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Songdogx [2012-02-16 13:36:07 +0000 UTC]
Quick question, how tall are each of the characters?
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Songdogx In reply to TheMushroomancer [2012-02-17 00:53:34 +0000 UTC]
Oh, you mean it's braided. Yes I knew about that. And I knew about the mythical dog (except your Cusith isn't green or glowing)
I thought you were trying to say he had a plated tail, like an armor tail or something.
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OkalianDreamsAreDead [2011-10-10 22:38:07 +0000 UTC]
I had a question about Cu Sith's eyes - I can tell that they're green, but I can't tell what his pupil looks like on the reference.
Can you describe it to me? Is it swirly?
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Chainroundmyneck [2011-06-14 11:36:46 +0000 UTC]
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Too much text D.
Nice picture though .D
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Affectionate-Zombie [2011-06-02 00:57:02 +0000 UTC]
I really like your characters and how you drew them! Ima deffinetely have him meet pan sometime
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TheMushroomancer In reply to Affectionate-Zombie [2011-06-02 01:13:12 +0000 UTC]
YAY! Thankyou, I do love cameo appearences, and your Pan has a really unusual power, If we end up fighting I'll be having a lot of fun I reckon!
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WarriorSandstorm [2011-04-21 00:28:39 +0000 UTC]
Haha, what an interesting character! They all have a awesome personality. Good luck in CC ^^.
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Me-and-Moxxi [2011-04-20 23:01:18 +0000 UTC]
looks like an irish wolf hound
did you know you have to have their heights now?
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Mongrelistic [2011-04-20 10:17:23 +0000 UTC]
Ha ha ha ha, you have no idea how close we came to having our characters with the same name. I was gonna name my Conall Cu Sith(for yay of Celtic Lore!) but decided not to. Love the style you drew him in and he seems pretty spiffy!
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Me-and-Moxxi [2011-04-20 02:03:31 +0000 UTC]
maybe you should swap how you write about them like in order of apperance, and maybe even say/specify which one like: Shotgun (fox on the left) type kinda thing....
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Shinkoryu14 [2011-04-19 20:53:35 +0000 UTC]
Alright, here's our review.
Buckshot's power is a bit concerning. You say he can sense everything within a kilometer, AND the intentions of those things. This essentially makes him impossible to sneak up on, surprise, or fool. We're going to have to ask you to put some serious restrictions on this power, because at the moment it's too extreme.
Also, being afraid of fire is not really a weakness, it's a personality trait. Keep in mind this is an abandoned city, and we don't allow fire-using as a power. The only logistically way that a fire could even start would be if there were a lightening storm that happened to set one, and the odds of that are very low. You'll need to move that to personality traits and give Buckshot an additional weakness to balance him out.
As for Cu Sith, the fact that he is mentally troubled and unable to read others aren't really weaknesses either; they are also personality traits. You have to keep in mind that when we say "weakness" we mean a problem that impedes the dog's ability to fight and creates a physical issue their opponent can exploit. This is often confused with, but not the same as, flaws in their personality. You'll need to move the aforementioned traits to personality and give Cu Sith two additional weaknesses in order for him to be balanced.
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Shinkoryu14 In reply to TheMushroomancer [2011-04-20 11:58:53 +0000 UTC]
We're not really sure how Cu Sith's new weakness makes any sense. Being large would make it relatively easy to defend against small opponents; they'd be hard pressed to reach up and attack anything higher than his legs. Also, you still list getting headaches from overusing the seventh sense as a weakness for Buckshot. The way you describe it now (which is perfect to enter him by the way) it sounds more like he's just really observant than an actual power. If you could modify these things, we can accept your ref.
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Shinkoryu14 In reply to TheMushroomancer [2011-04-20 12:06:59 +0000 UTC]
What you have written already is fine, it's nice and descriptive and explains his power well. You just need to change the old limitation on the power he no longer has to another weakness.
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Shinkoryu14 In reply to TheMushroomancer [2011-04-20 22:11:13 +0000 UTC]
Alright, you're good to go. Best of luck with your audition.
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Shinkoryu14 [2011-04-19 14:38:50 +0000 UTC]
We'll review your reference and get back to you as soon as possible.
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