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Published: 2012-06-23 00:06:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 5001; Favourites: 88; Downloads: 32
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RAICHU ROGUES: SIDE MISSION- Head to Alomomola City and Subsitute for Dee!
The Bandit Bros

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You don't always have to go through something alone.

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YEAH
ITS DONE
WOOOooo
I'm so glad the mission is over and I just really hope all you guys enjoyed it!
I have many thanks to give, and here's a big thank you to all my readers. All the comments and faves motivate me to finish my pages- and gosh I just have to thank you for even looking at my work.

At midpoint of the story I was getting really afraid about how the story would go, but it went out better than I expected, and I still got to make the ending the way I imagined it weeks ago.

Personally I think this has got to be one of my most favorite missions, no, among the best. I got to flesh out some of my characters, experiment with atmosphere, mood, colors and story. The story isn't perfect, but I tried my best at making it a bit more complicated, and I'm glad to even put effort in that.

It was a good mission, wow, actually, my longest mission so far.
But anyhow, I still have a lot to improve on, and I'm already seeing some of my weak points, so I'm excited to start focusing on those soon.

That said, crits are always welcome! Honestly, tear it apart, that will be good for me.

But yes, I hope you all enjoyed this comic as much as I did. Now it's time for me to go rest after all those long and hard hours!
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Comments: 82

LuckyCap In reply to ??? [2016-02-08 18:12:17 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry....you aren't alone (god I feel so stupid)

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KemonoApocalypse [2012-07-08 14:58:33 +0000 UTC]

Chi, you're so amazing. You're one of those people who make me want to try harder and quit all at the same time. hahaha

Keep up the good work.

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TeaDino In reply to KemonoApocalypse [2012-07-09 05:37:34 +0000 UTC]

Awh man what!!
Don't ever quit, alright, you totally can do it!!
Also I'm glad to be that inspiring!

Also thanks so much ;w;/

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KemonoApocalypse In reply to TeaDino [2012-07-09 14:34:52 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! And yeah, I strive to reach your awesomeness level

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cpdx1 [2012-06-29 03:47:22 +0000 UTC]

liked it alot

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TeaDino In reply to cpdx1 [2012-06-30 06:39:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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cpdx1 In reply to TeaDino [2012-06-30 10:18:45 +0000 UTC]

npb

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SpringDragonfly [2012-06-27 00:44:28 +0000 UTC]

Great story.

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TeaDino In reply to SpringDragonfly [2012-06-27 03:45:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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SpringDragonfly In reply to TeaDino [2012-06-27 12:34:09 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Rising-Sea [2012-06-25 05:52:37 +0000 UTC]

YESSSSSSS

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Pepelu-Haruhara [2012-06-25 03:07:57 +0000 UTC]

aaaaaah...that was such a great ending...! <3 I seriously love how you wrapped it all up in a nice bundle ending, there! <3 Seriously some good writing in this!

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TeaDino In reply to Pepelu-Haruhara [2012-06-26 07:28:47 +0000 UTC]

gosh thanks so much!!
I'm glad you love it u3u/

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Pepelu-Haruhara In reply to TeaDino [2012-06-26 17:51:16 +0000 UTC]

kee! >w<

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dostheninja [2012-06-24 08:53:27 +0000 UTC]

Late congrats on finishing comic!

Secret congrats on getting minecraft!

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TeaDino In reply to dostheninja [2012-06-26 07:30:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks dos!
And thanks!! hehe tonight I'll punch all the pigs

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MiaMaha [2012-06-24 07:40:22 +0000 UTC]

FINALLY. I finally got the time to read through your whole mission! XD

Boy oh boy, I just can't expect any less from you, huh~? Everytime I see your work, it just looks amazing~ This mission was wonderful...! I loved the character development in it and watching the scenes unfold...and learning more and more about the characters, yes~! X3 Art-wise, you did a wonderful job. I can't help but take a bit of time to look over your drawings and just admire them. XP

GAH, NEW MEMBER THOUGH!! AND it's an Absol! A FEMALE Absol! With a missing leg...gets better and better~! >X'D She's already sooo interesting! Jeebus, I can't wait to see more of her, Kai!

Keep up the great work~!

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TeaDino In reply to MiaMaha [2012-06-26 07:34:20 +0000 UTC]

woah oh goodness thanks so much Mia!!
thanks so much for reading ahh dang Im glad you enjoyed it! UuU/

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sapphireluna [2012-06-24 01:14:15 +0000 UTC]

FRIENDSHIP IS MAGIC!!!11

Awesome job! I tried looking for something to critique, but I couldn't find anything XD

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TeaDino In reply to sapphireluna [2012-06-26 07:35:59 +0000 UTC]

omg then they became bronies forever

and thanks for the thought of critting!

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Owlflight29 [2012-06-23 20:42:10 +0000 UTC]

who's the scrafty? he appeared in numerous places! The start of this mission, when Buddy join a group. Who is he/she?"

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TeaDino In reply to Owlflight29 [2012-06-26 07:36:12 +0000 UTC]

We only know his name is 'S'!

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Owlflight29 In reply to TeaDino [2012-06-29 07:20:00 +0000 UTC]

Epic name! is his parents B and W?
awesome name!
's' hmm.... 's'.... Boy... you made a very mysterious character Kai

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TeaDino In reply to Owlflight29 [2012-06-30 18:03:26 +0000 UTC]

B? W? Who knows
And yes, yes I do

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Chiiasa In reply to Owlflight29 [2012-06-24 03:19:55 +0000 UTC]

She's (if I remember right) is in the bro's background story if you go look it up c:

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Owlflight29 In reply to Chiiasa [2012-06-24 07:09:47 +0000 UTC]

i know! (sorry if i read snappy like)
i wonder who she is? A good friend? someone kind? someone who used to be in the gang but left? i don't really know, but i'm very very curious.

