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Published: 2007-09-12 07:29:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1429; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 16
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This is the finished, coloured version. Shoujo Kakumei Utena fanart, with Touga and Saionji lounging about on a bike.

Things I'm happy with:
Touga's hands, and his hair.
The clothes aren't too bad.
The expression on Saionji's face. (Aww, he's blushing!)

Things I'm less than happy with:
Saionji's hair.
The horrid fake background.
The shiny metal bike.

Also, Saionji's trousers ought to be green, and the piping on the jacket should be red. Bah. I'll go back and fix it sometime that's not now.

Overall, though, I'm glad it's finished. Constructive criticism is welcome.
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Comments: 8

KoriMichele [2009-06-16 19:25:16 +0000 UTC]

This is so cool!

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0kagi0 [2009-05-16 14:53:12 +0000 UTC]

wow, that's great. love their faces...

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MaliciousMisery [2007-09-19 17:58:20 +0000 UTC]

oolala I love this you did them so well <333333 I like them best as children particularly Saionji since he wasn't so mean :3. I only drew these two together once and of course as their young selves.

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Maarika [2007-09-15 13:23:22 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, Saionji came out adorable I don't think there's anything wrong with his hair, it looks great to me. And the smirking Touga is pricelss. *__*

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Harlequitmix [2007-09-14 16:08:57 +0000 UTC]

hey, great job!

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KinjiraretaNingyou [2007-09-12 21:39:10 +0000 UTC]

Touga, you're oozing sex again! hmm...Saionji's head looks maybe a little bigger than Touga's...but i like Touga's expression alnd the pose.

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Laguzinthelake [2007-09-12 19:12:06 +0000 UTC]

in colour it looks so adoreable *.*

I really love your style!

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Before-I-Sleep [2007-09-12 07:55:03 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work, I love this pairing!!!

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