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TheCuriousWriter — Bloom
Published: 2010-05-19 19:57:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 174; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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Bloom."Can young love bloom freely in this landscape?"
"I'm not sure, but reading the signs could help"
"This cold is creating quite the fuss eh?"
"Don't change the subject, go see for yourself"
"This one says:-All love is lost in these parts"
"Does that sway your opinion goldfish?"
"Goldfish I may be, but love does bloom free"
"It blooms free? Could anything in this ditch?"
"It blooms freely and without any hate"
"Spare me this sad talk. You're so full of it"
"You simply can't contemplate this secret"
"Why would I? It's not needed in this pit"
"But love is unity if I dare say,
Even you could benefit in some way,
Close your cynical mind for one moment,
Let it wash away all of life's problems".
Comments: 2
Wow! This is new. Love how you can feel the tension between the speakers, and the patience from the one explaining, or rather inquiring? It's cool, I think I need to read it a few more times, there's so much there I feel like I'm missing something... It's complex. =]
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This is so amazing!!! You are seriously very talented... 
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