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thebalefulprimal — naught but to dream
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Published: 2014-09-25 23:39:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 216; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 0
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Stars cluster at my window,Dancing mad;
They watch me lay back
Eyes closed
Trying to sleep off the pain -
Breathless, fruitless
I want naught but to dream
Of your eyes once more.
Morphine to my mind
Crystallized over hours
Watching wind swept clouds.
Weary, windswept -
Just let me lay back;
I want naught but to dream
Of your eyes once more.
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Glad you enjoyed it ~
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I revelled in that opening image of cosmic observers bearing witness to heartbreak. Such wonderful imagery really set this off for me in my mind with a clear visual and understanding. I interpreted this as a person who was rejected by someone they love or admire and in their anguish they simply want to sleep and think only of that person. Regardless of my perspective, this was a thoroughly enjoyable read.
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Your perspective is close, I will say that. And I am so glad that
the imagery came across so strong, that's wonderful to know <3
Thank you so much
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You're very welcome. 
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I want naught but to dream
Of your eyes once more.
Morphine to my mind
Sweet line
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Thank you so much!
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Your very welcome
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