Comments: 20
midnathething [2012-06-07 18:57:53 +0000 UTC]
ares you will die because simon is that awesome
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LilyLupine64 [2012-06-05 00:48:44 +0000 UTC]
I gotta say, this chapter ROCKED! I feel like you did so many things right, and here's why. First of all, the way James sacrificed his arm so that he could save his brother. I just felt that it was a powerful moment in the story, in which we can really see the true bond between brothers like that. That, and it reminds me of Lucas and Claus The second great thing you did in this chapter was the initiation of Ares' and Simon's duel. I liked how it started kind of mild, what with the smoke bomb and Simon's trickery. Then, the lights dim and those two are ready to duel for real. I must say, however cliched it is by now, that the ending of this chapter was nothing short of epic.
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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to LilyLupine64 [2012-06-05 00:53:29 +0000 UTC]
many tanks im glad ya liked it
and yeah i was going for alot of hose scenes even if the arm cut off thing i got from mario an luigi (dont ask how)
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horsewhisperer24 [2012-06-03 04:03:52 +0000 UTC]
My favorite part: The whole fighting part!
It makes me imagine the fighting in a lot of details!
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ShadowEevee128 [2012-06-02 16:39:33 +0000 UTC]
"But enough talk! Have at ye!"
Isn't that a line from a older video game? Because I swear that's where that line's from. I have no clue what the game's called though.
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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to ShadowEevee128 [2012-06-02 17:52:32 +0000 UTC]
multiple have said it but your probably thinking of castlevania symphony of the night
favorite part?
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ShadowEevee128 In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-02 19:58:29 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, probably.
When James killed Apollo. The poor guy, had to lose an arm to save his brother.
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Aelita15 [2012-06-02 16:11:47 +0000 UTC]
Can't wait to read the other part
I like the part were Apollo dies lol
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