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Published: 2009-10-18 02:54:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1469; Favourites: 66; Downloads: 0
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This is awesome but as a crit i would say add more color to the forest, there much more color in the wolf.. it just kinda looks weird... AWESOME stuff otherwise
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great picture! loving it, just looking at very fine points on the wolfs anatomy. Just being picky, i love all your work, and please dont take offence! 
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Nah, I'm not offended. 
And thank you
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glad your not offended as i said earlier, i love all your work its just awesome! and love the comic too! XD
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The only thing you could add in my opinon is more detailed lines to the face^^ besides that, its lovely^^
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great job! theres something about the muzzle that doesn't quite look right. can't quite put my finger on it. its either too long or too big for the head, if that makes sense. something like that, im not entirely sure.
but other than that I think you've done a great job!
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The trees and textures look awsume but the trees look a bit small to me maybe they should be a bit bigger??
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Also, the ears look a bit more like a cats, i found [link] to be very helpful <3
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If i could suggest,for this particular piece i think the affect would be a bit more dramatic if he had realistic-looking eyes, and also, the fur strands could be lengthened to give this fellow a wild look ":3
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i like it, but something doesn't seem right about the eyes.. like they need more edge... and maybe a little smaller?
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Good for a mouse piece! I really love the lighting and trees, they look very misshapen and creepy. A lot of people draw trees too perfect, but I think you did a great job making them more realistic
One thing I think you could fix would be the wolfs back left leg.
It is somewhat too skinny near the top, I'd say. The bottom part of the leg (no idea what its called D: ) is also curved a bit oddly, I think. It kind of doesn't match with the joint.
Sorry, this is hard for me to explain, I hope I am being clear. >.<
Also, the lines of fluff are thick, so they look fairly stiff. Thinning them might make the wolf look more fluffy, if that is something that you were trying to do.
Anyway, I think it is a very good WIP so far
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Thank you very much!
I went back and refined his outlines, but I can see I still need to work on that a bit.
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No problem.
I love your art and comic! Please keep at it
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I think you should try to take more time with the fur. Make the strands thinner and more detailed. Since you're using a mouse, you should take extra care with everything. Other than that, I think it's very good.
~Momo Y.
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..........*speechless* well part of his muzzle looks a little off but i like it
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First, amazing job, especially since it was done with a mouse! The middle tree doesn't look all that misshapen, just off-balance which isn't all that abnormal. But the wolf's right eye looks too big in relation to the left eye because its supposed to be farther away. Anyway, awesome job overall, and the pose of the wolf and the monotone coloring gives it a really cool and creepy feeling.
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Thank you, that helps alot
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Why does it feel the wolf looks like Silvershine?
Hmm...maybe you can color the wolf.
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I use a mouse, but my art is not half as good as this. I just think you should correct the head a little bit.
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I applaud you for just using a mouse! your crazy!
I think the tail should be a bit longer or something
I really like the creepy feeling that's subtly added in
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i think it looks very nice. maybe add a few more tree shadows in the distance to give it more depth
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Wow, that looks excelent x3
I use a mouse and I still don't think I could do anything like that 8]
I can't see anything wrong with it.
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I like it so far. never really liked giving critiques on wips so sorry xD
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