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Description Even when he's killed...

A print I'll be selling at Fanime in a little under a month!!! Oh my!

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LeftyPencil [2013-07-26 20:46:40 +0000 UTC]

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The first thing that hit me was the title and the description. I personally have a hard time coming up with names, but you got it dude. I don't know which fandom this is in, but the piece is wonderful. The focus is clearly shown as the guy in the foreground, and the ones behind him are people he cares about and vise versa. This piece is hopeful with the clouds around him, symbolizing heaven, so he was a good person. The girls on the right shows loss, but only the guy in the middle looks at him. They must have been real close (brothers?), and he probably was encouraging him to shoot for the stars. The picture is pretty balanced space-wise. The colors on top are warm, while the bottom half is calmer. The only thing i would suggest would be the reduce the redhead's breasts. I know it's anime but..it stands out. However, it's your work. I'm glad I could see more of your work, and good luck at Fanime!!

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GlossyToast [2013-04-30 06:46:07 +0000 UTC]

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I DONT UNDERSTAND WHY PEOPLE WERE UPSET WITH ME BEFORE MY CRITIQUE WAS 1000% GENUINE. IM SERIOUSLY YOUR #1 FAN I DONT THINK PEOPLE UNDERSTAND.
LESLIE-SENPAI I ONLY HOPE YOU NOTICE ME THE SAME WAY I NOTICE ALL THE AMAZING THINGS ABOUT THIS PICTURE.
FIRST OFF WOW-WEE WOW WOW LOOK AT THAT BACKGROUND. YOU PUT A LOT OF EFFORT INTO IT AND THE CLOUDS LOOK AMAZING TOO.
KAMINA LOOKS LIKE HE KNOWS WHATS UP BECAUSE HE IS POINTING UP
SIMON IS SO DOWN TO EARTH LOOK AT THAT DOWNWARD GAZE.
I WANNA make a drill pun but i cannot i am sorry. but everyone is cool.
please print all the things so fanime can happen

im your number 1 fan

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TeenyTinyTentacles In reply to GlossyToast [2013-05-03 05:14:49 +0000 UTC]

Don't abuse the critique system to get ass pats you whiny twit.

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simimaelian In reply to GlossyToast [2013-05-02 05:51:23 +0000 UTC]

This is the best crit I have ever seen, bravo. Encore, encore!

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GlossyToast In reply to simimaelian [2013-05-02 05:56:37 +0000 UTC]

YES THANK YOU
IM GLAD SOMEONE AGREES WITH ME! I WAS FEELING REALLY UPSET BUT YOU HAVE INSPIRED ME TO KEEP MAKING GREAT CRITIQUES OMG I AM GOING TO ADD YOU TO MY FRIENDS LIST

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BS-ADOPTS In reply to GlossyToast [2013-05-01 09:27:27 +0000 UTC]

I..lol I don't even.

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EwDont In reply to GlossyToast [2013-04-30 18:26:33 +0000 UTC]

Hun, critiques aren't meant to ass kiss. They are meant to help others improve. You didn't point out any of the flaws that the artist made. Sure the picture looks great, but it isn't that great. If you want to ass kiss; do it in the comment section.

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World-Hero21 In reply to GlossyToast [2013-04-30 18:03:42 +0000 UTC]

Critiques are not for ass-kissing. They're to help the artist IMPROVE. You need to put both positive AND negative feedback into them. Not just all positive. It drives me nuts when people critique my own work that way, with just ass-kissing and compliments, when I'm looking for ways to improve it.

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Defleshed-Martyr In reply to GlossyToast [2013-04-30 15:40:35 +0000 UTC]

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Typhloser In reply to GlossyToast [2013-04-30 15:04:25 +0000 UTC]

Maybe you should learn how to critique.

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Cruel-Quillish In reply to GlossyToast [2013-04-30 13:53:04 +0000 UTC]

It might be because of your overuse of caps lock, your fangasm and the fact that you are mocking the critique tool by using it to suck up to the artist. A real critique can help the artist in some way, by telling them how they can improve. No piece is truly perfect, but it's hard for the artist to see these things sometimes. The real reason the critique tool was created was so you could tell the artist the flaws they have made so they can correct it in the future. You yelling and screaming about how 'kawaii' it is does not help the artist, and I'm sure it annoys them.

