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TheRavenGirl95 — Popular!Gold! X Shy!Reader! - His smile

Published: 2013-08-18 21:08:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 23876; Favourites: 309; Downloads: 5
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Description Today was taking forever. I just wanted it to end. Everyone had forgotten about me. Well all but one guy. Gold Heart. He was a guy from my class and he never knew when to quit but he always did make me feel better. He annoyed the hell out of me but without him I’d be lonely.

Today I was in the park drawing some of the pokémon from the daycare center at the bottom of the hill. There was a tree on the hill over looking it and I was leaned against it as I drew the pokémon.

“Whatcha doing?” a voice asks. I jumped to look up to see the raven haired and golden eyed man in front of me. I held my sketch book to my chest. “Aww, come on, (Name),” he said. “Don’t be like that. Let me see. Let me see. Please?” I ended up giving up and then showed him. “Ha. I knew you were drawing the Daycare. You know you can get closer right?”

“None of my pokémon are there. So I can’t,” I said lowly. I was rather shy and never spoke up that much but Gold made me speak and made time for me. I mean he was a popular guy. He did sports and was pretty smart, though he hid that a lot. You wouldn’t think it because he goofed off and then acted like an idiot but if you looked at his grades, you’d see he was really smart. I knew this because I sat next to him in class.

Gold took my hand and lead me down to the daycare. We soon saw the daycare people and the older man said, “Aww, there you are, Gold. We need some help now.”

“Okay, Gramps,” Gold said. “Wanna help, (Name)? Then you can draw as much as you want.”

“Alright,” I said.

“Alright then. I need you and your  friend to feed the baby pokémon and play a little to tire them out,” Gold’s grandfather said.

Gold soon took me over to a white haired man with forest green colored eyes. Almost like forest green. I’d never seen this man before. “Oh, (Name), this is Mark. Mark, this is (Name). He’s in a different class than us but goes to our school and in our grade.”

He smiled at me and said, “Nice to meet you, (Name). Like Gold said, I’m Marcus but you can call me Mark.”

“Nice to meet you, Mark,” I said lowly. “I’m (Name).”  He smiled at me. Mark was really nice. Not like most people at school who just looked at you and then left.

Gold handed me a (favorite baby pokémon) and then it smiled up at me. It made me happy to see that. My parents hadn’t let me get a starter and made me work on the ranch so I never did see many pokémon since we were just an orchid ranch.

“(Name)?” Gold asks. “I’ve never seen you smile. I like it. You know that (favorite baby pokémon) doesn’t have a trainer and (he or she) seem to like you. Do you have an opening on your team?”

“Yeah. Six slots,” I said.

“You don’t have a team?” Mark asks.

“No, my parents never let me around pokémon because I had to work on the orchard ranch,” I said.

Gold smiled and then took my hand and put something in it. “There.” I looked and it was a pokéball. I then looked at Gold and he smiled. “(He or She) can be yours. (He or She) has had a hard time with finding a trainer and since (he or she) likes you, you can be (his or her) trainer. How does that sound?”

“G-Gold?” I asked. He smiled and then kissed my forehead. I stood strait up and my eyes widened. “G-G-Gold?” He smiled and then left.  

“You do know that he really like you, right?” Mark asks. I blushed. “I can see why. You’re very cute. Your shyness is as well.” He smiled.

“You think so?” I asked with a blush on my face.

“I do,” he says.

After Mark’s little pep talk I took (Favorite baby pokémon) to Gold and I saw him singing to some baby pokémon to put them to sleep. He was so gentle and so sweet. This really was a different side to him that I never knew about. It was so admirable of how great he was with them.

After they were asleep Gold came over to me. “So then (Name) they’re all asleep what do you think about this place now and you can draw all you want now.”

“Thank you and I really like it here. I’m envious that you spend a lot of time here,” I said.

“Well you can always come back here. You’re always welcome here,” he said with a smile. That goofy, goofy smile of his. It almost seemed like he was always smiling. He was always happy but this smile was different from his usual one. Like it was only mine.

“T-Thank you, Gold,” I said. I could feel my face burning. This blush must have been big.

He smiled and then asks, “What was your favorite thing here?”

