Comments: 89
LEGOmaster64 [2018-02-07 18:16:57 +0000 UTC]
This is just so...
I don't even know what the right word is.
Overall, good story.
(Even if it is a little creepy)
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OcarinaLin [2016-05-26 23:25:49 +0000 UTC]
This presents a terrifying and legit point. (Which kinda makes it more horrifying.)
... Should I be disturbed at myself for being extremely impressed? Because I am extremely impressed with this whole plot and writing.
On the flip-side, I wonder if Detective Cole ever watched the X-Files.
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Vectric [2015-04-23 00:04:04 +0000 UTC]
Disturbing, but very well written. Was definitely a unique plot. I was right into this when I read it!
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Nivryz [2015-04-22 12:14:34 +0000 UTC]
Would you mind if I made a drawing of the Puppetry Killer?
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TheEeveeWarrior In reply to Nivryz [2015-04-22 19:09:39 +0000 UTC]
Please. Dear sweet Arceus, yes. I would be honored, seriously.
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TheEeveeWarrior In reply to Nivryz [2015-04-22 19:36:21 +0000 UTC]
Just saw it. Holy hot damn. I wuvz it. *offers ALL THE HUGGUS*
\ (0w0) /
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TheEeveeWarrior In reply to Nivryz [2015-04-23 16:54:57 +0000 UTC]
Just added a link in the story's description that features your picture! Seriously, thank you so much. I never thought that I would EVER receive FanArt of something I'd written.
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Nivryz In reply to TheEeveeWarrior [2015-04-23 17:08:53 +0000 UTC]
Dude, your stories are AMAZING. I'm surprised you would think that. If my horrible creepypasta deserved it, you sure as hell do!
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theaxofwar [2015-03-17 19:30:07 +0000 UTC]
I like it... I'm slightly surprised that reading this at midnight didn't give me nightmares. Honestly I wouldn't normally think of levanny as a murdurous sickopath... What are other pokemon hiding? * looks at jiggilypuff * AHHHHH!!
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TheEeveeWarrior In reply to theaxofwar [2015-03-18 01:11:18 +0000 UTC]
Jigglypuff: *giggles cutely at ax's expression... while hiding the bloody knife behind its back. And ignoring the pile of stabby-stabbed corpses behind it.*
Sean: *sloooooooooooooooooooooooowly leans away from the jigglypuff* Oooookay then.
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space-time-parallel [2015-01-29 00:48:10 +0000 UTC]
I REALLY shouldn't have read this after Cup Noodle and before bed... Urgh...
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space-time-parallel In reply to space-time-parallel [2015-01-30 23:41:42 +0000 UTC]
Ok… I didn't really catch your reference. The blonde demon container approves? Uhhh… :3 Anyway, I have a really insulting joke. I don't know what nationality you are, but here goes.
Me: What kind of pizza did the twin towers order???
You: I dunno. What?
Me: A plane!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! (wipes tears from eyes, laughs some more) Maybe I was extending my First Amendment Privileges too far. (Laughs harder)
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TheEeveeWarrior In reply to space-time-parallel [2015-01-29 02:02:05 +0000 UTC]
Thankoo. I greatly appreciate your reading of this story.
...And now I want to know what Cup Noodle is. o3o
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space-time-parallel In reply to TheEeveeWarrior [2015-01-29 06:14:01 +0000 UTC]
YOU DON'T KNOW?!?!?! WHERE DO YOU LIVE?!?!? Anyway, it's a very high sodium, unhealthy, salty instant noodle snack.
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space-time-parallel In reply to TheEeveeWarrior [2015-01-29 23:29:29 +0000 UTC]
More so than others, I believe. About... (does basic arithmetic) 15% more daily sodium, give or take.
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TheEeveeWarrior In reply to space-time-parallel [2015-01-30 19:11:57 +0000 UTC]
Yessu. Means "human sacrifice" but is generally used in the sense of "demon container." And it is indeed from the Narutoverse.
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pokemonmanic3595 [2015-01-04 09:36:48 +0000 UTC]
I went back and re-read this, then collapsed into a weeping wreck of sobbing and mental trauma
Well done sir. Well done.
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TheEeveeWarrior In reply to pokemonmanic3595 [2015-01-04 17:17:25 +0000 UTC]
Thankoo! I'd been wondering for a while about something like this, mainly how all the transformees are usually good guys... and wondered what would happen if it was the BAD guy that started turning?
Then, I had PKE swoop in to the rescue as a result, one thing led to another, and I ended up pulling a "Devil's Advocate" and justifying the actions of "Innocent" PKE agents.
