Cyneless [2017-08-29 00:41:06 +0000 UTC]
You did this in five minutes? Looks like you've spent 30 minutes on this at least!
So, I found this on ProjectComment and I thought I might wanna comment on this one as I really like it!
I'm still so impressed that you did this in five minutes. Just the clouds look very detailed already and pretty realistic. They beautifully match the sky in my opinion!
Also, I really love how you drew the sun and its radiation in particular. It looks so smooth and nice, you can't really define the inner shape.
I also admire the water. If you asked me, what I enjoy most about this are water, clouds and sun. Also, just that blue colour looks so beautiful, btw. The water reflects the sun so nicely, it instantly reminds of a pool and how much I'd like to dive in and escape the heat.
What's more, the grass in the foreground adds to a feeling of depth, and I like that you varied its colour as well!
Lastly, who could have guessed, the trees. Both of them match the drawing perfectly. It makes the sun kinda stand out in the middle and at the same time fills the side spaces with interesting stuff for the viewer. The leaves are coloured in different tones of green, and because of the shading, they really transmit a feeling of depth!
I think the only little thing I would propose is to add shadows beneath the leaves on the stems. I do miss it there.
You sure would have included them if you took more time. So considering you only needed 5 minutes, I find this piece still a perfect illustration evoking only the finest summer feelings!
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LillypieCannotDraw [2017-08-29 00:27:14 +0000 UTC]
This piece is overall very well done! The bright blue sky and lively green leaves makes me feel happy, and reminds me of a summers' day. I also enjoy the strands of grass on the bottom of the piece. However, I think the piece has too much white in the sky (with the sun and the clouds) and it bothers my eyes a tad. I also think the leaves are a little out of place, I think that making the leaves actually connected to different branches and such will make the piece look a lot more natural. The right trunk I feel is more thick and slanted, which I feel contrary's the left trunk , which is pretty well done. One more comment is that the styles kind of clash. The trees look more painted while the sky is more clean and crisp, and the leaves are in a more connected fashion. But overall it is a very bright piece that really does catch your eye, great job!
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