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LupusCor010 [2014-03-19 03:54:11 +0000 UTC]
To be honest I saw this earlier and was trying to make awesome words or something to say about this and I just... I'm not so eloquent.
i really like the style and colors in this and the wording and way you set it up like the pacing I guess?
I'm really glad for you you'll be in college next year though . It'll be so good for you to be away from him and explore yourself more without his presence.
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Comedic44 [2014-03-18 13:01:22 +0000 UTC]
I love this. Very powerful.... But uh.... picture yeah.
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TerraSwolf In reply to Comedic44 [2014-03-18 14:00:52 +0000 UTC]
You are perfect oh my gosh
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TheWolvenAngel [2014-03-18 04:15:00 +0000 UTC]
I love your narrative, I swear to God. It always captivated me in a unexplainable way, but I think what I love the most is the pacing. And your imagery, ahhhh... Your imagery always has the right amount of details, and the rest is the kind of vague that someone's personal mind can fill. It adds a level of depth and personal intimacy. It helps the viewer connect with it on that personal level. And again, pacing, every scene tells a story as much as the words do. And in so few! Where as I take a paragraph or two to tell a story you do it in just a couple of sentences. I have always loved that as well. And let us not forget emotion, the emotion you display is not only felt but fits so well into the story told. And then there is YOUR emotion placed into it, baring a piece of your heart in such a masterful way that is lovely and intimidating. Wonderful pacing, powerful emotion, a great piece of art.
And long car rides are a perfect setting to think up such work, I am so glad you shared with us <333
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TerraSwolf In reply to TheWolvenAngel [2014-03-18 04:19:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much man. I don't really have enough words to compete with your wonderful compliment, but thank you so so much. <333
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TheWolvenAngel In reply to TerraSwolf [2014-03-18 04:23:57 +0000 UTC]
No words needed man, just saying what I think/feel~ <333
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