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Published: 2016-08-04 03:28:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 40019; Favourites: 969; Downloads: 76
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Me and a friend are writing a fic that has enough sadness to go around ten times over.You can find it HERE
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Katsuki: I'm sorry, Deku. I'll make it up to you.😔
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Well fuck. You broke the pieces of my heart that where left now there gone
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Uggghh my little heart was torn to shreds
Very well written fic
Would like to read the continuation
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This is so gorgeous I think I'm having an asthma attack and just got diabetes at the same time, rip my health
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For some reason I don't think the website you posted the fanfiction on is letting me comment (maybe I need to be a member...?). So here is my review/comment on the piece:
I normally don't read fanfiction revolving around non-canonical relationships, since they run the risk of making the people involved too out of character. But you know what? If Izuku and Katsuki were in a relationship, this is probably how they'd act! I'm glad you decided to age them up a bit and put this more in the future where their relationship has had time to develop. Katsuki, especially, feels really accurate in how you've portrayed him. If I had to make some criticisms it would be that you make a few typos and switch around tenses a bit, so I'd be careful about that. Also, sometimes the writing can be redundant in the terms you use. For example you use the word "boyfriend" a lot to describe Katsuki and Izuku, and I think you could use more varied descriptors. Like when you are referring to Izuku's mom, you use different ways to say "mother" as well as refer to her by her name - so I think when describing Katsuki and Izuku you could be just as varied. Also, the beginning feels a little rushed, and it felt off that some of the characters (other heroes, the villain) aren't named. But I understand why you did this, since it was more of a drama piece revolving around Katsuki and how he is feeling, and random background characters aren't as important. Other than that, you write emotion very well, and you certainly get a good sense of how everyone is thinking. I really like this look into Katsuki's psyche and I love all the details in how he reacts to the situation and some of the thought you've put into their history as part of their relationship. Really good job, overall. I'd read more.
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Thank you so much for taking the time to comment here!!! For now someone worth remembering is on hold, but I'm working on another fictions called "For Himself" Where they're even more grown up, and will have more in depth interactions later on. It's a bit angsty, but very... on point i think to how they would be. That fic is super Beta'd, so hopefully there's very VERY few typos!
You can find it here!
Forgive the first... and maybe second chapter. It was originally a one shot- but i think you'll find by the third chapter it gets really.... detailed...
archiveofourown.org/works/1099…
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No problem at all! As I said, it is rare that I read this sort of fanfiction, but yours caught my eye, so I felt that it deserved some praise.
I actually did read "For Himself" (all four chapters so far). I'd say that I have similar likes and complaints to it as "Someone Worth Remembering" (good emotion and character writing, but some typos and tense changes). I like that you take your time with this one. The interactions between Izuku and his daughter are great, as well as the family dynamics you've set up. It is quite a bit angsty and suffers occasionally from melodrama (which from a writing standpoint isn't always great, but I also kind of like the drama and angst :3)
You also make some pretty unique choices with the story. For example, the "bad sexual experience" was interesting because many writers of these sorts of fanfictions seem to make them borderline porn, so it feels a lot more creative and realistic that you decided to go with just a lackluster and unpleasant sex scene. It worked with showing how detached Izuku was feeling and fits in well with his talk with the older woman afterwards about how he feels that his deceased husband was the only one for him. It was an unexpected route to take and something that I haven't seen explored much in fiction before. So yeah, good job with that!
Admittedly, I'm not as excited to see more of "For Himself" as I am excited to see more of "Someone Worth Remembering", so I'd say I'm a bit sad to hear it's on hold. Though part of that may be because I'm a bit biased towards how you write Katsuki. But you do you. I am a bit curious to see what this whole resurrection thing is about.
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damn youre so talented! i hope to see more of your work in the future
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AHHH! THANK YOU!!! <3<3
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Oooooh I totes read your fic! Awesome! I LOVE your work btw. I also fell into the damn fandom.... I wrote a smutty oneshot on AOO, its Cherry time
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Ohhh my god, I think I may have read than one!
Thank you so much! And welcome to this crapfest of a fandom u @
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You are welcome!<3
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