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TheSirKnite β Neddy- Jessica Model Sheet
Published: 2011-02-10 02:28:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 2253; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 74
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This is really good but this isn't a model sheet.
This is a turnaround
But anyway...really good :3
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ummmm O-O
your charcter is intersting but you should make her look a bit better
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She looks kind of.. stiff? And her face seems a little.. elongated, in the 3/4 view and side view.
Also, bust size is.. whew. Haha.
But if you were going for hilarity, then sure.
The colors are good. I like the shoes! XD
Oh, and the hand in the sideways view. It looks more like the inside of the hand.. than the outside, if you get what I mean.
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Hmm... Not bad. Nice character-design. Now I'd love to see her in some action-poses: Jumping around, running, a picture of her from the bottom, from the top and so on...
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the hand in the profile view is... off. I don't know how to describe what's going through my head. And the face looks forced.
Other than that, it's alright. I like the colors though! And the details to her hair and shading.
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It looks good, I like the cartoonish style and the colors, it seems like a fun character n.n
I thinks it's well proportioned in its comedy context, I like her
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IT'S CUTE!!!! 
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The stance seems casual depending on her mood she looks relaxed yet the face seems to be a little stiff see if you can loosen a little! 
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... nice work
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Can't wait to see this in action! You'll be making some sort of animation since you're using Flash? I might tweak the hand a bit on the side view, perhaps rotate it counter-clockwise a bit. I might also try some variations on the neck, at least on the side and back views. I think it looks weird mostly because it's basically a cylinder with no variation in size or thickness. Maybe it would get a bit bigger as it meets the head?
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Generally it is an ok cartoon, the shading and characterization is done well. The bold body shape is a little much and possibly a little off depending what you're going for in this peace. The size of the face is big compared to the rest of the body, but that's just part of the artist style to you work it. And lastly I must say that the bust size is a little over done but I like the shoes!!:]
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Nice job!
I only think the only problem here are the boobs, are too high.
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Well this is a kind of drawing i'm not really used to... I guess the eyes and the breast is a bit to weird for me... but for a cartoon style why not... the four positions are well coordinated though
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Her eyes are a bit intimidating. you should make them a little bit smaller. It'll take some of the edge off. Right now they make her look crazy.
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Looks better than what I can do in that program as of now (currently taking a class on it)!
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This is cool in a weird way I actually like it quite a lot
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nice un. weird but nice. is this what you wanted me to comment on? the sideways face need more of a forehead.
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my opinion? everything is perfect! becouse it's original and just awesome!
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its ok but disproportionate hands & back. just a little strange XD
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not bad
the girls boobs are off proportion but overall it really good
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everything is ok but the hand in the horizontal look not so good and the back is a little strange
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those drawings are great believe me but is really funny cause when I look at them I think of Dean from Supernatural when he was arrested , someone was taking pic of him and he said"Who looks better me or Nick Nelson" anyways this is a great draw .
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Is great . Hehe is a little strange cause when I see those girls I'm thinking of Dean from supernatural when he was arrested and someone took pictures of him, he says " who looks better me or Nick Nelson" anyways those drawings are great believe me
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nice work, the eyes got my attention right away. this would be good for a cartoon
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This is nice! You've got a really unique style. Um, critique... her chest is slightly skewed in the first panel, but otherwise I can't see anything wrong with it.
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Not bad. The face reminds me of early black and white cartoons.
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A decir verdad esta muy bueno solo que unos detalles , su cara esta muy filosa diria que le daria un mejor realimo o visualizacion si se redondea un poco pero no tan exagerado!
suerte!
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The truth is very good except that some details, his face is very sharp would say that would give a better visualization Feedb or if you round a bit but not so exaggerated!
lucky!
sorry for the comment above, I forgot you speak English lol
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Sorry for my very late critique on your piece. School and work have been brutal. Let's see...
Lower the boobs just a tad. They look like her shoulders to me. The ears could be a little bit smaller in size. Other than that mate, everything else is pretty good! Reminds me of those old "Popeye" cartoons. The olive oil character. ^_^
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this is pretty good, reminds me of something but can't think what....
i have to say, the mouth seems a little...off..., and the boobs are a bit too high, they dont quite look right. other than that though, this is good, dont get me wrong. I like the colouring style and the shoes.
is that enough for you?
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It's good. The only thing is that the boobs are kinda high for my taste but I like it you have great talent.
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I don't normally judge this kinda thing, but it's certainly original. I haven't seen a character like this, although her ears seem a little off. Other than that, great work
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sweet! the coloring is really cool! I really like it! ^u^
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Nice work! Very unique style you've got going on there. Great for a cartoon-esque project. The only negative I have would be...well...the boobs are sliiightly awkward. I think they may be placed a bit high on the character's body. Other than that--I like ^__^
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good stuff quite comical like the boobs especially !
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each pic looks like the one next to it, u captured the 3d effect*whne all added together)
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certainly an interesting and different style. the eyes kinda creep me out but whatev. and keep it up
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I had a spontaneous laugh as I've seen them. They're nice ^_^
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