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Th3-C0unt3ss — 2012 Her final song
Published: 2011-06-20 19:03:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 1768; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 14
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Description My tired eyes have seen the World more than a billion times, a world I possess but can no longer call mine.
It used to obey my every command. It cowered in fear yet ate from my hand.

It worshipped me with great admiration. Before, I say, the Contamination.
The infestation of parasites, that took over my world and challenged my might.

The Earth, my world, my planet, my son...Look at what these parasites have done!
They've cut out your lungs; the plants and the trees! Polluted your blood; The rivers and Seas!

My beautiful world, my dearest creation. My final call will soon rid you of this damned infestation...
The floods in the west and the fires in the east, are just the starter of my magnificent feast!

I'll burn the land and I'll boil the seas! Make the mountains tremble to shake off these fleas.
No nuclear blast nor atom bomb, can stop me from singing my final song.

Wind, rain and fire...my fatal melody.
Do you hear that humans? Mother Nature's symphony.
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Comments: 59

LadybugScribbles [2012-03-04 00:58:50 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This personification of Mother Nature makes me think of Neil Gaiman's work and gives me chills.

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Th3-C0unt3ss In reply to LadybugScribbles [2012-03-04 12:53:43 +0000 UTC]

thanks for commenting

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LadybugScribbles In reply to Th3-C0unt3ss [2012-03-04 13:05:10 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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RedJoey1992 [2012-02-12 16:38:23 +0000 UTC]

nice

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Th3-C0unt3ss In reply to RedJoey1992 [2012-02-12 16:39:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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RedJoey1992 In reply to Th3-C0unt3ss [2012-02-12 16:39:43 +0000 UTC]

Welcome.

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Kay-March [2012-01-23 22:44:40 +0000 UTC]

I like the way the rhyme and pace goes, revealing the character's disgust, anger, like a god's pronouncing his displeasure towards mankind
sometimes I think that we're nothing more than microbes sweeping everything ahead, I strongly believe that we all are on the razor's edge and that Gaia herself will kick us out
even today I had a conversation with my friend Samuel Rubinstein on the subject of his poem honoring The Day The Earth Stood Still perhaps you'll like to read it
[link]

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Th3-C0unt3ss In reply to Kay-March [2012-01-24 06:48:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks again for the comment. That's a very good poem you sent me there.

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Kay-March In reply to Th3-C0unt3ss [2012-01-24 14:20:52 +0000 UTC]

thanks for my part as well, and Samuel is a
winderful writer too

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MiikaC [2011-08-17 00:43:33 +0000 UTC]

The best poem I've come across since I joined Deviantart. Bloody fantastic : )

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Th3-C0unt3ss In reply to MiikaC [2011-08-17 09:04:52 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thanks ever so much ^^ Thats so nice of you to say!!

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MiikaC In reply to Th3-C0unt3ss [2011-08-17 10:55:31 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! : D

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Neria-Mahariel [2011-07-14 05:31:54 +0000 UTC]

I think it is fantastic. The words flowed smoothly in every stanza. Well done.

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Th3-C0unt3ss In reply to Neria-Mahariel [2011-07-14 22:10:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ever so much

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Neria-Mahariel In reply to Th3-C0unt3ss [2011-07-20 05:31:11 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Cows-on-steroids [2011-07-14 03:41:59 +0000 UTC]

EPIC

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Th3-C0unt3ss In reply to Cows-on-steroids [2011-07-14 22:10:41 +0000 UTC]

Why, thank you

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flaminandfamous789 [2011-07-13 21:53:39 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is great! It flows very well, and I love the rhyme scheme. Not only that, is has a great message to it. Not to mention the choice of words.

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Th3-C0unt3ss In reply to flaminandfamous789 [2011-07-14 22:11:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot Thats very kind of you to say so...

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flaminandfamous789 In reply to Th3-C0unt3ss [2011-07-15 17:43:51 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, and I meant every word

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Th3-C0unt3ss In reply to flaminandfamous789 [2011-07-15 19:48:50 +0000 UTC]

Awww ^^

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Starrose77 [2011-06-21 19:59:12 +0000 UTC]

I love the way you portrayed Mother Nature and made us humans really seem parasitic. Very well done.

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Th3-C0unt3ss In reply to Starrose77 [2011-06-21 20:04:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot Im glad you liked it ^^

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Starrose77 In reply to Th3-C0unt3ss [2011-06-21 20:09:36 +0000 UTC]

Anytime!!

