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Description Chapter 8: Five Years Later…


Five years had passed since the death of Ares and some of the other mechanists. People had begun returning to their normal lives after all the trouble Ares had caused for the kingdom. It was finally getting back to normal. However, no one knew of the people who killed the mechanists, but that's just how Simon and his friends wanted it. Lady Abigail took over the throne since Ares had died, and so far she has been running the kingdom better than the last king had.


James had gotten a new mechanical arm to replace the one he had cut off due to the fight with Apollo. He had become a simple weapon smith. While he was working around his shop, he heard someone come in. He turned around and saw Trevor entering. He had gone back to his regular life of being a doctor like before, the same profession he missed. "How has life been treating you, brother? It's been 4 years since I last saw you," James chuckled. "It's been just great" Trevor replied. James smiled, beginning to show his brother around his store.


As for Simon, he was wandering around the night. He had gotten a mechanical leg since his old one was far past unusable because of the injuries Ares had caused him. "Thievery… it's been as good as ever. A lot has happened over the years, but at least I have more people to steal for then just myself," Simon told himself, chuckling while looking at a fort off in the distance.


At a home in the village, Bell was wandering a well-furnished house with portraits, which were mainly hung in the hallway. She entered a room that looked like a child's room, approaching a crib. "So you are awake… hello," Bell said, smiling and looking at a little baby boy in it. She reached down with her mechanical hand, and the baby boy grabbed one of the fingers giggling. "Just like your father… I wonder how Simon is doing on his mission tonight?" Bell questioned herself, knowing all that had happened over the years with her and Simon. She just smiled, picking up the baby and walking to another room.


The end…
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Comments: 39

midnathething [2012-06-08 00:57:07 +0000 UTC]

great ending for a great story!

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to midnathething [2012-06-08 01:01:38 +0000 UTC]

tanks a ton glad ya liked it

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midnathething In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-08 01:07:58 +0000 UTC]

yay

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to midnathething [2012-06-08 01:12:04 +0000 UTC]

hope ya enjoy my new story corruption to

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midnathething In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-08 01:12:49 +0000 UTC]

im off to read that *fly's away*

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to midnathething [2012-06-08 01:38:14 +0000 UTC]

im not gonna get my hopes up...

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LilyLupine64 [2012-06-05 01:04:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh man, this was such a beautiful story, and this beautiful ending fits it perfectly. I really liked the way you seemed to take a step back (or should I say, forward?) and look at the overall futures of the main characters. I also loved the twist at the end, what with Simon and Bell hooking up and having a kid. I just thought that was so cute! X3 Really, though, excellent job on this story, Triforce. I can't wait to read the next story!

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to LilyLupine64 [2012-06-05 01:06:39 +0000 UTC]

haha many tanks i showed the thief story to my mother actually and she says i should show it to my last grandfather (the last one alive on dads side in general anyway) an might get it published

tanks a ton glad ya liked

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LilyLupine64 In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-05 01:11:25 +0000 UTC]

I definitely think you should! 8D I'd read this if it were a book.

Again, it was my pleasure to read. 83

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to LilyLupine64 [2012-06-05 01:15:14 +0000 UTC]

hope ya enjoyed my new story

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LilyLupine64 In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-05 02:36:52 +0000 UTC]

I didn't get to read it quite yet, sorry. <8(

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to LilyLupine64 [2012-06-05 02:37:35 +0000 UTC]

theirs the entire night

by the way im admitted for 3 days they just got me out of the high from the broke bottle

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LilyLupine64 In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-05 02:38:45 +0000 UTC]

Haha, true!

Well that's not too long. It's not like you're gonna be in there for weeks or months, so there's something to be kinda content about. 83

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to LilyLupine64 [2012-06-05 02:40:32 +0000 UTC]

i was in here on my birthday...

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LilyLupine64 In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-05 02:41:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh... I'm sorry, I didn't know... 0n0

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to LilyLupine64 [2012-06-05 02:46:26 +0000 UTC]

yeah i was in their for the entire month of febuary due to feeding problems...ill let you get to reading the new story

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LilyLupine64 In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-05 02:49:46 +0000 UTC]

You're gonna be okay, right...? <8(
Yeah, okay...

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Aelita15 [2012-06-03 04:56:44 +0000 UTC]

Omg I love your story...... I love the whole thing. And how you looked back at everybody's life......love it lots !!!!

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to Aelita15 [2012-06-03 05:00:48 +0000 UTC]

many tanks aelita

im glad ya liked it

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Aelita15 In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-03 05:03:09 +0000 UTC]

I especially liked how you ended it with bell picking a baby up and asking if Simon mission was going well. I loved it a lot and it's very good lol

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horsewhisperer24 [2012-06-03 04:09:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah, will you make another story? I'll read yours even for one cent!

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horsewhisperer24 [2012-06-03 04:09:19 +0000 UTC]

YAYY FOR MAIN CHARACTER PARENTS!!!

Favorite part: The last paragraph. A good story always ends in an conclusion especially main character parents

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to horsewhisperer24 [2012-06-03 04:13:15 +0000 UTC]

haha many tanks

and yeah it does :3

glad ya liked it

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horsewhisperer24 In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-03 04:16:34 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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Wanteforever [2012-06-02 20:30:22 +0000 UTC]

Belle and the Baby the most ADORABLE part! This is the so great! You are an awesome writer

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to Wanteforever [2012-06-02 20:33:49 +0000 UTC]

many tanks glad ya liked it

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Wanteforever In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-02 20:36:38 +0000 UTC]

Dude I mean wow your sooooo talented!

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to Wanteforever [2012-06-02 20:38:26 +0000 UTC]

2 years of doing it i should be haha tanks

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Wanteforever In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-02 20:47:33 +0000 UTC]

No Problem I sent you a note.

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ShadowEevee128 [2012-06-02 20:16:18 +0000 UTC]

Nawwwww. That's so adorable with the ending. That's got to be my favorite part with Bell and the baby boy. I love it.

Great job, a wonder ending to a wonderful story.

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to ShadowEevee128 [2012-06-02 20:21:29 +0000 UTC]

tanks a ton shadow im glad you liked it a ton

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ShadowEevee128 In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-02 20:22:46 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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tentaclecuddles [2012-06-02 19:46:21 +0000 UTC]

Aww. <3
That was such a sweet ending~

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to tentaclecuddles [2012-06-02 19:49:20 +0000 UTC]

tanks a ton an yep thats what i was going for

favorite part?

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tentaclecuddles In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-02 19:57:06 +0000 UTC]

The ending. ^^

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to tentaclecuddles [2012-06-02 19:58:29 +0000 UTC]

many tanks

glad ya liked it

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tentaclecuddles In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-02 19:59:12 +0000 UTC]

No prob. ^^

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The-Irish-Clover [2012-06-02 19:06:03 +0000 UTC]

Such a good ending... but made me confused with Bell and Simon... did they have a kid?

But all in all. Great story. ^^

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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to The-Irish-Clover [2012-06-02 19:08:27 +0000 UTC]

yes they did

glad ya liekd it many tanks

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