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Published: 2010-10-02 05:28:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 159; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description Beneath the smile, she hides a frown.
Leave her be, leave her be.
Beneath the mask, she hides her beauty.
Take it off, take it off.
Beneath her anger, hides her love.
Let it show, let it show

I am a smiling girl,a hidden beauty,  a loving person.
I am a frowning joke, an ugly secret, an angry individual.
Which are you...?
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Comments: 3

littleshireling [2010-10-07 05:47:34 +0000 UTC]

I have a hard time with this too. I don't really know what category I fall into.

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Art-By-Ashley-Martin [2010-10-04 18:34:34 +0000 UTC]

I would change the first line of the second stanza to
"I am a smiling girl, a hidden beauty, a loving person"
Apart from that very good

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The-Poison-Poet In reply to Art-By-Ashley-Martin [2010-10-04 19:25:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! changed it

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