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thecrayolakiller β€” a bard's advice

Published: 2005-02-15 04:39:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 77; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description Every bit of me is torn asunder
By this, this thing everyone seeks.
Game, toy, I think not these things
I respect it as it deserves.

I wish I had been smarter,
Listened to beckonings of a bearded bard;
But I was foolish,
And thought his advice wrong.

Stability was in his direction,
A caring I should know, as always,
I tore my future into bits
By not listening to this lesson.

Now overrun by the pain,
I can only try not to regret
That which has found it’s way to my veins;
hope that one day, I will not need to betray you.
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Comments: 6

crayonmaster [2005-02-17 22:16:53 +0000 UTC]

you tore your future to bits? was that literaly??? its a good poem otherwise. Well written keep up the good work

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thecrayolakiller In reply to crayonmaster [2005-02-17 23:27:54 +0000 UTC]

not completely, but literally, it was things i would have been better off doing, much better off

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crayonmaster In reply to thecrayolakiller [2005-02-19 01:14:21 +0000 UTC]

oh

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Debbles [2005-02-16 01:58:14 +0000 UTC]

..i dont really understand this poem.. okay, im dense, thats a given but i still dont understand it! however, its nicely written! lol

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thecrayolakiller In reply to Debbles [2005-02-17 23:29:05 +0000 UTC]

lol, thx, it's about me not listening to advice that had i listened to i would be a lot happier right now, and i'd understand some things which i don't.

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Debbles In reply to thecrayolakiller [2005-02-18 19:16:44 +0000 UTC]

..right, still doesnt explain it to totality. But im sure its good. lol.

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