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Published: 2018-08-23 19:16:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 2463; Favourites: 146; Downloads: 89
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The Polaris drifted slowly from the embrace of Elizabethtown's orbit. Her wounds, inflicted by the Kzinti's weapons, have been hastily repaired. Some of the internal repairs were still ongoing. But there was no time to waste, not now. What many have thought to be the war's end was merely the beginning. For the liberation of Elizabethtown galvanized Starfleet, as much as the First Fleet was since the onset. They couldn't just stop now. No, it must continue till the Kzinti could no longer pose a threat. After Bleeding Cait, the Kzinti were finally understood not just as pirates or raiders, but as a malevolent force to recon with.

The liberation of Elizabthtown saw the Polaris charge with mad fury into the frey. It was the least the ship and her crew could do for their Captain, who took it upon himself to beam down alone and start a revolution. It was, after all, his home planet, and he could finally free it from the terror of the lions of the night. The Polaris sustained battle damage but it couldn't keep her down. And now, as Starfleet, the First Fleet, the Andorian home Guard and even the Vulcan Republic Navy was assembling their forces, it wass time her to leave the liberated world. She was the last ship to do so.

"Back when I first came to Earth, it was the lights that dazzled me, you know", Metlesits said as the planet shrunk on the viewscreen, the aft sensors firmly keeping it in sight, "My world has no lights that illuminathe the night side. It was never that populated."

"But the view of the night sky must be beautiful", Nussbaum said with a small smile. He was happy for his friend, for he saw that Metlesits was finally relaxed. It wouldn't last long, that too he knew, but at least for now, the man he considered his brother was contant after a long time.

"Oh, you bet", Metlesits said, grinning, "You can see everything. Starships, comets, meteorites... Having all that light pollution on Earth was something I could never really get used to."

"Excuse me, Sirs, but we've just received an encoded Priority One message", Heimann interjected, his voice sinding apologetic for interrupting his superiors, "San Francisco has decided on the staging ground. It's Novaya Moskva."

"Any news on fleet movements, Lieutenant?" , Metlesits asked.

"Nothing official but some unusual radio chatter indicates the Andorians are coming in big numbers", the comm officer said.

"Talla's pulled it off!", Metlesits said with a feverent grin, "The Iron Triangle is striking back!"

"Your people, the others on Csepel and Frabnzstadt, and fianlly Cait...", Nussbaum said, "It's payback time."

"Payback time it is. Mr. Jiménez, set a course for Novaya Moskva, best transitional speed, "Metlesits said, his eyes aglow with an otherwordly blaze, "May the Kzinti start praying to their Fanged God... 'cause doomsday's coming!"




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CaptainQuirk5 [2018-09-21 18:54:52 +0000 UTC]

I always thought the nacelle-down design made more sense for any ship forced to make a landing planet-side for whatever reason; a hull-breech or a warp engine failure or systemic damage to life support too large for immediate repairs in space for example. Those nacelles and their support struts look sturdy enough to serve as landing pads in a pinch.

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thefirstfleet In reply to CaptainQuirk5 [2018-09-21 18:57:42 +0000 UTC]


No, not really. Back when I designed her, I simply wanted a ship with underslung nacelles. In-universe, this layout is used to "ride" on subspace currents.



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CaptainQuirk5 In reply to thefirstfleet [2018-09-21 20:48:14 +0000 UTC]

That was your original design? Cool. Then I guess you should know her limits. I'd figured the design was from one of those obscure Trek tech manuals they come up with every so often  - or at least used to come up with when i was younger; I don't keep track of them anymore.

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thefirstfleet In reply to CaptainQuirk5 [2018-09-22 05:14:19 +0000 UTC]


Yupp!


I designed the Polaris way back in 2009. The classic TOS version of course.



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CaptainQuirk5 In reply to thefirstfleet [2018-09-22 13:57:36 +0000 UTC]

Cool. You'd make an excellent architect, or engineer, or draftsman, or whatever a person who designs starships should be called.

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MirrorKhaos [2018-08-25 10:52:47 +0000 UTC]

Excellent image and text.

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thefirstfleet In reply to MirrorKhaos [2018-08-25 13:55:12 +0000 UTC]


Thank you very much!



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JS2080 [2018-08-24 17:47:24 +0000 UTC]

Cool.

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thefirstfleet In reply to JS2080 [2018-08-24 19:14:06 +0000 UTC]


Thank you!



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Seraphestus [2018-08-24 15:53:30 +0000 UTC]

Well, the Kzinti don't really take things 'seriously', meaning, like it could possibly be a threat to them unless you literally bring 'Doomsday' with you and hit them square in the face with it. Seeing as they pretty much consider other species as 'food that talks'...oh wait, that was the Tnuctipun wasn't it...my bad.

