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TheTinkerThinker — RotL Round 2 Part 1
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Published: 2011-07-26 14:53:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 246; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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This is an interactive flash, powerpoint style (Click the left side of the page to go back and the right side to go forward).Mature for Crypto-speak.
Round 1 for OCT.
Hunter (handsome *cough* fellow) (c) against Crypto (cyborg Lassie) (c)
Other appearances are:
D family member 'Doubt' (turbaned salesman) (c)
Trubbol 'the Blight' (poor fluffy thing in wheelchair) (c)
CL (crazy lady with the blinding colour scheme) (c)
Part 2 here: [link]
's entry can be found here [link]
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Comments: 37
In your really dark scenes, you should make sure your text bubbles are a solid color. The red color is really hard to read otherwise. It's also really difficult to read on black.
Also, there are a couple of places where it looks like you put in panels twice. Specifically "You're not phee...," and "Fetch poochie"
Lol the comic is very cool. I really like your characters, and I really like the way you handled the dark scenes. The fetch line was great :3
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Text bubbling is a little problem of mine, especially with limited time.
The panel repeating thing is because DA doesn't load flash very fast, hence sometimes the next panel isn't ready yet. Refreshing or leaving it a bit sorts that out.
Thanks!
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Ufufufuuuu, this entry format is unique. I like unique <3
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The great CL approves!
Much rejoicing is to be had!
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After seeing Hunter with the werewolf puppy thing I now want to know how he would handle babysitting a bunch of annoying kids.
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Well, assuming he didn't like them, he'd probably either lock them in a cage/room or put on his psycho smile face to scare them into noiselessness. :3
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I approve of his methods.
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If they were his own kids he might be a bit more lenient.
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I must say I loved your first few panels that were drawn in the darkness - beautifully shaded and I loved the balance. The sudden humor that appeared afterward was also a perfect contrast to the dark style it began. I always have enjoyed your juxtaposition of semi horror and cute comedy.
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Thank you so much for your kind words
I'm glad I managed to achieve the effect I was aiming for. I also hope it was understandable despite being OCT related.
How have you been?
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Thanks! How have you been doing?
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C:
You're welcome!
I've been pretty good. Super duper busy....very busy...
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Me too!
Anyway, hope to see something from you (so that Phee stays in the circuit)
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I may be able to pull something out of my hat...something short me thinks. My last entry was so long FFFF
I have an idea that I think I can pull off.
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I've actually started on a little something something. xD
I may or may not get it done, but I'll do as much as I can and post whatever I have.
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I dunno if my opponent has posted anything yet. -clueless- LOL FFFF
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No sound for about a month now.
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Wow. So maybe if I post something I could win by default. xD!
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Yep! You probably will, since he's taken down his old stuff.
DOOO EEEEEET
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I totally have like, 4 pages done already. xD
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Victory is assured! Just don't miss the deadline!
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xD! I'll post as much as I get drawn, then I'll write up a summary of whatever I don't have. xD! 8D I hope that would be enough;;
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Do you think you might possibly just put up one page first? Just to let us know you're still in?
And yes, that would be enough.
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Just did.
Good, I'll most likely have to do that hahaha
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Hmm....I wish I could change up my style of entry...like, write something or do what you do...but we aren't allowed to dooooo that! orz!
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Well, I've seen folks do that when short for time.
No one can blame you for trying, right? Just go ahead and right if you want.
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Really? Well...I'll try. xD
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love the last panel, its like they both are saying fuck XDD
can't believe Crypto fell for the ball, hunter can just win by throwing a ball off the cliffside
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Yep, they are 
I'm going with the idea that Crypto still has old programming from his 'pet' days hidden within the circuitry. Does that seem ok to you?
(I thought that that would be the reason why he still recalls his alien girl master)
Ball off cliffside would be exactly the sort of cheap thing Hunter would do, but CL would probably consider it 'boring' and veto it. So it'll have to be something else.
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I really don't like to think Crypto as a "Pet" but his master may have played that game with him. sure! I don't mind at all XDD
yeah for CL it would be more ball off the cliff with sharks at the bottem.
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So he's more of a servant/bodyguard than a pet?
Well, what have you planned for CL so far?
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yes ^^
a few ideas, hopefully I'll get my comic up before deadline as well as PCBC3
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