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Published: 2012-09-26 23:02:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 626; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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Referenced a picture for this one, needed to practice on my anatomy.Really enjoyed this one
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I think I enjoyed looking at this one as much as you enjoyed drawing it. Really neat, smooth line art, I can tell you that right now. The anatomy is all in proportion, the hands are quite detailed however remain neat.
The bottom half of the bikini, just wow. Those folds and creases just bring this image to life.
However one thing that bothered me was the face, the body screams "young person!" but the face looks a little bit aged. Perhaps there may be some unnessecary lines?
The eyes are really nice to look at, they stayed realistic whilst you gave it that little touch, your own type of flair to the drawing.
Vision - I loved looking at this image, it was quite astonishing, however the face did bother me a lot and took the center away from the drawing. 3.5
Originality - I can't exactly rate you highly on this one as you had referenced and copied the pose. However since you have added your own touches here and there I gave you a 3.
Technique - You have used shading sparingly, however when used it enhanced the art piece dramatically. The neat line art and the creases really add to this art as well. 4.5
Impact - It had quite an impact on me, however staring at it too long made me notice flaws. 4
I'd love to see more art like this from you : )
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First of all, thank you for the critique, it helped out a lot and I hope that I can improve from this!
Now that you mention it, she does look really young for her body, I should probably reference different bodies from different ages to help me out with that.
I can't really say much more, I think your rating was overall perfect and I understand why you gave me that score. I'm glad you backed it up with reasoning and I still thank you again for critiquing this; It made me happy to see someone actually critiqued this art piece and it made my day.
I really wish to do more like this, but I try to vary my artwork, I just want to expand my gallery and improve it. It doesn't take a lot of time to do these but I also have other projects. I hope to bring more in the future!
Thanks again! You have a great day!
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No problem, it was a pleasure to critique such beautiful art : )
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can you make me a how too draw people picture pweeeeez
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oh gosh~ I'm not that great at drawing people, it would be like a "how taco draws people" because my stuff is stylized~
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oh c,mon i dnt judge besides.... im worse
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well I didn't mean I wouldn't, I would just title it as "how taco draws people."
Because my art still has a hint of anime/cartoon, it isn't entirely realism~
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