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thefirstfleet In reply to Seraphestus [2018-08-24 17:49:09 +0000 UTC]


In the Polarisverse, they are nightmare fuel predators. They attack ships, disable the engines, board them and... well, we know what usually happens when you fall into tha tiger's den...



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Seraphestus In reply to thefirstfleet [2018-08-29 15:53:38 +0000 UTC]

That sounds very much like the Kzinti I'm familiar (not personally THANKFULLY!) with!

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Traeumer1981 [2018-08-24 04:54:59 +0000 UTC]

Good one!

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thefirstfleet In reply to Traeumer1981 [2018-08-24 17:49:41 +0000 UTC]


Thank you!



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slowdog294 [2018-08-24 00:25:51 +0000 UTC]

Excellent.

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thefirstfleet In reply to slowdog294 [2018-08-24 17:49:48 +0000 UTC]


Thank you!



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slowdog294 In reply to thefirstfleet [2018-08-24 18:05:55 +0000 UTC]

Many welcomes.

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CRUMB662 [2018-08-23 23:52:53 +0000 UTC]

Pedal to the metal.  Full warp speed ahead.  

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thefirstfleet In reply to CRUMB662 [2018-08-24 17:49:54 +0000 UTC]




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bjmaxvin67 [2018-08-23 22:49:37 +0000 UTC]

Incredible artwork; I look forward to seeing the Polaris and her crew neutering and declawing these bloody Kzinti.   

I think you might find this interesting from reading about the Kzinti  on Memory Alpha Jimmy Diggs , who contributed a number of stories to both Star Trek: Deep Space Nine and Voyager (and was a friend of Larry Niven's), was a long-time proponent of the Kzinti returning to Star Trek. He made his first pitch for this in 1994, as an intern on Star Trek TNG. In the following years, he pitched ideas for Kzinti-involved stories so persistently that Brannon Braga came to refer to them as "Jimmy Diggs' Crazy Cats". Jimmy Diggs even penned a screenplay for a proposed feature length CGI-animated film entitled Star Trek: The Lions of the Night , which was to involve Captain Sulu, Uhura, Chekov, and the USS Enterprise facing a Kzinti invasion. For the purposes of pitching this project, Diggs commissioned concept art by Court Jones    , including a design for a Kzinti cruiser called the Dark Stalker  .  The project had the support of  George Takei, Nichelle Nichols, D.C Fontana and Majel Barrett-Roddenberry, but ultimately failed to capture the interest of Paramount Pictures. 

Diggs later adapted a story idea for Star Trek Enterpise entitled "Kilkenny Cats" but , as we all know the series was ultimately cancelled after its fourth season,it would of been interesting to see a CGI rendition of the Kzinti similar to the Gorn and the Tholians. 


 

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thefirstfleet In reply to bjmaxvin67 [2018-08-24 17:50:21 +0000 UTC]


I really need to build this ship. The flying saucer thing from TAS just doesn't cut it, does it?



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bjmaxvin67 In reply to thefirstfleet [2018-08-25 00:56:01 +0000 UTC]

Yes I would love to see you build this vessel because the flying saucer does not cut it.     But according to Memory Prime the Kzinti police vessel   which was utilized by the Kzinti in the animated Star trek series were the only type of military craft the Kzinti were allowed to possess.Following the Earth-Kzin Wars and in accordance to the Treaty of Sirius; that being said there are a number of other Kzinti ship designs that were used from the old Starfleet Battles role-play game. Here is a few from this site steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles… for example         these are just a few from this site and many other designs from various other sites  .    

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leatherslut1 [2018-08-23 22:30:56 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic story, I love moments like this when friends and one time enemies join forces against a common foe

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thefirstfleet In reply to leatherslut1 [2018-08-24 17:50:33 +0000 UTC]


Thank you very much!



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Phenometron [2018-08-23 20:45:53 +0000 UTC]

Go, Polaris!

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thefirstfleet In reply to Phenometron [2018-08-24 17:53:07 +0000 UTC]


Yeah



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Colourbrand [2018-08-23 20:27:27 +0000 UTC]

"May the Kzinti start praying to their Fanged God... 'cause doomsday's coming!"


YEAH BABY!!!

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thefirstfleet In reply to Colourbrand [2018-08-23 20:42:34 +0000 UTC]


When Metlesits means business... he means f**n' business!



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Colourbrand In reply to thefirstfleet [2018-08-24 06:43:32 +0000 UTC]

YEAH!! I get that from the various transcripts of the Polaris' adventures...

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