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pencils by dave finchinks by justin Rosko
page 8 of finch's The Dark Knight #1
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I'm posting this as a critique, but honestly, it works really well. The things one could nit-pick about would most likely lie in the "clarity" area, but that's a side effect of the lighting and the rain - both of which are hard to execute in tandem and still be readable (just ask Frank Miller). But it only takes about half a second to realize whats going on in the picture. Smart positioning of the horizontal pipe which the Batman is leaning on, helps separate him from the chaos (the Bat symbol doesn't hurt either!). I would have probably thickened up the upper outline of the Bat, around his head, to help pull him out of the white a little bit more, but that may or may not be the right decision.
I imagine that the large area of black in the lower left will have narrative balloons, which will balance out the black and white ratio.
Great job!
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thanks for taking the time to critique my work
the rain was a bit weird working on, until i started spotting blacks.
Finch's layouts are always so very deep and have sooo much detail.
what i wish i could have done better at, would have been seperating elements a little better. If i had taken more time to study the page before getting to work on it i think i could have accomplished that.
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Really great. Illicits a great dark, foreboding mood. Very Batman!
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