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Thalionlainiel — And then you hit me
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Published: 2008-08-10 14:29:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 51; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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There were bathroom floors and bedroom walls,and then you’d watch me sleep.
I know, because I’d never sleep.
And there was the shower,
running water, running blood
down the drain, and forgotten
Fingers,
Salty cheeks, salty thighs
Then you’d listen to me scream.
I know, because I’d always scream.
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Gosh, Karen...
This is amazing. The idea of it all vanishing down the drain is so powerful.
And then the repetition at the end - "I never sleep" and "I always scream" made me shiver. Fantastic.
*goes off to be contemplative and read Sylvia Plath*
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Haha, I hope you didn't get an account just to comment^^
But aww, thank you so much <3
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