Comments: 27
rioluanthro [2016-03-02 22:14:08 +0000 UTC]
Amazing!
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Honey-Bunn-Boi [2013-07-29 04:01:18 +0000 UTC]
Wow this is super awesome!!
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Honey-Bunn-Boi In reply to TheLucarioKid [2013-07-30 00:06:16 +0000 UTC]
NP I love your writing ^^ I look forward to reading the rest ^^
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Peluchyteddy [2012-04-29 05:58:06 +0000 UTC]
Awesome story! Its very interesting!
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XGBlue [2011-08-12 17:42:00 +0000 UTC]
"How do you know how to speak like a him" Add a hyphen so it's "a-him" and we've got a Mario Treecko! XD
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Watchcat264 [2011-06-24 13:54:38 +0000 UTC]
i liked it, but i cant help but feel you rushed the start of it a little... its still good
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Watchcat264 In reply to TheLucarioKid [2011-07-02 16:17:20 +0000 UTC]
im more interested in your other one actually...
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TheLucarioKid In reply to Watchcat264 [2011-07-02 21:16:10 +0000 UTC]
I don't blame you, I wrote this like six months ago, so pretty much when I began writing. I've learned a few skills since then that have made my newer story much better. I feel like I'm doing a pretty good job with FRTP.
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TheLucarioKid In reply to Watchcat264 [2011-07-03 18:56:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I'm always happy to see that someone else enjoys reading my stories. ^^
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Watchcat264 In reply to TheLucarioKid [2011-07-04 00:16:39 +0000 UTC]
now stop talking to me and keep up the good work!
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TheLucarioKid In reply to Watchcat264 [2011-07-04 01:50:27 +0000 UTC]
It's funny that you say that, because I'm working on part six right now! I hope ya like it. It should be done in about two hours. Maybe...
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Ripplestar4 [2011-06-24 05:45:06 +0000 UTC]
Very interesting! I like how you made mew wise and all-knowing instead of innocent and cute like everyone else does. I noticed a capitalization error and something else, but the story was too intriuging that I can't remember what it was. I do have 1 quick question, what region does this take place in? I was just wondering. Thanks for another great intro and I can't wait to see what happens in part two!
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TheLucarioKid In reply to Ripplestar4 [2011-06-26 05:03:22 +0000 UTC]
The region where Nathan is transformed is in Shinnoh. But he was born and raised in the Johto region along with the rest of his family, which is where the rest of the story takes place.
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TheLucarioKid In reply to Ripplestar4 [2011-06-26 18:12:00 +0000 UTC]
No problem, I should have pointed that out earlier. But I did make this a while ago. I know it's not my best work.
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corbynprower [2011-06-24 04:48:09 +0000 UTC]
hehe nice start
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TheLucarioKid In reply to corbynprower [2011-06-24 04:50:46 +0000 UTC]
I actually finished it a while ago. It was from when I first got hooked into Tf's.
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