“You actually. Your smile,” I said looking up in his golden eyes. He looked shocked and then blushed lightly.

He got closer and then kissed my lips softly. He put his hand on the back of my head to deepen it and then I held on his shoulders as he held my waist with his other hand. I melted into the kiss and then he licked the bottom of my lip and I opened up happily. He was shy about it but soon played with my tongue. I felt as though my stomach was a meadow and the Butterfree were on the flowers but then all at one they started to flutter around and went crazy.

We pulled back and I stared at him with a few tears in my eyes. He smiled and wiped my eyes. “(Name), I really like you,” he says. “I’d love it if you could come here more often after school.”

I smiled. “I’d like that but you have to promise to smile.”

He smiled. “Anything,” he says.
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A few weeks later I was under the same tree looking over the day care but this time I was drawing Gold and his smile. We soon went out and I went from the most unpopular girl to popular but I didn’t pay attention because I stayed with Gold most of the time.

I had gotten the picture done and soon I heard a laugh. “Aww, (Name),” Gold said and then hugged me. “Thank you but why?”

“Your smile,” I said. “It’s addicting.”

“Like this?” he smiled. I nodded and he kissed me again.

Darn him and his cuteness. He could get anything with those big gold eyes of his.
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Comments: 69

Redluver [2017-05-02 18:53:34 +0000 UTC]

I got a frecking baby popplio!       

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LucerZoroark [2017-02-07 05:38:24 +0000 UTC]

So adorable! Shiny Baby Zorua and I'm keeping it forever! Great work on this, I really admire your work!

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PietroAndree [2016-12-26 17:14:11 +0000 UTC]

Baby Charmander... Gold I f★cking l♥ve you so much. TvT

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Shinwa-Tsuki [2016-11-04 03:10:49 +0000 UTC]

So cute!

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TotallyNotAWeaboo [2016-08-17 00:58:44 +0000 UTC]

 GOLD IS THE BEST HE GAVE ME A BABY ZORUA!!!!                          

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Hoennisbest In reply to TotallyNotAWeaboo [2017-02-09 08:17:31 +0000 UTC]

GOLD GAVE A RIOLU                  
   

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hehehihi2023 [2016-08-16 02:36:17 +0000 UTC]

Baby Deerling. <3    Spring of course. X3

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Jaciedarkandcakie [2016-08-08 20:13:33 +0000 UTC]

I got a baby fennikin <3 yay ^w^

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creppystuuf4ever [2016-03-18 23:42:35 +0000 UTC]

RIOLU ALL THE WAY!                        

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sptvn In reply to creppystuuf4ever [2016-07-17 10:42:14 +0000 UTC]

Holy shit! Same! I was just about to say that!

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creppystuuf4ever In reply to sptvn [2016-07-22 02:36:37 +0000 UTC]

twinsies

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Celelo [2016-01-23 06:52:19 +0000 UTC]

This is my fanfiction
You just wrote my life story
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Aww Gold's singing, I actually like singing and want to go to Julliard so that was great!




TODAY A BABY EEVEE PICHU WAS BORN

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VixieBlitz [2016-01-08 12:09:21 +0000 UTC]

:reads the second line: hey I'm always in the park drawing pokemon in real life lol

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WitheredToyBonnie65 [2015-08-17 05:09:05 +0000 UTC]

BABY EVE! YUS! Cute story!

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TheAkariPlayz In reply to WitheredToyBonnie65 [2016-10-13 23:27:00 +0000 UTC]

OMG ME TO

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VixieBlitz In reply to WitheredToyBonnie65 [2016-01-08 12:21:47 +0000 UTC]

I got a baby Vulpix its so cute eee

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LPSHusky [2015-07-20 01:20:31 +0000 UTC]

Baby Eevee <3
 
Cute story

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Firefox13Gaming In reply to LPSHusky [2015-08-03 04:23:34 +0000 UTC]

Eevees all the way! 

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LPSHusky In reply to Firefox13Gaming [2015-08-03 13:57:25 +0000 UTC]

Yeah!!
         

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Firefox13Gaming In reply to LPSHusky [2015-08-03 20:55:46 +0000 UTC]

Now all we need is an army of Eevees and I can finally take over Johto!
 
