarkA In reply to Hexopolis [2013-09-29 21:33:32 +0000 UTC]
thankx so much
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Hexopolis In reply to TeaDarkA [2013-09-29 23:08:54 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! :3
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PyodeKantra [2013-09-29 18:58:09 +0000 UTC]
Nice! There is going to be another page?
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TeaDarkA In reply to PyodeKantra [2013-09-29 19:20:55 +0000 UTC]
tu peux me parllez en Français... ( a moin que tu veux pratiqué l'anglais ...)
But yes, there will, but in a ling time... I really, but really have to start some homework -___-;
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PyodeKantra In reply to TeaDarkA [2013-09-29 19:43:54 +0000 UTC]
(lol c'est l'habitude lol XD)
hehe ok ^^
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TeaDarkA In reply to PyodeKantra [2013-09-29 19:46:04 +0000 UTC]
lol, ça m'arrive aussi XD
Aussi, j'ai mis un " previous page avec des link des page précédente au cas ou y'en a qui s'en peuve pas d'attendre.
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TeaDarkA In reply to Orquwen [2013-09-29 19:21:49 +0000 UTC]
thanks so ! I'm happy to see that it made day
and welcome
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