One example of a flaw is that the space is poorly used and the characters look scattered, so it is not pleasing for the eyes. The one character on the left just cuts off and lacks a lower body. The poses are simplistic and the clouds look solid, not like clouds at all.

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jatobafcs [2014-02-04 12:37:50 +0000 UTC]

AMAAAAAAAAZING, LESLIE!

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Sunnycat17 [2013-08-20 18:02:20 +0000 UTC]

Kamina didn't die.

He merely took a break from the show to let Simon take the wheel.

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temporarytime In reply to Sunnycat17 [2013-08-26 00:03:55 +0000 UTC]

You know the REAL secret.

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Sunnycat17 In reply to temporarytime [2013-08-26 01:58:52 +0000 UTC]

Heck yeah! Kamina was SO badass that he decided he didn't need the spotlight.

That's why he let Simon take on that one guy by himself.

"The kid wants to be a badass, and that's what he's destined to be. Why should I stop him?" *Sits back in the seat of Gurren while Simon pwns with Gurren Lagann*


Kamina: A true badass. He lived like one, and died like one. And then reappeared like one.

In other words: A true badass can die, but doesn't stay dead.

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Charlene-Art [2013-05-30 14:49:13 +0000 UTC]

Looks epic.

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AniManga21 [2013-05-18 01:00:17 +0000 UTC]

I like it, looks great. Only thing I could really say looks weird is the perspective on Kamina's glasses.

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nany-elric [2013-05-01 20:41:36 +0000 UTC]

great draw

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temporarytime In reply to nany-elric [2013-05-02 00:09:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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nany-elric In reply to temporarytime [2013-05-05 20:27:35 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome dear ^^

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pedrocorreia [2013-05-01 15:29:43 +0000 UTC]

row row FIGHT DA POWAH!

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temporarytime In reply to pedrocorreia [2013-05-02 00:09:56 +0000 UTC]

Yes!

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generacion-martin [2013-04-30 20:49:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's really awesome. I love this anime.

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temporarytime In reply to generacion-martin [2013-05-02 00:10:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! Yes, it's one of my favorites. C:

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UGNArtWorld [2013-04-30 15:14:04 +0000 UTC]

I'm not a critic, but I must say it is simply beautiful. I love your art as you expressed in your version and your style to the characters of the series, you do splendid.

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temporarytime In reply to UGNArtWorld [2013-05-02 00:10:20 +0000 UTC]



Thank you very much! You always have such kind words. <3

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Rwwar [2013-04-30 14:59:58 +0000 UTC]

So awesome!! Love the way you drew the poses, and the facial expressions.

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temporarytime In reply to Rwwar [2013-05-02 00:10:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
I'm glad you like them. C:

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maferforever [2013-04-30 14:09:22 +0000 UTC]

Nice work

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temporarytime In reply to maferforever [2013-05-02 00:10:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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daringdreamerzart [2013-04-30 13:45:56 +0000 UTC]

Too awesome, I think my head just imploded, regenerated and exploded in one instant. O_o

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temporarytime In reply to daringdreamerzart [2013-05-02 00:10:44 +0000 UTC]

;D

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daringdreamerzart In reply to temporarytime [2013-05-02 00:11:04 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Laitma [2013-04-30 12:40:23 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhhhhh, love that green-tinged lighting, particularly on Simon's hair~!

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temporarytime In reply to Laitma [2013-05-02 00:11:00 +0000 UTC]

<3
That was a friend's suggestion. It was a little more subtle before. Haha.

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Laitma In reply to temporarytime [2013-05-02 00:34:23 +0000 UTC]

Well, it looks great, so-!

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Naly-i [2013-04-30 10:36:24 +0000 UTC]

AMAZING !!!

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temporarytime In reply to Naly-i [2013-05-02 00:11:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! <3

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Konamiabstract [2013-04-30 08:23:01 +0000 UTC]

amazing havoc action xd

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temporarytime In reply to Konamiabstract [2013-05-02 00:11:10 +0000 UTC]

;D
<3

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NinjaHeart [2013-04-30 07:07:47 +0000 UTC]

OMGAH SO AMAZING O.O

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temporarytime In reply to NinjaHeart [2013-04-30 07:11:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! <3

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