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Description Chapter 7, Part 1: Apollo's Downfall


Trevor groaned, starting to wake up. He saw his mask cracked, seeing they were at the bottom of a chasm with a waterfall. Then he saw his leg was injured. James started to awaken, looking in a panic and seeing his left arm was trapped under a chunk of the bridge. "Trevor!" he shouted, struck in worry since his mask was barely together. "I'm coming, brother!" Trevor shouted back, but he heard something standing from the water. It was Apollo! The vengeful mechanist grabbed Trevor by the back, slamming him against the wall and throwing him aside.


"Do you know who I am?! I am the strongest man in the world! I will be one of the rulers of the kingdom!" Apollo shouted in full rage as he punched Trevor in the head, knocking his mask to pieces. As James watched Apollo whale on his brother, he looked at his dagger on his side. He nodded, knowing he had no other option.


Apollo was laughing as he was beating Trevor to death. The former harlequin laid on the ground, coughing up blood. "The poor doctor… so you were the harlequin duo? I don't believe it. You can't even kill a frog!" Apollo laughed, but suddenly he felt a sharp pain in the back of his left leg, and promptly let out a scream of pain. James had stabbed him in his leg. Trevor got up quickly and stabbed Apollo in the throat, sliding his dagger to the right and slitting his throat clean open. The mechanist fell to the ground, bleeding to death.


Trevor was sitting on the ground in front of his corpse panting. James came over and helped him up. "Thank you, James. How did you… Oh my Lord!" Trevor saw James' left arm was cut off and poorly bandaged. "One limb is worth vengeance on this waste of human life, and to save my brother," James chuckled. Trevor looked in shock, but then chuckled alongside his brother. "Come on, we have to get back to Simon," Trevor said. James nodded following him.


Simon had entered the king's throne room seeing, Ares there waiting for him. "So you're the one who killed all my men," Ares claimed, chuckling while sitting on the throne. "You act as if you had an army when really you had nothing but four really tough, but pitiful wimps," Simon responded as he growled.


"I beat you once. What makes you think you can beat me?" Ares mockingly asked as he stood up, drawing his sword and aiming it at Simon. "But enough talk! Have at ye!" Ares exclaimed, charging at him. He had not even given his enemy a sword for a fair fight. "I may not be able to use a sword, but I sure can use every other trick a thief has," Simon said, throwing a smoke bomb on the ground. The whole room had then been filled with smoke as Ares looked around chuckling. "That didn't work the first time, what makes you think it would now?" he questioned.


Ares pulled back, swinging in the smoke, thinking he had hit Simon like before. But instead he just heard a strange noise as the smoke cleared.


Ares saw he had hit the throne. Simon had moved it to another position while he was blind. "Behind you," Simon grabbed one of Ares' swords from his side and kicked him back. "Urgh… okay, you have my attention," Ares groaned, and then he rolled up his sleeve, showing his one metal arm that was gripping his sword. "I shall give you the honor of my full strength" Ares said as the smoke was clearing and they were staring each other down.


End of Chapter 7, Part 1
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Comments: 20

midnathething [2012-06-07 18:57:53 +0000 UTC]

ares you will die because simon is that awesome

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to midnathething [2012-06-07 19:11:46 +0000 UTC]

haha i know right? favorite part

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midnathething In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-07 19:24:14 +0000 UTC]

when they killed apollo

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to midnathething [2012-06-07 19:34:58 +0000 UTC]

haha many tanks glad ya liekd it

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LilyLupine64 [2012-06-05 00:48:44 +0000 UTC]

I gotta say, this chapter ROCKED! I feel like you did so many things right, and here's why. First of all, the way James sacrificed his arm so that he could save his brother. I just felt that it was a powerful moment in the story, in which we can really see the true bond between brothers like that. That, and it reminds me of Lucas and Claus The second great thing you did in this chapter was the initiation of Ares' and Simon's duel. I liked how it started kind of mild, what with the smoke bomb and Simon's trickery. Then, the lights dim and those two are ready to duel for real. I must say, however cliched it is by now, that the ending of this chapter was nothing short of epic.

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to LilyLupine64 [2012-06-05 00:53:29 +0000 UTC]

many tanks im glad ya liked it

and yeah i was going for alot of hose scenes even if the arm cut off thing i got from mario an luigi (dont ask how)

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LilyLupine64 In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-05 00:59:10 +0000 UTC]

No problem, it was my pleasure! 83

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horsewhisperer24 [2012-06-03 04:03:52 +0000 UTC]

My favorite part: The whole fighting part!
It makes me imagine the fighting in a lot of details!

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to horsewhisperer24 [2012-06-03 04:11:52 +0000 UTC]

tanks a ton glad ya liked it

and yeah it does

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horsewhisperer24 In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-03 04:17:37 +0000 UTC]

When my mom read this she was like

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to horsewhisperer24 [2012-06-03 04:19:21 +0000 UTC]

what do ya mean?

that good or bad?

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horsewhisperer24 In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-03 04:20:02 +0000 UTC]

Bad to her but funny to me.

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ShadowEevee128 [2012-06-02 16:39:33 +0000 UTC]

"But enough talk! Have at ye!"

Isn't that a line from a older video game? Because I swear that's where that line's from. I have no clue what the game's called though.

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to ShadowEevee128 [2012-06-02 17:52:32 +0000 UTC]

multiple have said it but your probably thinking of castlevania symphony of the night

favorite part?

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ShadowEevee128 In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-02 19:58:29 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, probably.

When James killed Apollo. The poor guy, had to lose an arm to save his brother.

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to ShadowEevee128 [2012-06-02 20:05:45 +0000 UTC]

haha many tanks

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Aelita15 [2012-06-02 16:11:47 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait to read the other part
I like the part were Apollo dies lol

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to Aelita15 [2012-06-02 17:52:39 +0000 UTC]

haha many tanks glad ya liekd it

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The-Irish-Clover [2012-06-02 12:05:26 +0000 UTC]

Liking Apollo's Death in that part. x3

And my blood is boiling for the climactic battle between Simon and Ares.

Nice work. c:

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to The-Irish-Clover [2012-06-02 12:09:48 +0000 UTC]

haha many tanks glad ya liked it

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