...My brain. How does it work. -3-
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pokemonmanic3595 In reply to TheEeveeWarrior [2015-01-04 21:57:49 +0000 UTC]
Well this is one of the nominees for the Top 5 Best Spinoffs of 2014, look forward to that ;3
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Among-The-Stars-3 [2014-12-06 21:50:18 +0000 UTC]
This being (I believe) the first story of yours that I've read... Wow. Just...wow.
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Nivryz [2014-12-05 16:19:27 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god, this is awesome!!
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TheEeveeWarrior In reply to Nivryz [2014-12-06 00:22:33 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad people enjoy reading my work.
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Nivryz In reply to TheEeveeWarrior [2014-12-06 00:37:19 +0000 UTC]
I love reading twisted stories~
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MegaCharmoeleonX [2014-12-02 05:32:06 +0000 UTC]
Really well done, Sean. I love NCIS/Criminal Minds sort of stuff, so the first half of the one-shot was pretty much perfect for me.
Also, while I do agree with you on the whole "Pokextinction backstory" thing, I feel like the second half of the story kind of took away the feeling you had going at the beginning. It makes me feel like this isn't quite a one-shot, but a prologue into a full-blown story about Cole. Just my opinion though.
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TheEeveeWarrior In reply to MegaCharmoeleonX [2014-12-03 07:10:33 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I did have a CSI/NCIS vibe going when I started writing this. Then the opportunity to explain PKE's perspective on the war came up... and I just couldn't resist.
Sadly, Cole will NOT be getting a full-blown story... However... Lucas has already appeared in another oneshot of mine... maybe he'll appear in more...
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MegaCharmoeleonX In reply to TheEeveeWarrior [2014-12-03 08:55:44 +0000 UTC]
Didn't necessarily mean to imply that I thought you would make a story about Cole, it's just how I perceived the second part of the one-shot. And hey, I'd be happy for more Lucas.
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Man-in-crowd-4 [2014-11-30 13:36:37 +0000 UTC]
Another terrifying insight into the mind of Sean the Eevee warrior. Yaaaaaay.
But seriously, though, it's an interesting concept. Fair play on exploring it.
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TheEeveeWarrior In reply to Man-in-crowd-4 [2014-12-01 16:44:03 +0000 UTC]
Thankoo! I had a lot of fun writing this one.
...That probably doesn't reassure you about my mental state, does it. -3-
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TammyHybrid21 [2014-11-30 07:51:48 +0000 UTC]
Is it terrible that I have to say that this was absolutely perfect... I found it quite a nice read and it really does explain some things doesn't it. I mean there are already bully Pokéumans, so what about those who're worse? A very, very nice entry to the Pokéumans world. Very apt and fitting.
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TheEeveeWarrior In reply to TammyHybrid21 [2014-12-01 16:44:40 +0000 UTC]
Exactleh. ^3^
Seriously, I really did have fun writing this. It's nice to know that people appreciate it.
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Elemental-wyvern [2014-11-30 00:04:09 +0000 UTC]
Huzzah for crazies and L.A. Noire references~!
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TheEeveeWarrior In reply to Elemental-wyvern [2014-11-30 01:03:08 +0000 UTC]
Thankoo! I actually throw in a lot of references when it comes to character names. Even my protagonists have some references behind their names. For example, Peter Cohen is a reference to Sander Cohen, the crazy artist guy from Bioshock's underwater city, Rapture.
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TheEeveeWarrior In reply to Elemental-wyvern [2014-11-30 01:24:03 +0000 UTC]
Ah. I see-
WAIT.
Wait.
You haven't played Bioshock.
You... haven't played Bioshock.
...
...
*grabs EW and carries him to the nearest GameStop* YOU. BUY GAME. NAAAAAO.
(Seriously though. Bioshock and Bioshock Infinite are two of the best games of the decade. Bioshock 2 was... not AS good as the other two, but still a good game. Still, you HAVE to play the original Bioshock at least. It is one of those games where the devs did absolutely everything right.)
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pokemonmanic3595 In reply to TheEeveeWarrior [2015-01-04 09:36:10 +0000 UTC]
(As I played BioShock Infinite, I immediately kicked Platinum off my Top 5 Games list and put it there instead ^w^)
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TheEeveeWarrior In reply to pokemonmanic3595 [2015-01-04 17:15:01 +0000 UTC]
(Bioshock Infinite: because time-paradoxes have never been so mind-breaking.)
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Elemental-wyvern In reply to TheEeveeWarrior [2014-11-30 01:28:37 +0000 UTC]
Believe me I would like to but I can't really leave the spot I'm in. *points to the orbs floating around me* I have to balance these.
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