Comments: 109
ZiegHolloway In reply to The-Dark-Lord-Link [2012-06-30 18:58:49 +0000 UTC]
It is brilliantly written...I really can't wait for the next chapter.
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Nessiefidelity [2012-06-27 04:41:47 +0000 UTC]
+1 more comment~ c:
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GamziMakr [2012-06-19 20:08:24 +0000 UTC]
You're going to have to put this on Google Docs if you want me to review it. That way it takes WAY less time.
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GamziMakr In reply to The-Dark-Lord-Link [2012-06-20 15:24:37 +0000 UTC]
Here, can you make it so that I can put comments on the side (so it's not "view only")?
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The-Dark-Lord-Link In reply to GamziMakr [2012-06-22 00:34:07 +0000 UTC]
Thank God for Google Translator. XD Otherwise I wouldn't of known you liked that!
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GamziMakr In reply to The-Dark-Lord-Link [2012-06-26 18:36:29 +0000 UTC]
Eeyah! Say, have you tried submitting your story to /fic/ on Ponychan? There are people there who are better than me at reviewing and have more time to do it.
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The-Dark-Lord-Link In reply to GamziMakr [2012-06-26 18:54:36 +0000 UTC]
Nope. I'm already on three sites with this baby. (getting hassling to keep up with three fronts. >.>)
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GamziMakr In reply to The-Dark-Lord-Link [2012-06-26 19:58:22 +0000 UTC]
All you have to do is post the link of your fic and give a bit of information about it.
Hassling?
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GamziMakr In reply to The-Dark-Lord-Link [2012-06-28 20:26:59 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, you gotta fill in 8 criteria, and find a reviewer. It can take a while, but you'd get good feedback.
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GamziMakr In reply to The-Dark-Lord-Link [2012-06-29 04:04:58 +0000 UTC]
I'm sure she does. I'm not dogging on you. She's like a child, you know?
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GamziMakr In reply to The-Dark-Lord-Link [2012-06-29 04:20:11 +0000 UTC]
Someone called you "sick"? It's not precisely gore. Don't get me wrong, I believe I shouldn't be reading stuff like this in the first place. He/she was probably just a little too attached to our dear Fluttershy. Good thing she's not real so people couldn't do horrible things to her.
Not your idea?
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The-Dark-Lord-Link In reply to GamziMakr [2012-06-29 05:56:43 +0000 UTC]
Indeed. I'd be the first to defend her. I just like writing dark stuff.
Yes, the idea was inspired by: [link]
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GamziMakr In reply to The-Dark-Lord-Link [2012-06-29 16:17:20 +0000 UTC]
I actually like writing dark stuff too. If I were to tell anybody in real life, they'd probably be surprised. In fact bad things would happen to the characters in my stories too (though nothing irreversible. I can't stand that idea).
Creepy...
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The-Dark-Lord-Link In reply to GamziMakr [2012-06-30 06:04:13 +0000 UTC]
Indeed. Your current project could of been a very convincing creepy pasta. But I figured you were holding back for some reason, just didn't know what because it wasn't really important to the plot. When are you updating anyway?
Aye. Some Amnesia pony mods use audio from that.
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GamziMakr In reply to The-Dark-Lord-Link [2012-06-30 21:55:37 +0000 UTC]
AHHHHH I don't know. A reviewer that I didn't even ask for pointed out lots of flaws in the first chapter, and I'm sure if I went back and looked at it, it would look very mediocre. I'd like to go back and revamp the whole thing, but I don't have the desire to do that right now, if that makes any sense. I was needlessly stressing myself over it and deadlines as well. My subconscious might've snapped and demolished any incentive to continue. I'd like to further it in the future, however.
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The-Dark-Lord-Link In reply to GamziMakr [2012-07-02 06:00:42 +0000 UTC]
I feel the same about fixing Cries of Fluttershy, but mostly because the readers seem to like it as is. I do plan on fixing it, just don't know when. I'm using the advice I get when I get it to write better chapters.
But I still believe your story is perfect creepy pasta material, and is also a huge influence on me for writing in this fandom.
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The-Dark-Lord-Link In reply to GamziMakr [2012-07-12 08:43:42 +0000 UTC]
Yes, you did. It got pretty deep considering he broke Dash's hind legs. I'd say that's psychotic in of itself.
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GamziMakr In reply to The-Dark-Lord-Link [2012-07-12 16:27:39 +0000 UTC]
...Yeah, that is pretty psychotic. For some reason, talking about about it makes me want to write how insane I imagined him.
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The-Dark-Lord-Link In reply to GamziMakr [2012-07-13 02:23:47 +0000 UTC]
I'm the same way, and the only way to reverse that for me is to keep myself submerged in what motivated me at first.
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GamziMakr In reply to The-Dark-Lord-Link [2012-07-13 22:05:36 +0000 UTC]
I see. Maybe I need to watch the Dark Knight again...
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