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Published: 2012-11-01 21:19:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 707; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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This is my 2nd attempt of doing people photography, so don't be to hard, but I'm looking forward to get some nice cirtique.I did this shoot with my little cousin, it was her 1st shooting
So there we are, two total noobs ^^ A few more pics will follow
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I'm very impressed, as a beginner in portrait and people shots, you're very good. I love the warm colors, and her outfit fits well with her surroundings. The image is sharp, and clear. My suggestion would be to add a bit more contrast, or intensity to the image. (Only slightly.) Her pose is good, but I'd like to her hand a little better. (The one under the leaves) I think it would add more focus to the subject if the photo was taken at a slightly lower angle. Lastly, maybe make the text on the image, smaller. That way it doesn't distract from the girl in the photo. (:
Overall, it's a great image. Very dreamy and sweet, and the model is very doll-like and beautiful. Keep up the great work!
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Wow, for a beginner in portrait photography this really is wonderful. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c… " width="20" height="20" alt="
Love the framing, no chopped off legs, arms, etc! Also love how you've included a nice amount of background too, though not too much to distract the viewer from the model. I also love how she has a leaf balancing on the end of her right boot. (Not sure if this was intentional?) but either way it gives you a sense of movement that she's kind of kicking her legs at the leaves! It also provides a "Oh!" moment if you didn't notice it straight away at first e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thanks a lot for the input
I can't express how much such an critique means to me and how much I can learn from it ... So thanks...
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You're very welcome, happy to help
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