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~Sawsbuck’s POV~

A flurry of snow erupted from the floor in a single white wave as I collapsed. Hooves unable to support my massive weight as the opposing Nidoqueen letting out a victorious roar at my defeat before it wandered off. Jolts of paralysing pain cramping up all my muscles from the body slam attack that had won her the battle.

I wail mournfully, though i know nobody will reply, I’ve been without a herd for weeks… T-the snow it’s… so cold. A slight peak of sunlight graces through the trees and yet it doesn’t feel very warm compared to the surrounding sea of frozen water droplets. Deep breaths, long deep breaths, I can’t fall asleep now, if I faint I’m done for.

The soft crunching of the snow catches my attention, I’d perk my ears if I could but… the paralysis is stopping any movement other than - luckily - the heaving of my chest as I breath. Soft white puffs, like sweet little clouds, drift away from my muzzle. I force open my eyes, the lids stinging as they’re pushed against the will of my status condition.

A figure. It’s tall and…. Silhouetted out. B-but the sun it… it shines so bright behind them. A-an… an angel. Sweet golden hair and crystal blue eyes slowly bleeding into view as whomever it is gets closer with slow and cautious steps.
Strange…. They look like a gardevoir but… they speak a language I can’t understand. My maw opens but only a strangled mournful moan can escape whilst it reaches for my muzzle. A single touch is enough to send shivers across my pelt, but not the cold kind…

Their hand it’s…. It’s so warm. All tension of the paralysis fades slowly as my muscles can finally ease, haunches sinking into the snow further but the cold no longer an issue. They brush their hand slowly up my forehead, down between my ears, and gently stroke at my patchy ruffled fur.

O-ow it’s… trying to drag me by my leg. It’s not strong enough, must be a low level.

It’s speaking again, arceus I wish i knew what it was trying to say, it looks so concerned. W-why is it crying, no please don’t, please don’t get upset. I want… to move, i just can’t. Everything tenses up again as another jolt from the paralysis surges through my veins.
What’s that? A berry maybe? No, it’s shiny, metallic like a voltorb but without the face and considerably smaller.

Oh wait… i know what that is. Mother had told me about these, humans would use them to capture us and…. So that’s a human? She’s… so nice. Mother said they were creepy and horrible. I can’t believe this is a human. She’s nudging the ball toward me. I think…


I think i should try to touch it…


[you caught Sawsbuck!]
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Comments: 18

Enderquus [2017-08-05 05:11:21 +0000 UTC]

Was the nidoqueen owned by a trainer? 'Cause at least with wild ones, poison is more likely that paralyzation.

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TheNervousMedic In reply to Enderquus [2017-08-05 11:13:17 +0000 UTC]

Wild Nidoqueen ^.^
Nidoqueen learns Body slam - which has a chance at paralyzing

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Enderquus In reply to TheNervousMedic [2017-08-05 11:56:55 +0000 UTC]

Ooohh yeaahh. I'd forgotten it could do that. It has been so very long since I've seen it happen.

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TheNervousMedic In reply to Enderquus [2017-08-05 12:08:24 +0000 UTC]

Ikr? XD

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bioslayer1600 [2017-07-29 23:18:04 +0000 UTC]

The two mistakes I can see in the story are:
"I can’t fell asleep now" which should probably be "I can’t fall asleep now"
and "humans would sue them to capture us" which should probably be "humans would use them to capture us"
just so that you can fix them

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TheNervousMedic In reply to bioslayer1600 [2017-07-30 09:35:21 +0000 UTC]

Whoopsy-daisy! ^.^ haha. Thanks for pointing them out! I'll fix 'em up.

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CSOX [2017-07-29 21:39:40 +0000 UTC]

OOoooo shit lookat this.... LOOKATTHIS!!!


Brilliant works ma dude~

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TheNervousMedic In reply to CSOX [2017-07-29 22:04:02 +0000 UTC]

Hahahah! XD it's not THAT good.
first time trying to draw Sawsbuck properly >.< turned out alot better than I expected.

'Been a long time since we had a good chat ^.^ How've you been?

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CSOX In reply to TheNervousMedic [2017-07-29 22:09:00 +0000 UTC]

Bruh i luv it dun underrate just appreciate

Been good brosky, just been hangin about tryin to figure out school stuffs, u?

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TheNervousMedic In reply to CSOX [2017-07-29 22:26:09 +0000 UTC]

"dun underrate just appreciate" Hahah, words to live by! ^.^

Oh god I know that feeling. I just left college, i need to get a job real soon >.< been doing little jobs here and there looking after peoples pets.
I hope you have better luck with your education than I did. XD

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CSOX In reply to TheNervousMedic [2017-07-29 22:31:55 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha yea cant go wrong with being a doctor wish us luck!

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TheNervousMedic In reply to CSOX [2017-07-29 22:34:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh wowie! you're going to try being a doctor?
Dude that's amazing! ^.^ Yeah, best of luck to you! :3

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CSOX In reply to TheNervousMedic [2017-07-29 22:36:50 +0000 UTC]

Yee a skin doctor~

Thanks man! U too!

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Novatonix [2017-07-29 21:29:11 +0000 UTC]

ahh love it X3

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TheNervousMedic In reply to Novatonix [2017-07-29 21:35:08 +0000 UTC]

Thamkies ^///^

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HopelessRomantic1997 [2017-07-29 21:05:38 +0000 UTC]

Great job on the pic and little story ^^

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TheNervousMedic In reply to HopelessRomantic1997 [2017-07-29 21:07:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^.^

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HopelessRomantic1997 In reply to TheNervousMedic [2017-07-29 21:17:57 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome, anytime ^^

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