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DeviantSidJV [2017-12-06 01:40:36 +0000 UTC]
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Like I say on most of our drawings, your drawing skill is not in question here.
I am not exactly sure what kind of format you were heading for when making the final product. I was expecting a more CGI-like recreation of the velociraptor like what you did for your other organisms. Instead, you displayed your work as an oil painting style. Now if it was an oil painting, that would be great, however, it feels a bit awkward comparing it with its skeletal and muscle drawings.
I must say the design choices you gave the dinosaur are really unique. First, the hooked tongue is definitely something I did not expect, but it reminds me that as much of a protobird this animal was, it was still something completely different. As for the feathers, I find it fitting as the patterns match those of hawks and other birds of prey. Specifically, this picture reminds me of a lammergeyer (bearded vulture) with its orange, black and white colors.
Of course, you never fail to impress me. Keep drawing!
--Sid
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CartoonBen [2017-12-14 04:46:11 +0000 UTC]
Nicely done. How are the invertebrates coming?
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CartoonBen In reply to TheDragonofDoom [2017-12-18 15:47:46 +0000 UTC]
Well, okay then. Just let me know, and keep up a GOOD work with the vertebrate animals!
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asari13 [2017-12-06 12:03:40 +0000 UTC]
nice
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comixqueen [2017-12-06 01:39:51 +0000 UTC]
I recommend you study the way feathers flow on birds more, as this one's feathers look raggedy and messy overall, which the larger feathers on the arms and tail looking like disparate elements.
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Timurlengia [2017-12-05 22:38:31 +0000 UTC]
One thing is inaccurate. The tail feathers should end at the end of the tail. Other than that great job!
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Saberrex In reply to Timurlengia [2017-12-06 01:06:51 +0000 UTC]
Actually, it's not. What is inaccurate is the tail's total length. It's too short. Short tails are more likely in Utahraptor given the new fossil evidence, but Volociraptor's tail was at least 1/3rd longer than what is shown here.
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WHITHNEY [2017-12-05 19:10:46 +0000 UTC]
beautiful arrangement of feathers and colors, the only thing missing and a more aerodynamic head, the rest is very good.
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