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RiddlesAndRhymes [2011-06-21 13:38:05 +0000 UTC]

This is beautifully done! Very well written.

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Th3-C0unt3ss In reply to RiddlesAndRhymes [2011-06-21 16:23:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot ^^

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RiddlesAndRhymes In reply to Th3-C0unt3ss [2011-06-21 16:29:15 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome

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culturefreak [2011-06-21 09:01:18 +0000 UTC]

Love the next to last line

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Th3-C0unt3ss In reply to culturefreak [2011-06-21 11:25:06 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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Hailey-the-Oni [2011-06-21 06:13:57 +0000 UTC]

I love it! It reminds me of a poem I wrote a while ago...good minds think alike, ze?
i'll post it.

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Th3-C0unt3ss In reply to Hailey-the-Oni [2011-06-21 11:25:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Ahh cool! Send me a link when you have

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sierra223 [2011-06-21 03:10:35 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic, very powerful

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Th3-C0unt3ss In reply to sierra223 [2011-06-21 11:25:42 +0000 UTC]

thanks ever so much!

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LadySkylar [2011-06-20 23:34:58 +0000 UTC]

Powerful poem.

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Th3-C0unt3ss In reply to LadySkylar [2011-06-21 11:25:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot

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DreamInfinitely [2011-06-20 23:04:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow. Up until the end, I thought the poem was from God's point of view, and the "infestation" was sin. Hahaha... I guess that's what happens when you work at VBS all day, lol.

Beautiful poem, though, I love the concept. ^^

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Th3-C0unt3ss In reply to DreamInfinitely [2011-06-21 11:26:29 +0000 UTC]

Lol ^^

Sorry to catch you out there

Thanks alot for commenting!

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DreamInfinitely In reply to Th3-C0unt3ss [2011-06-21 22:40:22 +0000 UTC]



Oh, no problem at all. ^^

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KarmathiousII [2011-06-20 21:51:39 +0000 UTC]

I really like this one. The human race in general would definitely land a doomsday fate if we ever went to court for the horrible things we've done to this planet, our home.

I love the line: "No nuclear blast nor atom bomb, can stop me from singing my final song."
Man has come across a lot of power and technology in the last hundred years or so, but nothing will ever truly stand up to Nature.

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Th3-C0unt3ss In reply to KarmathiousII [2011-06-21 11:28:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for commenting! Yes i totally aggree!

Yeah, thats exactly what i think. Man will never be able to beat Mother Nature...

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KarmathiousII In reply to Th3-C0unt3ss [2011-06-21 17:43:01 +0000 UTC]

I usually don't like dooms day things that much, but this one made be happy. Because it was Nature curing itself, instead of men just randomly deciding to have a nuclear holocaust. you know? All other scenarios just seem way to planned. Like the governments saw the Mayan calender and said, "Well, that seems like as good a time as any." lol

Anywho. I'm hoping for option B. Everyone rising to a higher consciousness and the world being enveloped in love. Nature is still gonna get it's payback, but hopefully it will be very selective and only take out the a-holes. haha.

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Th3-C0unt3ss In reply to KarmathiousII [2011-06-21 17:49:09 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, i didnt want to write about the holocaust or anything of the sort...i find, even if you're completely negative about it, it glamorises it. If you get me
Yeah, i wanted to write about what Mother nature has to say about what we're doing/ have done to this beautiful planet.

Yeah, tell me about it! We shall see...

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KarmathiousII In reply to Th3-C0unt3ss [2011-06-21 17:56:30 +0000 UTC]

Only way we can find out for sure....
I hate waiting... -_-

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Th3-C0unt3ss In reply to KarmathiousII [2011-06-21 17:57:29 +0000 UTC]

lol ^^ me too...

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RavenXNevermore [2011-06-20 21:21:28 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work. I love the first line: "My tired eyes have seen the World more than a billion times, a world I possess but can no longer call mine." Well done!

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Th3-C0unt3ss In reply to RavenXNevermore [2011-06-21 11:28:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ever so much! I like that line too

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RavenXNevermore In reply to Th3-C0unt3ss [2011-06-22 20:40:08 +0000 UTC]

You're so very welcome!

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Denee-nee [2011-06-20 21:07:47 +0000 UTC]

loved it

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Th3-C0unt3ss In reply to Denee-nee [2011-06-21 11:28:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Denee-nee In reply to Th3-C0unt3ss [2011-06-21 20:48:40 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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