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midnathething [2012-06-08 00:57:07 +0000 UTC]
great ending for a great story!
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LilyLupine64 [2012-06-05 01:04:48 +0000 UTC]
Oh man, this was such a beautiful story, and this beautiful ending fits it perfectly. I really liked the way you seemed to take a step back (or should I say, forward?) and look at the overall futures of the main characters. I also loved the twist at the end, what with Simon and Bell hooking up and having a kid. I just thought that was so cute! X3 Really, though, excellent job on this story, Triforce. I can't wait to read the next story!
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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to LilyLupine64 [2012-06-05 01:06:39 +0000 UTC]
haha many tanks i showed the thief story to my mother actually and she says i should show it to my last grandfather (the last one alive on dads side in general anyway) an might get it published
tanks a ton glad ya liked
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LilyLupine64 In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-05 01:11:25 +0000 UTC]
I definitely think you should! 8D I'd read this if it were a book.
Again, it was my pleasure to read. 83
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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to LilyLupine64 [2012-06-05 02:37:35 +0000 UTC]
theirs the entire night
by the way im admitted for 3 days they just got me out of the high from the broke bottle
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LilyLupine64 In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-05 02:38:45 +0000 UTC]
Haha, true!
Well that's not too long. It's not like you're gonna be in there for weeks or months, so there's something to be kinda content about. 83
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The-Triforce-Kid In reply to LilyLupine64 [2012-06-05 02:46:26 +0000 UTC]
yeah i was in their for the entire month of febuary due to feeding problems...ill let you get to reading the new story
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Aelita15 [2012-06-03 04:56:44 +0000 UTC]
Omg I love your story...... I love the whole thing. And how you looked back at everybody's life......love it lots !!!!
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Aelita15 In reply to The-Triforce-Kid [2012-06-03 05:03:09 +0000 UTC]
I especially liked how you ended it with bell picking a baby up and asking if Simon mission was going well. I loved it a lot and it's very good lol
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horsewhisperer24 [2012-06-03 04:09:45 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeah, will you make another story? I'll read yours even for one cent!
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Wanteforever [2012-06-02 20:30:22 +0000 UTC]
Belle and the Baby the most ADORABLE part! This is the so great! You are an awesome writer
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tentaclecuddles [2012-06-02 19:46:21 +0000 UTC]
Aww. <3
That was such a sweet ending~
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