Erm... we can finally take over... I meant we... 

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LPSHusky In reply to Firefox13Gaming [2015-08-03 20:59:10 +0000 UTC]

Can't take over without me! >:3

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Firefox13Gaming In reply to LPSHusky [2015-08-04 01:17:21 +0000 UTC]

Okay okay I won't... But that Pillow in the corner makes no promises

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Kittyiscrazy [2015-07-18 13:19:51 +0000 UTC]

Aww it's a really cute story

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Lolhate123 [2015-06-19 14:32:48 +0000 UTC]

THATS SO CUTE!!!

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SayEeda19 [2015-05-16 20:59:51 +0000 UTC]

wouldn`t it be so ironic if some one popular and was rlly confident read this as a shy reader XDD

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Dragonfire4717 [2015-01-18 22:18:51 +0000 UTC]

This story is my favorite !!!

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Jessleia [2014-11-01 19:33:08 +0000 UTC]

OMG ITS A BABY MUDKIP YAY 

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Spiria7634 In reply to Jessleia [2015-01-16 07:24:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm with you. I totally love Mudkip!!!    

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Vamp104 [2014-10-03 05:43:02 +0000 UTC]

Pikachu is my favourite Pokémon they're just so cute!

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miny-mina [2014-07-25 00:13:49 +0000 UTC]

AWWWWWWWWWW

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Shadowdpokemon [2014-03-25 07:05:43 +0000 UTC]

Baby male cyaindaquil .-.(my starter for soul silverXD)

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PokeKirby87 [2014-02-15 21:28:59 +0000 UTC]

And I love to draw... Cartoons. Pokemon, Kirby and the like.

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PokeKirby87 [2014-02-15 21:27:28 +0000 UTC]

I love fire types but for some reason I put in a baby female Pichu. I guess I love electric types too. And dragon and legendaries. XD

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Thegrinchgirl101 In reply to PokeKirby87 [2014-08-21 05:00:57 +0000 UTC]

OMG! I love fire types too! But I choose a water type for my OC, a water type trainer.

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pokewolfgirl192 [2014-02-09 01:11:14 +0000 UTC]

It's so cute!

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FloraTheSkeleton [2014-01-07 17:47:10 +0000 UTC]

so so so cute

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MariHadALittleLambo [2014-01-02 05:24:24 +0000 UTC]

This is so sweet I feel like I'm gonna get diabetes from reading it XD

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kyraoticinsanity [2013-12-25 19:36:54 +0000 UTC]

D'aaawwwwh~ This was really adorably well written

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MomijiSohmaumbreon [2013-12-11 06:34:21 +0000 UTC]

T-this is soooo KAWAII !! <3

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CupcakeQueen2423 [2013-12-07 23:54:38 +0000 UTC]

OMG Raven you are so amazing at writing! You get cupcakes for being awesome.     

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TheRavenGirl95 In reply to CupcakeQueen2423 [2013-12-08 02:46:43 +0000 UTC]

aww thank you for you too

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Vanitasluver123 [2013-11-10 02:10:09 +0000 UTC]

Nawww, I haven't watched or played pokemon in AGES! I'm so glad I stumbled apon this well done, it's adorable  

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shadowninja89k [2013-10-30 08:01:35 +0000 UTC]

love it  

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Luna-Waters [2013-10-01 00:46:27 +0000 UTC]

that was cute~   

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Jojo-korea [2013-09-22 10:16:01 +0000 UTC]

The last paragraph is pretty funny but overall the story is adorable!

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Jojo-korea In reply to Jojo-korea [2013-09-22 10:16:34 +0000 UTC]

*dies of happiness*

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sammywich [2013-09-10 01:27:48 +0000 UTC]

There is only one word to describe this story:
EpicAmazingAndTheBestEver
It's a real word

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TheRavenGirl95 In reply to sammywich [2013-09-10 17:10:34 +0000 UTC]

aww thank you so much

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mrx3419 [2013-09-06 23:14:14 +0000 UTC]

*Dies*

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SabrinaXKyoya [2013-08-22 01:56:11 +0000 UTC]

i loves it! its amazing!

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