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TheseKrimzonFlames — The Melody
Published: 2011-03-31 20:32:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 1240; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 16
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Description Every day we...struggle to find ourselves,
Struggle to find our faith,
Struggle with learning to live with,
Pain that has such a bitter taste
Every night we...relive the day,
The ones that came before,
Thinking about the future,
And what's in store
And...then...we
Fall asleep,
And then we dream,
Wondering just who...

We will one day be

On...our...knees...
Living with love, living with laughter,
Living every day, that's all that matters!
On...our...knees...
If we open our hearts, then we will see,
The rhythm of our lives, the melody

Every day we...reach out our hands,
To someone who is in need of it,
Someone who is a puzzle,
And the pieces just don't fit
Every night we...remember all the ones we meet,
Remember all the songs we sing,
Remember the ones that we love,
And how to us, they mean everything
And...then...we
Fall asleep,
And then we dream,
Wondering just who...

We will one day be

On...our...knees...
Living with love, living with laughter,
Living every day, that's all that matters!
On...our...knees...
If we open our hearts, then we will see,
The rhythm of our lives, the melody

Everyone lives with the sorrow of ages,
Everyone feels so frustrated,
And everyone grieves...
Everyone loses their illusions,
Everyone lives in confusion,
And everyone bleeds...

And everyone dreams...

Wondering just who...

They could one day be!

On...our...knees...
Living with love, living with laughter,
Living every day, that's all that matters!
On...our...knees...
If we open our hearts, then we will see,
The rhythm of our lives, the melody!
On...our...knees...
Everyone lives with their own shame,
Everyone has a share of the blame
On...our...knees...
Living with love, living with laughter,
And everyone has to see that everyone matters!
On...our...knees...
If we open our hearts, then we will see,
The rhythm of our lives, the melody...

jlp March 31, 2011
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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to ??? [2013-07-19 19:46:37 +0000 UTC]

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PTGreat [2011-12-08 18:07:41 +0000 UTC]

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to PTGreat [2011-12-10 04:51:24 +0000 UTC]

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Argentum-Silva [2011-08-22 20:32:24 +0000 UTC]

Shoot, you definitely beat me in writing experience. We all need to listen a little more.

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to Argentum-Silva [2011-09-15 20:32:36 +0000 UTC]

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Argentum-Silva In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2011-09-16 04:04:09 +0000 UTC]

I can't look at that emote for too long... I just keep waiting for its head to fall off...

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to Argentum-Silva [2011-10-03 22:12:11 +0000 UTC]

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artist-inspired-66 [2011-08-12 22:42:23 +0000 UTC]

I like it... but I think it could be more fitting if it was called On Our Knees instead... but I do like it!

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to artist-inspired-66 [2011-08-13 00:08:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

The point of the piece wasn't our being on our knees, but listening to the rhythm of life.

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artist-inspired-66 In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2011-08-13 03:19:16 +0000 UTC]

oh ya, that makes sense I get it now.

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Wolfesnorfus101223 [2011-08-12 21:27:04 +0000 UTC]

I agree

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to Wolfesnorfus101223 [2011-08-13 00:08:55 +0000 UTC]

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Wolfesnorfus101223 In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2011-08-18 23:18:19 +0000 UTC]

Danka!

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Dragongirl19 [2011-06-08 06:06:23 +0000 UTC]

This one actually made me stop crying. I want to fav every single poem. They're all beautiful, wonderful, and powerful!

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to Dragongirl19 [2011-06-08 21:40:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Dragongirl19 In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2011-06-08 22:58:15 +0000 UTC]

!

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The-Theory-Liz [2011-04-16 17:05:17 +0000 UTC]

Hello again this piece is featured in my journal: [link]

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to The-Theory-Liz [2011-04-16 20:55:48 +0000 UTC]

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The-Theory-Liz In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2011-04-16 21:20:43 +0000 UTC]

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The-Theory-Liz [2011-04-15 18:59:39 +0000 UTC]

WOW!

That is really powerful and moving, well written. Amazing. It is so very, very true and words are so powerful.

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to The-Theory-Liz [2011-04-15 19:49:38 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you.

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The-Theory-Liz In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2011-04-16 02:15:30 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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RunningBear5858 [2011-04-04 03:54:48 +0000 UTC]

Yeahhhh you got a crier right here.

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to RunningBear5858 [2011-04-04 04:37:22 +0000 UTC]

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jdepp101 [2011-04-02 14:29:39 +0000 UTC]

beyond amazing, my friend

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to jdepp101 [2011-04-04 01:36:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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jdepp101 In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2011-04-05 00:39:54 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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gold-rose [2011-04-02 07:51:29 +0000 UTC]

lovely

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to gold-rose [2011-04-04 01:37:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Permanent-Insanity [2011-04-02 04:29:21 +0000 UTC]

wow

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to Permanent-Insanity [2011-04-04 01:37:49 +0000 UTC]

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Permanent-Insanity In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2011-04-05 06:55:08 +0000 UTC]

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Elerow [2011-04-02 01:41:15 +0000 UTC]

You're amazing <3

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to Elerow [2011-04-02 01:42:16 +0000 UTC]

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stampingqueen [2011-04-01 21:49:00 +0000 UTC]

Very lovely. It is wonderful in its simplicity. As with much of what you write, it says exactly what you needed it to. It conveys such a wonderful message of reminding us to just listen. The things that we need are right there if we just open up our hearts and minds. I have always loved the idea of life as a song. I can't dance so the whole life is a dance thing used to make me feel a wee bit hopeless That is what happens when you have two left feet and trip over empty air A song always made more sense. The rhythm changes, the steady temp of the path you know will lead you home, the chorus of those moments that make you who you are. Love it.

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to stampingqueen [2011-04-02 01:47:10 +0000 UTC]

Life IS a song, it's why music is such a huge part of the human "condition",

Thank you Annette.

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Aredhel125 [2011-04-01 10:48:25 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely gorgeous and uplifting. I love it.

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to Aredhel125 [2011-04-02 01:44:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you love.

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Aredhel125 In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2011-04-02 04:53:27 +0000 UTC]

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AngeliqueRaindrops [2011-04-01 02:05:56 +0000 UTC]

This did make me tear up a bit.
This is beautiful.
So very true, & so very beautiful.

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to AngeliqueRaindrops [2011-04-01 02:07:27 +0000 UTC]

Inspiration is amazing thing.

It allows me to SHOW everyone what the world REALLY is.

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AngeliqueRaindrops In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2011-04-01 02:21:15 +0000 UTC]

This is very true. And its what makes YOU so amazing. You are able to be an inspiration to so many people by showing everyone what the world really is. You make me speechless and you amaze me....at the same time.

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to AngeliqueRaindrops [2011-04-01 02:30:22 +0000 UTC]

!!!!

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AngeliqueRaindrops In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2011-04-01 02:39:34 +0000 UTC]

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isabellaswancullen [2011-04-01 00:36:12 +0000 UTC]

This fits me so well right now. I cried reading it. This is absolutely beautiful, Jamie.

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to isabellaswancullen [2011-04-01 01:18:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you love.

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isabellaswancullen In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2011-04-01 01:21:05 +0000 UTC]

Don't thank me for telling you the truth

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to isabellaswancullen [2011-04-01 01:27:46 +0000 UTC]

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isabellaswancullen In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2011-04-01 01:32:50 +0000 UTC]

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