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Chiiasa In reply to Owlflight29 [2012-06-30 20:58:56 +0000 UTC]

I...think the leader maybe?
Sorry, late reply. Went on a trip.

I'm sure we'll find out some day xD

And you didn't sound snappy to me c:

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Owlflight29 In reply to Chiiasa [2012-06-30 21:17:47 +0000 UTC]

thanks c:
I don't mind the late reply as long as you don't mind my snail slow working and tons of editing.

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Kinetii [2012-06-23 20:12:28 +0000 UTC]

"Magic comes from right here..
Oh boy! WHERE? :,D
The Heart

.. WHAAAA,
But. . But BAH ARGH!
Have I been living in a magic lie? :c

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Shiro-Aura [2012-06-23 19:31:52 +0000 UTC]

Awwww, how cute!!! And Aether is awesome! I just hope we can find out more about him/her.

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TeaDino In reply to Shiro-Aura [2012-06-30 06:45:09 +0000 UTC]

Soon, my friend, soon

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Luckysweep [2012-06-23 18:00:12 +0000 UTC]

Johnny Rotom. What is that refering to? I can't find the reference.

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TeaDino In reply to Luckysweep [2012-06-30 06:45:37 +0000 UTC]

It's a popular old fashioned hamburger restaurant in america :>

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Sherlu [2012-06-23 17:57:25 +0000 UTC]

;_; so beutiful

;_; so amazing

and..... ;_; so awesome

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TeaDino In reply to Sherlu [2012-06-24 01:42:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Luckysweep [2012-06-23 17:55:06 +0000 UTC]

Now who is that scrafty?

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SapphireMiuJewel [2012-06-23 06:26:07 +0000 UTC]

Yay!~ Happy endings!~ >W<

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smoking-giraffe [2012-06-23 06:16:24 +0000 UTC]

what an awesome ending!

And that gang leader at the end. YES! We may have only seen him sparingly, but I already find him a really intriguing character. It's just the fact that he doesn't really seem like a bad guy. I'm sure he put Buddy through hell in the past, but everything we've seen of him so far makes him look like a pretty chill guy. Him talking about magic to Buddy, and even here with his mellow smile. I'm really excited to see more of him in the future!

but i'm rambling now. AWESOME PAGE!

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TeaDino In reply to smoking-giraffe [2012-06-24 01:34:43 +0000 UTC]

klsdgls Thanks so much, SG!!

Also ahh gosh yes I'm glad he piped your interest- you'll see him sometime again maybe

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DestinyFox [2012-06-23 05:59:21 +0000 UTC]

This is so sweet and amazing. I loved just about everything. Especially the ending... I can't really describe it, but it is really an awesome work^^

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TeaDino In reply to DestinyFox [2012-06-24 01:31:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!!

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DestinyFox In reply to TeaDino [2012-06-24 03:18:47 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome XD

High five to the three bros! XD

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starfire-wolf [2012-06-23 04:38:54 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww <3


THIS COMIC WAS AMAZING :'DDD

SERIOUSLY. I HOPE TO DO STUFF AS AWESOME AS THIS FOR MY NUZLOCKE ONE DAY

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TeaDino In reply to starfire-wolf [2012-06-24 01:30:28 +0000 UTC]

Aahh oh man thanks so much!!
and you will!

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starfire-wolf In reply to TeaDino [2012-10-18 09:15:58 +0000 UTC]

I hope so ;A;
Thank you so much!

(Sorry for the late reply)

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Jiyuria [2012-06-23 04:32:51 +0000 UTC]

Everyone's happy. Yey.

Is he still obsessed with being a ninja? Because real ninjas used illusions to fight samurai and prove the ones they shrugged off were stronger then they thought.

(Look up blade testing. In Japan samurais would test their new swords by hiding by the side of the road and then striking to kill on any commoner that walked by and judged their blade on the cut. This is one of the many reason ninjas exist.)

Though I also see a gang going by. And I am worried.

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TeaDino In reply to Jiyuria [2012-06-24 01:30:13 +0000 UTC]

Yep Buddy is still a ninja enthusiast

and ohh the blade testing is interesting! I will think more about it sometimee

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Jiyuria In reply to TeaDino [2012-06-24 11:26:07 +0000 UTC]

Buddy you're even more like a ninja now.

Yeah ninjas were apparently commoners trying to defend themselves and break free of a lot of issues the samurais and upperclass were causing.

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Silver-Atlas [2012-06-23 04:23:06 +0000 UTC]

Well I'm gonna crit this as well as I can. (which i'm not very good at so be warned)

First of all, the art, with no question, was outstanding as usual. As for chracter development, I couldnt help but feel a big soft spot for Buddy during the magic show, but I wish you would have done a little more with Robin being captured. It kinda seems like he was captured for no reason and was saved almost instantly. I love the fact that Aether came in and it seems she'll be a great addition to the team. Personally, this is one of my favorite comics from you with all the development around buddy and the addition of Aether. Hope you keep it up.

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TeaDino In reply to Silver-Atlas [2012-06-24 01:29:26 +0000 UTC]

Any crit is welcome

And ahh thanks so much! Yeah I've recieved crits earlier regarding that little bit. The purpose of that was so bland and straightforward, and there wasn't any story behind it, because its purpose was to introduce a character and put robin in peril pretty much ahha
Also ahhh thank you!!

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